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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks For the PM :)
i just love it how they both feel each others love but cant express it, very beautifully written and i like the saas bahu plans :) and hopefully virma will confess their love soon ...
cant wait :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update yaar.. loved it except the maya part.. now waiting for next part...
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lovely update...continue soon n thanks for the pm!
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wah wah maza a gaya amazing as always waiting for the nxt part plz update soon
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awsm update luvd it
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ausome update dear
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Thank u guys...Thanks for ur likes and comments,they mean a lot to me...love u all...🤗

time for the next & last part of this OS...hope u will like it...😊

Virat was in his room.He was confused about Manvi's behavior.He could not understand what her problem was.Yesterday it was all good between them.He kind of tried to clear everything between them.What happened again!Why did she want to leave?He was thinking & Viren came.

Virat: Bhai,aap?kuch kam tha aapko?

Viren: Nehi mere bhai,mera koyi kam nahi hai...tere kam se hi aaya hoon!

Virat: Matlab?

Viren: Dekh Manvi aaj ja rahi hai...abhi bhi waqt hai usse aapne dil ki baat keh de.

Virat: Bhai,koshish ki thi!Lekin mujhe nahi lagta ke woh mere liye kuch feel karti hai...aur phir Jeevika bhabi bhi sayad yeh nahi chahti.

Viren: Mere bhai aapni bhabi ki tension maat le!mana ke pehle woh thoda zyada react kar gayi thi...lekin ab usse bhi yeh mehsus ho geya hai ki tu hi Manvi ke liye best hai!

Virat: Aap kehna kya chahte hai?

Viren: Yeh hi ke teri bhabi aur main dono hi tere sath hai...ulta woh toh ab iss baat ko leke pareshaan hai ke usski wajah se kahi tum dono door na chale jao aur tum dono ko pas lane ke liye full effort de rahi hai.

Virat was surprised to know that.

Viren: Tu ab bas Manvi ki fikar kar.Yeh soch ke usse kaise aapne dil ki baat kahega!

Manvi was all set to go!After lunch she would leave for Hrishikesh.Jeevika was really tensed.She went to Vanshika & asked for help.Vanshika gave the idea of sending Virat with Manvi.Jeevika liked her idea very much & was ready for action.They sent Viren out...Manvi came down with her bags.Jeevika then started her plan.

Jeevika: Mannu tu kiske sath jayegi?

Manvi: Di main choti bacchi thode hi na hoon...chali jayungi kisi ke bhi sath.

Jeevika: Nahi main tujhe akele nahi jane dungi!

Manvi: Thik hai..jiju ko plz request karo na mujhe chod aane ke liye!

Jeevika: Agar tere jiju hote toh kya main tension leti?

Manvi: Matlab?

Jeevika: Tere jiju ko kisi kam se bahar jana para kuch der pehle!

Manvi: toh pehle batana tha na di...ab mujhe akele hi jana padega.main train se chale jayungi.

Vanshika: nahi beta...tum train se kaise jaogi aur who bhi iss halat main!ruko main Virat se kehti hoon.woh tumhe chod aayega!

Manvi: Nahi aunty,main chali jaayungi!

Jeevika: Kyun zid kar rahi ahin Mannu!...mammiji thik hi toh keh rahi hain.chali ja Virat ke sath!

Manvi was really surprise,Jeevika said that.Now she had no option.Her di would of course send her with Virat...Jeevika came to Virat's room.

Jeevika: Virat,kya tum mera ek kam karoge?

Virat: Ha,bhabi...boliye na,plz!

Jeevika: Woh Mannu ko jana hai aur Viren ji bhi nahi hai...Iss halat mein main usse akele bhi nahi bhej sakti hoon.Main hi chale jati,lekin ghar pe mujhe kuch kam hai.

Virat: Ji,bhabi.Main usse chod aata hoon.

Jeevika was about to leave.Virat understood that Jeevika was trying to bring them closer.He was happy to see the change in her.He also saw a lil light of hope!

Virat: Bhabi!

Jeevika: Ha,Virat...bolo kuch kehna hai?

Virat: Thank u,bhabi!

Jeevika also understood that Virat got her plan.

Jeevika: Koyi baat nahi devar ji...ab bhabi aapne devar ke liye nahi sochegi toh kaun sochega!waise bhi mujhe bhi toh jaldi apni devrani chahiye jisse main aapne sare kam karwa saku!

They both laughed.Jeevika made her last effort...Virat & Manvi left for Hrishikesh.It was afternoon then.Soon it was evening but still Manvi didn't say anything.Though she was not angry with him anymore,she didn't talk to him.Virat got disturbed.He thought it was the high time.He should tell her about his feelings.If he missed this chance,he won't get another chance perhaps.He was thinking how to speak up first while driving.Suddenly he noticed the temple where they had come that day.He stopped the jeep.Manvi was surprised.

Manvi: Gadi kyun rok di?

Virat made her look at the temple.

Manvi: Yeh toh woh hi mandir hain na jaha hum uss din aaye the!

Virat: Yes!

Manvi: Lekin aaj kyun ruke ho?

Virat: Kyun?aaj tumhe kuch nahi mangna?

Manvi: Nahi,abhi mangne ke liye kuch bhi nahi hai...

Virat: Lekin mujhe mangna hai...chalo chalet hai!

Manvi: Mujhe nahi jana,tum jao!

Virat got down from the jeep and came to her side 'chalo Manvi,bhagban ke ghar pe aake aise nahi jate hai'...Manvi was surprised to hear this from him.She got down & they both entered the temple.Manvi was praying standing in front of the idol & Virat was looking at her.Manvi finished her prayer & was leaving.He held her hand tightly.

Manvi: Virat kya kar rahe ho?chod do mujhe!

Virat: Nahi pehle tumhe batana hoga ke tum mujhse kyun naraj ho!

Manvi: Main tumse naraj nahi hoon!plz abhi mujhe jane do!

Virat: Dekho tum mandir main khare hoke jhut bol rahi ho...tumhari dua kubul nahi hongi.so sach bata do!

Manvi: Yeh kya naya style hai black mail karne ka?

Virat: Aisa hi samajh lo!

Manvi: Nahi mujhe kuch nahi kehna hai...!

He held her hand even more tightly and grabbed her towards him.They were inches away from each other.Manvi was getting nervous if Virat could feel her heartbeats which were running super fast!

Virat: Plz Manvi mujhe,aapne partner ko sach bata do?maine aisa kya kiya hai?

She was trying to hold her emotions but she couldn't.Tears rolled down on her cheeks.She got frustrated and spoke out!

Manvi: Nahi,tumne kuch nahi kiya hai...maine hi sab kiya hai!sab meri galti hai!

Virat: Kya kiya hai tumne?

Manvi: Pyaar!Tumse!I love u,Virat!

Virat couldn't believe her ears and eyes.Was it a dream!He was feeling like he was in mid air.All his stress were gone in a second.He let Manvi free.He didn't have the strength to hold her.He stepped back.His heart was dancing with joy but he was not able to express it!...Manvi was crying badly!She thought that Virat never expected this from her.She was feeling guilty.She should not have told him.She broke down & sat on the ground crying like a baby.He sensed that she was not feeling comfortable.So,he grabbed her hand & made her stand.He took her to the tree where they both tied dhaga.She was not getting what he was trying to do.

Virat: Yaad hain tumhe hum dono ne yaha pe dhaga bandhe the?

She was looking down & shook her head in yes gesture.

Virat: Kya maine tumhe uss din kaha tha ke maine kya manga tha?

She was still looking down & shook her head in no gesture.

Virat: Tum janna nahi chahti?

She looked at him.

Virat: Ha,mujhe tumhe aaj batana hain!

Manvi: Kya?

Virat: Yahi ke uss din main eek sarphiri ladki ke liye kuch manga tha!Woh itni hi sarphiri hai ki ek baat batane mein itne din laga diye!

Manvi: Matlab?

Virat: matlab ke buddhu woh tum ho!

Manvi was surprised.What was he talking about?

Virat: nahi samjhi?waise toh duniya ke bade se bade philosophy ko ek minute mein samjha deti ho lekin itni choti si baat ko samajh nahi pa rahi ho!...ok,main hi keh deta hoon,I love u too,Manvi!

Manvi was shocked.She heard it right or not!He also loved her...then what was all these confusions about!no matter anyways,now she had the best moment of her life to live!...She had a smile on her face with tears in eyes.Then she hit him.

Manvi: Toh itne din wait kyun kiya?jaldi nahi bata sakte the?

Virat: Ajeeb ladki ho yaar tum!...khud hi problems create kiye aur ab mujh pe ilzam laga rahi ho!

Manvi: Of course sab tumhari galti hai...agar uss din hi keh dete toh itni problems hi nahi hoti!

Virat: Yeh galat hai...ab sara blame mujh pe!!!

Manvi: Ha bilkul,chep kahi ka!

Virat: bandariya kahi ki!

They both turned around & was showing that they were angry with each other.After a few moments they turned towards each other & laughed.They were fighting without any reason.It was so stupid of them!They came towards each other.

They were face to face.

Virat: Jo bhi ho...I love U,partner!

Manvi: I love U too,partner!

They shared an eye lock while confessing & then they hugged each other.It was an intense,a passionate hug!

main hoon shab,tu hain subah

ishq mein,tu hain jahan

main hoon lab,tu hain dua

main zameen,tu aasman

tum mile,mil geye do jahan

darmiyaan faasla na raha

tere saaye mein,tere saaye mein

meri uamr kat jaye sanam

teri bahon mein,teri rahon mein

meri umar kat jaye sanam

kyun aaj bheegi bheegi chandni hai

chehre pe chand jaisi roshni hain

kadmon mein beech geya hain asmaan bhi

tu rubaru hai,kuch bhi na kami hain

tum mile,mil geye do jahan

darmiyaan faasla na raha

tere saaye mein,tere saaye mein

meri umar kat jaye sanam

khwabon mein dono dube sahilon ke

rastein nazar toh aaye manzilon ke

hasrat rahi na ab toh koyi baaki

pure huye hain arman do dilon ke

tum mile,mil geye do jahan

darmiyaan faasla na raha

tere saaye mein,tere saaye mein

meri umar kat jaye sanam

teri bahon mein,teri raho mein

meri umar kat jaye sanam


so it was the end of this OS...I know u all wanted a mind blowing ending!...I have tried my best to make it likable...but still if u don't like it,it's okay...😊

thanks for reading such a long OS...😳🤗

Edited by jesmin.farjana - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Ahw, that romantic! And their NokhJokh,Really loved this Os. I can't believe it ended.I hope to read more of you soon!
Edited by BrunoMars - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
pyaar tumse i love you virat - thats a typical manvi stlye confession.. loved it - good job girl!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awww loved it it was great ending 😃 😃 😃 but OS finished 😭 lolx thx for the pm

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