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Posted: 13 years ago
#71
Nice one..! Do pm me plzz when updated
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Posted: 13 years ago
#72
wow im so tired watchin the soap all they do is drag it like crazy...
this felt so nice
finally manvi knws that she loves virat
but wen will she cum 2 knw that he loves her 2 ...
cant wait...
wonderful piece of work loved readin evry part!
thnk u so mch fr the update nd fr the pm😊
hope u update the next part soon...cant wait!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#73
Amazing I Loved How Manvi Is Feeling For Virat Aww And Vanshika Was Adorable Amd Like Always Hate Swamini
Im Also A True VirMan-ian All I Think About Is VirMan And Im Glad That This Os Is Focused On Only VirMan
Continue ASAP And Pm Me When U Do
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Posted: 13 years ago
#74

Hey guys here I m with a quick update...hope I m not disturbing u with this kind of daily updates...😕..if I m then sorry...😳

The next part is:

Manvi ran to her room.She was totally broken.She didn't know what to do.All she wanted to do was to go to her di.She couldn't control this pain so she went to Jeevika knowing that she might not talk to her...Jeevika was almost cured.She could walk easily but due to doctor's advice she was on bed rest.Manvi came to her.Jeevika was taking rest then.

Manvi: Di,mujhe aap se kuch kehna hai...!

Jeevika: Mujhe pata tha Mannu tu mujh se der tak koyi baat nahi chhupa sakti...jaldi se mujhe bata de!

Manvi: Di,aap kya samajh rahi ho?...Mujhe kuch aur kehna hai.

Jeevika: Lekin mujhe kuch aur nahi sunna hai...Pehle tu mujhe sach batayegi,uske baad hi main teri koyi baat sunugi...!

Manvi: Par di,plz...

Jeevika: Tu yahan se ja sakti hai!

Jeevika again went to bed and pretended sleeping.Manvi could not take all of these anymore.Why everyone whom she loved was so rude to her?Then she came back to her room.She was crying her heart out.At that moment beeji called.She received her call.

Beeji: Happy Biirthday,beta!

Manvi: Thank u beeji,aap kaise ho?

Beeji: Main to thik hoon beta lekin teri awaz aisi kyun lag rahi hai...kuch huya hai kya?kisi ne kuch kaha?

Manvi could not get a hold on herself and burst into tears.

Beeji: Beta mujhe kuch to bata...kya hua hai?

Manvi: Beeji,ab toh di bhi mujhe sayad galat samajh rahi hai...mujh se ab yeh saha nahi ja raha!

Beeji: Maat ro beta...tujhe koyi jarurat nahi hai yeh sab sehne ki!tu bas aaj hi wapas chali aa yahan!

Manvi: Ha beeji ab main bhi yahan nahi reh sakti.

It was noon.Everybody just had the lunch.Then Manvi came out with her bag.She was leaving.Jeevika was tensed.Was Manvi leaving for her rudeness?...Virat was also surprised.She didn't tell him anything about this.Was she leaving for Swamini bua's words?She should at least talk to him about it.

Vanshika: Beta,tum kahi jaa rahi ho?

Manvi: Ha aunty main Hrishikesh wapas jaa rahi hoon.

Vanshika: Lekin mujhe toh nahi pata..kisi ko bhi bina bataye ja rahi ho?

Manvi: Aunty ab main kisse kya kahoon!phir bhi aap ne mujhse pucha,mujhe accha laga!

Vanshika: Beta tum agar jana chahti ho toh main tumhe rokungi nahi.Par tum jaogi kaise?

Manvi: kaise bhi chali jayungi aunty...tension maat lijiye!

Vanshika: nahi Manvi,main driver ki bol deti hoon,woh tumhe chod aayega.

Virat: Uski koyi jarurat nahi hai mom,main chod aata hoon.

Manvi: Nahi,mere liye taqlif kar ne ki koyi jarurat nahi hai,main driver ke sath chali jaati hoon.

Vanshika: Jaisi tumhari marji,beta...

Manvi: Chalti hoon,aunty!

Virat was shocked at her behavior.Jeevika was feeling terrible.It was her Birthday and she,her di,hurt her so much on this day!...Manvi was about to leave.Just then her head got heavier and she fainted.Virat ran to her.Jeevika also came to her...Viren and others also got tensed.Virat at once called Dr. Manan.

Virat: Dr. Manan,Manvi suddenly behosh ho gayi hai...Chandigarh ke kaun se oncologist ke pas hume usse le jana chahiye?

Everyone was shocked to hear this.It took no longer for anyone to understand why Manvi did not give her blood to Jeevika.They took her to the oncologist that Dr.Manan suggested.

In the hospital...

Manvi opened her eyes and found Jeevika sitting beside her.She understood that everyone had come to know about her cancer.Jeevika was crying badly.

Jeevika: Mannu mujhe maaf kar de!Main ne bhi tera dil dukhaya,tujhe galat samjha!

Manvi: Di,yeh aap kya bol rahi ho!Main aur aap se naraj,yeh hone se pehle toh mujhe mout hi aa jayegi...!

Jeevika: Ek dam chup,tujhe kuch nahi hoga!Tujhe toh meri umar bhi lag jaye!

Viren came to her.

Viren: Manvi,plz aapne jiju ko maf kar do!pata nahi main tumhare jiju hone ke layaq bhi hoon ya nahi!

Manvi: Kya jiju,itna senti kyun ho rahe ho!Agar jiju aur saali ke bich mein nok jhok nahi ho toh maza thode hi na aata hai!..aur waise bhi maine woh sab apne memory se delete kar diya hai.

The doctor came in.

Manvi: Di,mujhe ghar jana hai.plz mujhe yahan nahi rehna!

Jeevika: Mannu,ab teri ek bhi nahi chalegi.Jaisa doctor kehenge waisa hi hoga!Tu chup chat leti rahe!

Manvi: Doctor plz dekhiye na main kaise baatein kar rahi hoon,ab bimar insan kya itna paka sakta hai!...plz agar main yahan rahi toh jarur bimar par jayungi.Mujhe ghar jaane dijiye!plz!

Doctor: Thik hai...dekhiye patient abhi thik hai,aap inhe ghar le ja sakte hai.lekin inki dawai aur diet ek dam thik tarikhe se chalni chahiye!

Jeevika: Ji,doctor.Main koyi laparbahi nahi karoongi!

They brought Manvi home back.Jeevika made her sleep.She came to her room.She started crying.Viren also came there and hugged her.

Viren: Jeevika,main yeh nahi kahoonga ki rona maat!aaj jee varke ro lo.Kyun ki ab se tumhe bohat strong hona parega!Manvi ko tumhe hi samhalna hai...uske samne tum kamjor nahi par sakti ho!

Jeevika: Mujhe pata hai,Viren ji...par meri Mannu ke sath hi aisa kyun hua!Aap toh jante hi hai kitni saaf dil ki hai woh,kabhi kisi ka bura nahi chaha aur nahi kiya,phir bhi kyun usko yeh din dekhna par raha hai..???

Viren: kyun ki Jeevika,bhagban acche logo ki hi pariksha lete hai aur hume iss mein khara utarna hai...!

Jeevika: Ha,Viren ji...aap thik keh rahe hai.Ab se Mannu akeli nahi hai.Main usska sath dungi!

It was about 11.30 pm...Jeevika came to Manvi.She was awake.

Manvi: Arreh di,aap ho?

Jeevika: Ha,Mannu!

Manvi: Kya hua di?

Jeevika: Mannu,tu ne mujhe sach mein maaf toh kar diya hai na?

Manvi: Kya di,yeh sab kya phir se keh na jaruri hai!

Jeevika: Ha hai,kyun ki iss bar maine tera bohat dil dukhaya hai...yahan tak ki maine toh tujhe birthday tak wish nahi kiya!

Manvi: Koyi baat nahi..abhi kar lo!abhi bhi time hai..!

Jeevika: Pehle tu mere sath niche chal...!

Manvi: Kyun?kya phir se hospital leke jana hai?

Jeevika: Mannu tu bhi na.Cahl bhi..!

Manvi: Ok,aa rahi hoon!

Jeevika brought her to the hall.The hall was decorated beautifully with candles,beloons &flowers.There was a big cake placed on the table.Everybody was in a happy mood.As she came there everybody wished her.

Jeevika: happy Birthday,Mannu!

Manvi: thank u,di..!

She cut the cake while everybody was clapping and singing happy birthday for her.Manvi fed the first piece to Jeevika,then Viren...After that she came to Virat.but as she was about to feed him,she remembered his answer.She changed her way and fed it to Shlok.Jeevika noticed it...Virat was really hurt at this.Why was she ignoring him like that!She even had not talked to him.Was she upset with Swamini bua's words or now she didn't need him coz misunderstandings were clear between her & her di.He to himself 'maine yeh samajh ne mein itni der kar di?usko toh mujh se koyi lagav hi nahi hai..usse toh bas aapni di se matlab hai.aur waise bhi usne toh Hrishikesh mein bhabi ko clearly bol diya tha ke woh mere liye kuch bhi feel nahi karti hai...yahan tak ki usne mujhe partnership bhi dobara Jeevika bhabi ke liye ki thi.'

Next morning...

Viren got up and saw Jeevika was satnding by the window.He came to her.

Viren: kya hai CM ji..phir se kya soch rahi hai aap?

Jeevika: CM matlab?

Viren: Chinta Mantri ji...tumhe tension lene se fursat kaha milti hai!har waqt koyi na koyi tension!ab kya soch rahi ho?

Jeevika: Plz Viren ji,abhi main mazak ke mood mein nahi hoon!

Viren: Arreh batao toh sahi ke kya hua?

Jeevika: Mannu ke bare mein soch rahi hoon!

Viren: Jeevika,maine kaha toh ke hum uske sath hamesha rahenge.

Jeevika: Woh baat nahi hai Viren ji!

Viren: toh phir kya?

Jeevika: Maine ek baat notice ki hai ke Mannu ne aapni cancer ki baat hum mein se kisi ko nahi batayi lekin usne Virat ko bataya!

Viren: Toh?tum toh janti hi ho woh bohat acche dost hai.

Jeevika: Nahi Viren ji,sayad aap sahi the..Unn dono ke bich mein kuch toh khas rishta hai...lekin kal Mannu kuch kati kati si lagi Virat se!sayad usse meri kahi huyi baat yaad aa gayi.

Viren: Dekho Jeevika,abhi hume yeh unpe chod dena chahiye.Woh mature hai aur aapne decisions khud le sakte hai.Hume har chiz mein parna nahi chahiye!

Saying this Viren went to fresh up but Jeevika couldn't take it so lightly.Jeevika to herself 'nahi Viren ji,ab aur nahi.pehle hi maine apni Mannu ke sath bohat bura kiya hai.ab mujhe kuch karna hi hoga uske liye...agar woh mere liye Virat se dur ja rahi hai,toh mujhe hi unhe pas lana hoga!aapne toh apne bhai hone ka farz nibha diya tha,ab mujhe bhi apne behen hone ka farz nibhana hai...!'


I know that this part is over drama.but can't help it,want VirMan track soon...😳...n if u read it,u'll get my point...😃

hope u'll like it...do comment guys...😊


Edited by jesmin.farjana - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#75
FANTABULOUS

loved this part v much
it was very emotional btw
touched my heart
especially the last part

jeevika trying to bring virmaan close
ausome idea
i'm sure gonna love it
update soon


Edited by samko - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#76
nice continue really like it
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Posted: 13 years ago
#77
Loved it pm me please thanx
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Posted: 13 years ago
#78
Jeey! Jeevika
is bringing VirMan together, totally
excited!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#79
Waiting 4 next part..! nice update...!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey thanx a lot 4 the pm! even jeevika is supporting them yayyy!! hope to see virman track in the next update
Edited by arohi16 - 13 years ago

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