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Hey guys,this is my 1st ever OS on VirMan...It's actually continues from yesterday's epi..Hope U'll enjoy it...😃

I actually don't know that whether OS is to be continued or not ...since all your love & appreciation,I have decided to continue it...😊

part 1~below

part 2~page 3

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/ek-hazaaron-mein-meri-behna-hain/2969027/virman-os-raabta?pn=3

part 3~page 6

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/ek-hazaaron-mein-meri-behna-hain/2969027/virman-os-raabta?pn=6

part 4~page 9

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/ek-hazaaron-mein-meri-behna-hain/2969027/virman-os-raabta?pn=9

part 5~page 12

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/ek-hazaaron-mein-meri-behna-hain/2969027/virman-os-raabta?pn=12

part 6~page 15

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/ek-hazaaron-mein-meri-behna-hain/2969027/virman-os-raabta?pn=15

part 7~page 18

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/ek-hazaaron-mein-meri-behna-hain/2969027/virman-os-raabta

this is a 7 parts OS...i know too large!!!😳

Virat got ready and came to Manvi's room.Manvi was almost ready for the chemo session.Now the one thing that matters to her the most was this chemo session to be done.Then she had a plan to hit upon.They came to the hall together.Beeji was sitting there.She didn't feel it right to send them alone to the hospital.


Beeji: Beta tere chahu toh nahi hain.Usse jaruri kam aageya tha...toh tu Dabbu ko leke ja.

Dabbu: Ha Manvi di,main toh hoon hi apka bodyguard.

Manvi: Beeji,iss Dabbu ko mere sath bhej ke aap meri musibaat kyun barha rahi hain..?Yeh kya mujhe samhalega ulta mujhe hi isko guard karna parega!!!

Dabbu: Nahi Manvi di ab main bada ho geya hoon...!

Manvi: Accha beta!!!Par kisi aur jaga jaake yeh baat prove karke aa...abhi mujhe jana hain,late ho raha hai beeji...!

Beeji: Toh thik hain...Mian hi chalti hoon tere sath.

Manvi: Arreh nahi beeji...apke jane ki koyi jarurat nahi hain.Beeji aap iss hatte-katte mushtande ko mere sath bhej toh rahi hain.

Mnavi laughed and winked at Virat.

Virat: Ha beeji main isska acche se kheyal rakkhunga...aap tension maat lijiye.

Dabbu: Beeji jab Virat vaiya hain toh mere jane ki kya jarurat...!

Beeji was helpless.She couldn't tell about her fear...At last she had to send them alone.

In the hospital...

They were waiting for Manvi's call.Virat was really tensed.

Manvi: Hello partner,kya?Mera chemo hain,tumhara nahi...chill karo yar!

Virat: Ha,tumhara hi hain..aur daar mujhe lag raha hain...

For the firstt time Manvi had a clue of his feelings.

Manvi: Oye heroine,yeh sab emotional dialogues band karo!

Virat: yes my hero...!!!

Then Dr. Bakshi came and took her for the chemo session...Virat was outside.He couldn't control himelf.He was looking her through the window.Viat to himself 'ek ladki itni strong ho sakti hain?her spirit surprises me every time...This time she has taught me many things..Kash who bhi mere bare mein sochti,toh at least main usko support toh kar sakta tha!'

After a few hours...

Manvi came out.She had taken rest for sometime.

Virat: Chalo,abhi ghar chalet hain.

Manvi: Ha.lekin tumhare ghar.

Virat: Matlab?

Manvi: Matlab ki Chandigarh...!

Virat: Are u mad?abhi toh tumhara session hua hain,kal chalet hain.

Manvi: Dekho,partner not done!!!Tumne kaha tha ki chemo ke baad hum challenge...abhi chalo!!!

Virat: Tumhara rest lena jaruri hain Manvi.

Manvi: Toh kya tumhare ghar mein mere liye ek room nahi hoga jis mein main rest kar saku...?

Virat: Aur agar tumhari tabiyaat bigar gayi toh?

Manvi: Ajeeb item ho toh!tumhare Chandigarh ke saare doctors kya mar gaye hain?Jab bhi main bimaar ho jayoon,jo ki mujhe pata hain ke main nahi hongi,toh tum toh ho hi mere bodyguard...mujhe hospital leke chale jana!

Virat: Thik hain,par tumhare ghar mein toh koyi nahi janta!aur tumne toh apne bags bhi pack nahi kiye hain.

Manvi: Bags toh tumhare jeep mein hi hain...aur beeji ko chalet huye baatayenge.

Virat had no choice.At least she had got her sessions done.Then Manvi informed beeji.Beeji was really angry and tensed about this.

Virat: kya hua?Beeji naraj hain?

Manvi: Woh toh hain...lekin koyi baat nahi,baad mein manalungi.

In the evening...

They were having a nice journey...Suddenly Virat's jeep broke down.Manvi was like totally mad about this.

Manvi: Yeh tumhara khatara!!!Tum pe aur tumhare khatara pe toh yakin hi nahi karna chahiye!!!

Virat: Arreh abh maine kya kiya?...jeep hain kabhi bhi kharab ho sakti hain.

Manvi: Kisi aur ki nahi hogi...sirf tumhari hi hogi...!!!!

Virat: Ok,calm down...!Chalo wahan pe ek dhaba hain.waha pe chalet hain.Kuch kha lete hain aur mechanic bhi dhundte hain.

Manvi: Thik hain chalo...lekin tumhe kab se dhaba accha lagne laga?

Virat whispered : Jabse tum acchi lagne lagi ho...!

Manvi could hear it but thought he must not be saying this for her...It's just her illusion but she thought to herself 'Main kyun aisa soch rahi hoon ke Virat mere liye yeh feel kar sakta hain .!'

Then they came to the dhaba...there a sardar ji came and took the order.They had given the order according Manvi's choice.

Manvi: Sab kuch mere pasand ka kyun?

Virat: Tumhari pasand hi meri pasand hain..

Manvi: Hello heroine,kya kaha?

Virat: Kuch nahi...

Manvi: Batao toh baat kya hain...aaj kal tumhare rang hi alag hain!

Virat was kind of helpless to her question and tried to avoid it.He called the sardar ji.

Virat: Sardar ji,yahan pe koyi mechanic hoga?actually gari kharab ho gayi hain.

Sardar ji: Ha puttar,tussi tension na lo.main chotu ko bhejta hoon.woh mechanic le aayega aur aapki gaddi bhi thik ho jayegi.

They had enjoyed the food well.His jeep was also ready...then they thanked the sardar ji and left.

On the way...

Manvi saw a temple and asked Virat to stop.He stoped.Then they both went to temple.Manvi was saying her prayers but Virat was lost in admiring her...When she turned over to him.she caught him looking at her...at this she for the first time felt really nice.It was kind of new for her.

Mnavi: Kya hain?mandir mein aakar toh bichar suddh ho jaate hai...par tum toh yahan pe bhi na jaane kya sochne mein busy ho!

Virat was relieved that she couldn't get that...He was not aware of her this new feeling!...Manvi saw a tree.

Manvi: Yahan pe ek dhaga bandh ke mannat maango toh woh puri hoti hain..Chalo mangte hain!!

Virat: Main yeh sab nahi manta!

Manvi: Uff...main bhi kisse kya bol rahi hoon...!mere hi galti hain...!

She took a dhaga and tied it to the tree...he also felt like believing it.So,he also took a dhaga and tied it.She was surprised to see it.

Manvi: Bhai kya baat hain...aaj chand kya subah ko nikal aaya tha?

Virat: Nahi hero ji...asman mein chand sahi samay pe hi aaya hain.Waise kya manga tumne?

Manvi: Mannat batate to nahi hain...lekin phir bhi tumhe batati hoon.Maine manga ki meri di jaldi se thik ho jaye...!aur tumne?

Virat: Manga hain kuch bohat special...jo ki tumhe nahi bata sakta.

Manvi: At least kiske liye manga woh toh bataoge?

Virat: hain koyi sarfiri...!

Saying this he moved ahead.She had a light smile on her face.She somehow thought that he was talking about her.She didn't get this thing.Suddenly he had become so special...maybe it was bcoz without him her journey must be more tough.With his support it didn't seem so tough anymore.She was feeling so different.Her feelings was like...

faili thi siyaah raatein,aaya tu sabah leke

bewajah si zindagi mein,jeene ki wajah leke

khoya tha samundaron mein,tanha safeena mera

sahilon pe aaya hain tu,jane kis tarah leke

kuch toh hai tujhse raabta

kaise hum jane,hume kya pata

kuch toh hai tujhse raabta

ab kya hai kehna,humko hai rehna

jannatein bhulake,teri bahon mein panah leke

roothi hui khwahishon mein,thodi si sulah leke

aaya tu khamoshiyon mein baton ki chirah leke

kuch toh hai tujhse raabta

kaise hum jane,hume kya pata

kuch toh hai tujhse raabta

Then they left the temple...Virat was driving.Manvi was still finding her feelings very unknown and amazing!She couldn't stop smiling..Virat noticed it.He decided to trick her.

Virat: Kya hua?Mere hero ko koyi hero mil geya kya?

Manvi: Pata nahi...ho bhi sakta hain.

Virat: Matlab?

Manvi: Hain koyi sarfira...!

He was surprised to hear that.He never told her that 'he loves her'..then what was she talking about..?Virat found it dangerous.He should tell her soon about his feelings.He felt a lil bit jealous and insecure...On the other hand,Manvi couldn't stop smiling.

Sorry guys for this extra large OS...actually I couldn't help myself.I just had this idea if during this journey Manvi starts to feel for Virat...😍..Hope U guys will like it & plz do comment...they r really valuable...😊


if u r interested then here is
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hop u'll like it 😃

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Posted: 13 years ago
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i luvd it
awsm...manvi has realized her love for him awww thts so sweet
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Hmm amazng yar updt sun as posible
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really nice yr i lovd it plz update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey gr8 os.could really imagine it...loved it to the core.and v love xtra large os's..keep it large nly.plz pm me if u can.
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i just loved it . thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awww...that was cute!!
''Hain ek sirphira''...loved that maanvi's dialog... 😊 ...awesome OS!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ur dialogues are magical. I swear,I could literally hear virat and manvi's convo in my head!! Excellent job, AGAIN! And pls continue!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow..loved it, mostly the dialogues
Try to cont soon and pm me
Thanks fr the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved it!!!!...2 good!!!👏
❤️virman!!!!

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