VirMan OS:Raabta...❤️ - Page 2

I didn't like it because i loved it
Please continue this OS and if you do
Then please do pm me thanx

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How cute,

Wow..! Very nice plzzz pm me when updated
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seriously you had amazing dialogues!! loved the sudden arousal of feelings..

again thank u guys...🤗...I'll try to update it as soon as possible...😃

That Was A Brilliant OS.. I Could Picture The Scene Between Manvi And Virat.. Please Do Continue Soon.. And PM When You Do..

Jiiya <3

dat wz an awsum piece of work dear...👏

Here I am again with the next part of my OS..😃...actually I don't know whether OS is to be continued or not..😕...But since U all loved my OS and wanted me to continue it so,I thought why not...after all it's all about our craziness for VirMan...😉

btw Thank u guys for liking my attempts...I m really overwhelmed to get your love and support...🤗

this OS continues after I guess today's epi...Vanshika saw VirMan's chemistry,Virat made Manvi met with Jeevika and Virat having an argument with Viren...from here my OS moves on...

Manvi was having a chat with Jeevika inside the room.Their love for each other is unconditional and immeasurable.Viren & Virat were having an argument outside.The nurse came and asked Manvi to let Jeevika take rest.So,she was leaving from there.When she reached to the door,she saw Virat and Viren arguing about her.

Viren: Virat,mujhe ab bhi yakin nahi ho raha hai tere liye who ladki aap ne bhai se bhi badke hai...!Tu usske liye mere kaha nahi man raha!

Virat: Bhai plz Manvi ke liye aisa maat boliye...!

Viren: Aaj tak job hi ho main samajhta tha ke tu samajhdar hai.Tu kabhi bhi galat ka sath nahi dega!Lekin uss ladki ne jaise tujh pe koyi jadu hi kar diya hai...Tujhe usske alawa har koyi galat lag raha hai.

Virat: Aisa kuch bhi mat bolo bhai jiske liye aapko baad mein pachtana pare!

Viren: Pachta toh main raha hoon!Pata nahi maine bhi kya sochke tujhe kaha tha ke...khair,jane de!Forget it...!lekin yaad rahe woh jeeevika se dobara nahi milni chahiye!

Virat was standing silent bcoz of his promise to Manvi.then Viren left...Manvi could not believe her eyes.Her jiju said so many rough things for her and Virat kept silent just bcoz of her promise.He took all the humiliation but didn't break her promise.She was coming to Virat but before she could reach him,he left.Manvi came to her room.She still didn't believe her eyes.Virat didn't reveal the truth of her cancer yet he tried to protect her...She was amazed to see the change in Virat!Actually she was confused whether the change happened in him or in her.Virat was very honest,caring and kind from the beginning but did he care for her also?She never thought that before...Then beeji called her.

Beeji: Beta tu Jeevika se mili?

Manvi: Ha beeji abhi milke aa rahi hoon.

Beeji: Sab wahan pe tere sath thik se pesh toh aa rahe ahi na?

Manvi: Beeji aap yah sab tension maat lo...sab thik hai.

Beeji: Tu apni dawai to samay se le rahi hai?beta laparwahi bilkul maat karna...aapna kheyal rakh.

Manvi: Ha beeji sab time pe kar rahi hoon.akhir aapne mere sath bodyguard jo bheja hai yahan pe...woh mujhe kaha akela chorta hai.har waqt mera kheyal rakhta hai.

Beeji: Ha beta Virat pe yakin karke hi toh tujhe wahan bheja hai..Phir bhi usse mera shukriya kehna.

Manvi: Ok beeji...abhi rakhti hoon.

She hanged up the phone and turned around.There was Virat standing near the door.He was in a bad mood.

Manvi: Kya hain?wahan pe kyun khade ho?andar aao!

Virat: Manvi,I am sorry!

Manvi: par kyun?

Virat: Kyun ki main kuch bhi thik nahi kar pa raha hoon...Ab bhi bhai ki galat faimiya main dur nahi kar paya hoon.

Manvi: Arreh,woh toh iss liye kyun ki maine tumhe batane se mana kiya hai.

Virat: par kyun?Mujhe yeh sab accha nahi lag raha...mujhe lagta hain bhai ko bata dena chahiye.

Manvi: Nahi Virat.plz!Aisa maat karo!...mere liye,plz!

Virat: Okay then abhi main chalta hoon.

Virat was leaving the room.Manvi stopped him calling.

Manvi: Virat!...Thanks!

Virat smiled and left...Manvi again was lost in this certain changes!What was this about!She was confused badly!

Next morning,Manvi was getting ready.Then there was a knock at the door.It was Virat.He brought the breakfast for her.

Manvi: Breakfast! Yahan pe kyun?chalo breakfast table pe chalte hai.

Virat: Nahi Manvi...wahan pe sab tumse bura behave karenge.Mujhe woh accha nahi lagta!aur main tumhara promise bhi nahi tod sakta...so,yahan pe hi breakfast karte hai.Phir tumhe dawai bhi leni hai.

They sat to have the breakfast.Manvi was amazed at his concern for her.She to herself...'yeh chep kabse itna caring ho geya!kabse yeh mere liye itna scoh ne laga!aaj se pehle maine kyun yeh notice nahi kiya!kya hai isske dil mein...'.While she was thinking all these she couldn't hide her smile.Virat saw that...He found that the same smile outside the temple.

Virat: Kya baat hai hero?Itna smile kiske liye kar rahi ho?

Manvi: Hai koyi...

Virat: Mujhe batana kya mana hai?

Manvi: Nahi..par sahi waqt pe batana chahti hoon.

Virat: kahi aap dabbu ka setting karane ke chakkar mein apna setting to nahi kar bethi hai?

Manvi: Aap ko itna chinta karne ki koyi jarurat nahi hai...!

Virat got jealous and upset.He got up and sat on the bed.Manvi could sense it...So,she went to him and tried to pacify him.

Manvi: Arreh tum naraj kyun ho geye?

Virat: Jab tumhe mujhse kuch share hi nahi karna toh ek sath bethke kya fayda?

Manvi: Tum toh serious ho geye yaar!Main toh majak kar arhi thi.

Virat: Ok,maat batao mujhe!

Manvi: Oye heroine nakhre band karo abhi..barna main nahi khayoongi...!

Virat: Usski koyi jarurat nahi hai...main kha raha hoon.

Virat took the plate and Manvi fed him first.Then he fed her.In this way they fed each other...While this was happening,Vanshika was passing Manvi's room.Her eyes caught it and she again sensed their special bond...After that Virat left.but Manvi was really restless...She decided to go to Jeevika.When she was coming,she saw Viren going out.Then she came to Jeevika.Jeevika sent the nurse out for sometime.It was their time.Manvi put her head in Jeevika's lap.

Manvi: Pata hai di,jiju aap se bohat pyaar karte hai...

Jeevika: Ha,Mannu...main bohat lucky hoon ke Viren ji mujhe pati ke roop mein mile.

Manvi: Di yeh pyaar kya hota hai?

Jeevika: Pyaar duniya ki sabse khubsurat chiz hai..Jise bhi saccha pyaar mil jata hai,woh sabse khush nasib hai...pyaar mein mushkil safar bhi asan ho jati hai.agar humsafar sath ho toh duniya se kya,maut se bhi lad sakte ho aap.

Manvi was smiling and remembering her journey with Virat.Jeevika continued.

Jeevika: Pyaar mein sirf ek insane ke sath hi aapka sab kuch jud jata hain.agar aap acche bhi lagna chahte ho toh sirf usski ankho mein.agar aap sahara pana chahte ho toh bhi sirf usski baho mein...agar woh aapse ruth jaaye toh duniya jasie aap ke liye anjan ho jati hain.sab kuch begana sa lagta hai.

Jeevika stopped.She found Manvi totally silent.

Jeevika: Mannu,waise tu yeh sab kyun puch rahi hai...?

Manvi: Yun hi di...Jiju ka aapke liye pyaar dekh kar.

Then the nurse came in.Manvi was about to leave.

Manvi: Accha di,abhi main chalti hoon...aapna kheyal rakhna.

Jeevika: Par Mannu sun toh...!

Manvi left the room in a hurry.Jeevika got tensed...Was Manvi thinking about Virat?

This is the end of this part.Hope u all have enjoyed it...😃

Plz do comment guys.If u like it then I'll continue...😊

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