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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow..! Very nice plzz continue and pm me when updated
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loved it
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That Was Brilliant.. Can't Wait To Read What Happens Next.. Do Continue Soon Please.. And Thank You For The PM :)

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Wow!!That was super awesome...plz do continue:)))
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Loooved it :D maanvi finally seeing and feeling the love! Awww...convo btw the sisters was awesome...loved the way jeevika described love:) personal experience? Hehe..jkjk:) thanks for the pm!
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Can't wait to read more! Please continue soon! :)
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wowww ur writing style is very good MA lovd it
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mast update
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Hello guys...😊...here I m again with the next part of my OS...Thanks 4 all your love and appreciation..Love u all...🤗.plz keep loving me and my writing in this way...😳

part 3:

Virat was in his room.He was getting ready.He was about to go to Manvi's room for breakfast..there was a knock at the door.He opened the door and there was Manvi with the breakfast.He was surprised and happy to see her.

Virat: Tum?

Manvi: Ha main...aaj hum ek sath breakfast karenge tumhare room mein.

Virat: Arreh wah!!!

Manvi: Kya hai na jaga badalne se bore nahi hota hai insan!

Virat: Ha guru mata!apki jai...!!!

Manvi: Jeete raho beta!

Then they sat to have breakfast.

Manvi: Virat aaj kya din hai?

Virat: Kya din hay?...Sunday!

Manvi: Nahi re ghochu!!! Aaj kya occasion hai?

Virat: Ab aayi na line pe!woh hi main sochu ke aaj mujh pe itni meherbani kyun!

Manvi: Khatam hua dialogue baji!!!ab kam ki baat...!

Virat: Ha bolo!

Manvi: Aaj Mothers Day hai...!!!

Virat: Toh...!!!

Manvi: Toh matlab kya?

Virat: Matlab iss liye kya karoon?

Manvi: Mujhe shopping le chalo.

Virat: Aur shopping jaake kya karogi...?

Manvi: Hum sab ke liye gifts lenge...Vanshika aunty,Swamini buaji,Kadambhari chachi...aur di...!

Virat: par aisa kyun?

Manvi: Kya kyun?

Virat: I mean particular din pe hi kyun gifts denge?hume toh har din hi gifts dena chahiye!

Manvi: Kar di na chep wali baat!!!...Dekho,hum janam din kyun manate hai.Humara janam toh ho hi chukka hota hain,roj to nahi manate!It's just ke agar ek special day pe apno ke liye kuch karo toh unhe accha lagta hai...!Iss liye koyi force nahi hai...

Virat got that point and agreed with her.

Virat: Manna parega aapko!!!

Manvi: Ha beta woh toh parega hi...!

After breakfast Manvi was set to go.

Virat: Tumne dawai li?

Manvi: Abhi leti hoon...

Virat: Tumhe aapne alawa sab ki fikar hai na!

Manvi: Iss mein hi toh maja hai...!aur meri fikar karne ke liye toh tum toh ho hi,mere bodyguard ji..!

Then they left for shopping.In the mall Manvi was busy in choosing gifts.Then Virat suddenly went to another section.When Manvi turned,she couldn't find him.She got scared.After a while she left a hand on her shoulder.She turned around with fear.It was Virat.She got angry and hit him on his shoulder.

Manvi: Chep,kaha chale geye the?

Virat: Arreh yaar,kuch kam tha...

Manvi: Toh mujhe batake nahi jaa sakte the!

Virat: Ok,I m sorry!Ab thodi si shopping bhi karlo!

Manvi chose a Shiv ji's murti for Vanshika,for Kadambhari a beautiful set and for Jeevika a photo frame!

Virat: Bhabhi ke liye photo frame kyun?

Manvi: Kyun ki main unhe mamma ke sath hamari ek photo gift karna chahti hoon.Kya hai na di ke pas hamari woh photo nahi hai.

After that Virat thought shopping was over.

Manvi: Oye heroine,kaha chale?Abhi toh ek gift baki hai...!!!

Virat: Kya???

Manvi: Bua ji ka gift.

Virat: Unhe tum kya dogi...!

Manvi: Hai kuch.

Then Manvi told him what to gift her.Virat also agreed...When they were about to leave the shop,Manvi asked him to stop.

Virat: Kya hai ab?

Manvi: Ruko,aaj sabse pehle hum beeji ko wish karenge!

Then she called beeji.

Manvi: Beeji,chachi aap ke aas pas hai kya?

Beeji: Ha beta.

Manvi: Unhe bulake phone speaker pe daal do!

She and Virat wished both of them together.

VirMan: Happy Mothers Day...!

Manvi: Beeji,chachi sorry ha,main aap logo ko koyi gift nehi de payi aaj!

Beeji: Beta hamara sabse bada gift toh tu hi hain.Tu bas aap na kheyal rakh.

Chachi: Ha beta,beeji thik keh rahi ahi.

Beeji: Aur Virat beta tumhe bhi shukriya!

Virat: Kya baat kar rahi hai beeji...!.Bade sirf choto ko ashirbaad dete hai.

Beeji: Jeete raho beta!

Then beeji hanged up.

Manvi: Kya baat hai?Itna bada dialogue...!.sab acche sangat ka asar hai!

Virat: Ha meri maa,abhi chalo!

They reached Vadhera house.First they went to Vanshika.Manvi entered her room and took the blessings.Virat also took her blessings.The gift was in his hand.Manvi took it from him and gave it to Vanshika.

Manvi: Happy Mothers Day,aunty!

She wished her and hugged her.

Vanshika: Thank u,beta...gift ki kya jarurat thi...!

Manvi: Nahi aunty,itna gift toh banta hai...aur waise bhi Thank u toh mujhe aapko bolna chahiye.Itna sab hone ke baad bhi aap ne mujhe galat nahi samjha!

Vanshika: Beta,main janti hoon ke koyi wajah hai.Mujhe tum pe yakin hai.

Then Virat also wished her.

Virat: Happy Mothers Day,mom!

He also hugged her.Vanshika was really happy that Virat did it.He had changed a lot and that was great.all because of Manvi.

Then they went to Swamini's room.Manvi stopped outside.

Virat: chalo...!

Manvi: Nahi Virat,tum toh jante hi ho bua ji mujhse gussa hai...abhi tum jao.Main bahar hi wait karti hoon.

Virat got in and took the blessings of Swamini & wished her with flowers.

Swamini: Thank u,Virat!Aaj hum bohat khush hai.

After that they went to Kadambhari also.Though she was a lil upset with Manvi,she accepted the gift happily.

Al last Manvi was about to go to Jeevika...when she was outside her room,Swamini came there and stopped her from going in.Virat saw it and got very angry.As Manvi was leaving,she saw Virat there and stopped him from doing anything...after a while,Virat came to Manvi's room.manvi was sitting on the bed and crying.

Virat: Knock!Knock!

Manvi: Arreh Virat,tum ho...aao na!

She wiped away her tears...Virat had something in his hand.He hid it.Then fe sat next to her.

Virat: Tum mere samne ro sakti ho...woh baat alag hai ki hero ke ankhon mein ansoo acche nahi lagte!

Manvi smiled.

Virat: Tum humesha yun hi muskuraya karo!

He then gifted her a teddy saying I m always with u.

Manvi: Aaj toh Mothers day hai!Tum mujhe aapni maa samajhte ho!

Virat: Yeh huyi na bandariya wali baat!

They both laughed...After some time Virat took Manvi to Jeevika's room.She was sleeping.Manvi wished her very softly and left the gift next to her pillow.

Hey guys I know all of u wanted me to write some romantic moments for VirMan...but as it was Mothers Day,so I could not stop myself from writing this part.Hope u all have enjoyed it...😊...

Plz do comment guys if u like it...😊...and wait to know what happens next...😳

Edited by jesmin.farjana - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Mother's day special.. Nice 1...!!!

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