New FF My First Love(Virman)Part 2 - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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oh plzz continue soon...it seems interesting and plzzz pm me wen u update next
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Posted: 13 years ago
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please continue and PM me :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: jasan22




Because it was just a introduction

where r u updating part 1 dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely start dear...
do cont soon n pm me wen ya update... 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice plz... pm me 4 ur next part😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey guys I finally updated my part
Hope you guys like it


Part 1
All of the vadheras came over to rickesh for one of there relatives wedding.Everybody were busy doing preparation but suddenly Maanvi felt dizzy and fell down.Jeevika came running she was like Maanvi get up and told Viren to call a doctor.When doctor came over Maanvi wink her eye to lie to her family members that she won't be able to attend the wedding.Virat saw Maanvi smiling at the doctor he was like something is wrong,what is going in her mind.
Next day when everybody were ready to go to the wedding Viren was like where is Jeevika.Then Jeevika suddenly came and said that she won't come because Maanvi is not feeling well.Maanvi came downstairs and said di it's okay di I will manage and you can go.Jeevika was like okay if you say so but if you need anything just give me a call.Okay di bye.When finally everybody left Maanvi was so excited to start watching her favorite serial iss pyaar ko kya naam doon.
Maanvi turn on the tv and went to her DVR to watch it but it was deleted.Maanvi got so mad she was like I am hundred percent sure Dabbu did this.But suddenly lights turned off Maanvi was freaking out.Slowly she went to the drawer to get candle out when she lights it up Virat comes.She was like what are you doing here you are suppose to be at the wedding I now.You now what Maanvi I was getting bored so I decided to come home.Maanvi mummers to herself you should let me stay peaceful one day atleast".Virat was like did you anything".No. Virat was like your not happy that I came here are you.Maanvi was like no Virat instead I am really happy with a fake smile.Anyway Virat do you want watch a movie All The Best.He was like okay.Maanvi went in the kitchen and got some popcorn in a bowl.Both were laughing together eating together.When the movie was over Virat was like this was like my first time when I enjoyed watching a movie this much.Well of course you would of this is Maanvi Chadhary's style.
Virat was like you now what Maanvi when ever I talk to you or I am around you time goes do fast and the way you live your life is just so different.I mean till today I couldn't forget my girlfriend Maya but you made me forget her so easily.I was like Virat please don't start this emotional drama again.You now Virat Maanvi ka ek faanda hai life koa masti kushi hoa sa jio na ki muskilio sai.Well Maanvi Chaudhary why didn't you go to the wedding.You now what actually my favorite serial was recorded and I wanted to watch it but Dabbu nai deleted it.When he comes home I first will take a class of him for deleting my serial.
When the vadheras came back they were like Maanvi how are you feeling now.I am fine di.Viren was like Maanvi would you come to Chandigarh with us because we are going to celebrate mine and your di's first anniversary.
Everybody went to there room's and fall asleep.That day Virat couldn't fall asleep he is keep getting that smiling laughing face of Maanvi.But when thinking about her he fall asleep.
Next day everybody got ready any started off for Chandigarh.Maanvi was feeling so board she was like it looks like we are taking exams or something.Maanvi was like everybody let's play guess who I am.Maanvi was like this half are the people that are married and other half are that haven't got married.Maanvi was like Dabbu you come here and tally for the team that got the guess right.First it was Viren's turn he acted out a movie and Jeevika was like hum aapke hai koon.After everybody have went it was Maanvi turn.She was like it is a song 3words and she made a heart.Virat was like I Love You.Maanvi was like yes partner.Everybody reached to Chandigarh.

Precape:
vIrat feeling for Maanvi

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Hope you guys like it
I did use some Hindi in this part so hope you understand it
And yeah if you guys want me to PM you press like and don't forget to comment if you like it




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Posted: 13 years ago
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heyy its nyc ff
continuei t sooon yrr
pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice one ,pls continue and pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
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it was really nice...and thats how i like...i really want virat to fall head over heels for manvi... great stuff...

please add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Amazing i loved the whole movie and iss pyaar ko kya naam doon concept it was fabulous
Continue soon and please please pm me

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