VirMan FF!You Were The One:)) Updtd part8 pg22! - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Just amazing; please continue and PM me :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#12
Amazing start...well written..Pls PM me wen u update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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DeFo Need to Continue. Or else I'm gonna keep bugging u to. Plz pm sending a buddy req now.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#14
definitly continuee!
and thnx for the pm :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#15
Really interesting concept...
Continue soon and PM me when u update.
Plz add me on ur buddy list...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#16

This is the first thing i read when i came back ohhhoo🤣U are actually writing this one.🤣...Kameeni idea idea kiska tha🤣..Today if she sees this she will be in saathve aasman🤣🤣

Well written sis 👍🏼nd pls do PM me when u continue this one<3
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanx for d PM..really interesting begining..different start..so continue soon..n pm me ven u do!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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This was really good...
Please cont soon and can u PM me when u update?
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: guluna

wow really intresting great concept i lovd it

Thank you so much for R&R😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: rev4eva

Thanks for the PM, it was indeed a awesome beginning for your FF. Loved every line that described Virat's pain when he spoke to Dadaji. His definition of looser, aww it was so heart wreaking and painful. Could literally imagine the scene. You definitely need to continue and can't wait to know what happen in the 5 years...

Thank you so much for R&R😊Hope u will like the next part also!

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