ff-virat and manvi(updated part 16 page 20) - Page 4

very cute scene..

great udpate!!! thanks for the PM!

So short update... Bt gud 1 and cntinue soon

Adorable and fantastic I really enjoyed it please continue soon and please PM me

it was a great update

that was amazing
And I loved the whole part and is waiting for the next part
So cont soon

Uuhhmmm im nt really happy wiv the amount u posted do u think its a little less? No its not a little less its a lot less i want more this is such a amazing concept i cant imagine virman in a arranged marriage hun ur amazing but plsz update longer plsz and remember to pm me warna tumhe toh mein chorungi nahi... Remember to pm me

Hey guys first for lovely comments and sorry for such a short updates and I will try to make the update bigger'''.and I will try to pm everyone and sorry if miss some one''''..

Part 6

Virat and Manvi were walking and manvi started to fell little dizzy'''.Manvi was felling loosing her balance

Virat- manvi'.manvi'..u ok?

Virat made her sit on bench''

Virat- manvi yeh lo davai

Manvi- nai mein thik hu'.tum chalo

Virat- nai manvi agar tum yeh dawai nai logi to hum kahi nai ja rahe hai

Manvi- par

Virat- no par var'..or yeh lo dawai le lo

Manvi took the medicine'''..and thought yeh itna bhi bura nai hai jitna mein soch ti thi'..

Manvi- thanks'..

Virat- chale ab ghre chale'.tume fever bhi hai

Manvi- wait'..

Manvi went to shop and got a lucky charm( its like a breclet for boys) for virat

Manvi came back from shop and gave it to virat and said

Manvi- virat yeh lo

Virat- yeh kyu?

Manvi- because tum ne muje bachaya

Virat- maine kaise?

Manvi- dekho agar tum muje gir ne se nai bacha te to mein yahi bahoes padi hoti aur phir mein hospital mein hoti aur muje injection lena padta aur to aur muje biji ki data bhi sun ni padti

Virat- oh '

Manvi- or mein yeh bhi janti hu ki hamari shaadi hum kisi na kisi reason se kar raha hai par hum dost to ban hi sakta hai na? Will you be my friend?

Virat- let me think

Manvi- what? U have to think to accept friendship'..jaldi sacho'.mera paas time nai hai''jaldi jaldi jaldi

Virat- ok''so from now on we are friend'..

Manvi- Ok to yeh lucky charm meri taraf se tumare liye friendship gift thi'.our first friendship gift'.

Virat- ok madam'..to tum bhi 5 minute ruko'..mein abhi aaya'.

Manvi- lekin kaha jaa raha ho?

Virat- yahi rukna'.yaha se hil na bhi mate mein aata hu''..

Virat went to a dress shop and got a pretty dress for manvi''and came back in 10 minutes''..

(This is the dress virat brought for manvi)

Virat- yeh lo

Manvi- yeh kya hai?

Virat- tum ne he abhi kaha na ki hum friends hai to yeh mere taraf se tumara liye'..humari friendship ka pehala gift'..

Manvi- thanks'..waise tum itne bhi bure nai ho'..

Virat- kyu tume lag tat ha ki mein buhara hu?

Manvi- sach batu ya jooth?

Virat- sach batov

Manvi- ha muje lagta tha ki tum bohot sadu ho par ab nai lagta

Virat- ok'thats good...lekin ab chalo varna hum late ho jay age''.

Manvi- ha chalo''..

Manvi and Virat went back home and virat left manvi at her house and went to out house of bachpies and manvi went to her room and jevika and varsha were also there'''

Jevika- manvi tu kaha thi? Tuje pata mein kitni pareshan ho gait hi

Manvi- sorry di vo mein mall gai thi

Varsha- or vo bhi virat jiju ke saath

Jevika- kya or tune muje bataya nai

Manvi- vo di I m sorry mein na aapko bata na hi vali thi lekin aap ghar pe nai tha

Varsh- di aap kaha thai?

Jevika- vo mein

Manvi- vo di na jiju ke saath bahar gai thi(in teasing tone)

Varsh- ohhh to yeh baat hai bhai

Manvi- look what I got for u guys''.

Manvi gave jevika her dress and Varsha her new sandels( I know In last part I forget to mention about Varsha gift'..so sorry for that)and told them that she got dress for ginni and video game for rocky''but varsha saw another bag and asked manvi what is in it and manvi rememberd that bag that virat brought for her and took that bag from Varsha and saw what is inside it and found a beautiful dress in it and she went to mirror and saw how it looked on her and jevika told her that u only told me that u got watch for your self then what is this?

Manvi- vo di yeh dress na

Varsha- arra di samja karo apne hona vala pati ke saath mall gai thi to kya vo ussa khalli haat vapas behta(in teasing tone)

And jevika continue the teasing

Jevika- arre mannu vah bhai yeh to bohot aachi dress hai na

Manvi- ha di yeh virat na hi di hai par vo isliye

Varsha- dekha di khud bata rai hai ki jiju ne use laa ke di hai

Manvi- oyi meri maa ab tu apni bakvas suru kare de uske pehala mein tuje kuch bata du ki yeh gift iss liye hai kyuki from now on we are good friends''.

Varsha- oyi hoi friend ship to ho gai na phir dhire dhire pyaar bhi ho jaya ga

Manvi- apni bakwas na apne pass hi rakh

Jevika- par tuje dress kaisa laga

Manvi- di bohot aacha hai

Chachi came to their room and she also saw a dress and Varsha told her that virat got that for manvi and chachi also teased manvi and then she told them to go to sleep''''.

AT BACHPIES OUT HOUSE:

Virat went to his room and viren, rocky, and ginni were also there and virat went there and sit in his room...

viren- virat tu kaha tha tuje pata hai mein kitna pareshan ho gaya tha

ginni- arre viren bhai virat bhai to bhabi ko mall le ke gaya tha

viren- arre wha...yeh to bohot aachi baat hai...lekin aachanak yeh khayal tere dimag mein kaise aaya

virat- arre bhai vo to usse mall jana tha to mai ne kaha thik hai ot ginni madam aapko kaise pata ki mein manvi ke saath gaya tha?

ginni- bhai muje to sab pata hota hai

Rocky suddenly noticed a luck charm on virat's hand and asked him

rocky- virat bhai aap yeh lucky charm kaha se laya ho? its really cool...

ginni- ha bhai aap pe bohot aacha lage raha hai

virat- vo manvi ne diya

viren- wow wait a minute...kya mein thik to sun raha hu na

virat- vo bhai

viren- 1 minute...lekin yeh acchanak kaise

Virat told viren how he saved manvi and how they became friends and that he also gifted her a dress...

viren- wha mera bhai...

Every one was sitting quietly after couple of minutes virat started talking to ginni and rocky as told by manvi about what they like and viren found it diffrent because virat had never done that before...So viren also asked him about this and virat also told him about this...and viren was supprised and happy by the change in his brother and ginni and rocky were also happy...

ginni- wha abhi bhabi bani bhi nai or itna badlav to scho jab vo bhabhi bana gi tab kitna badlav ho ga...and every one laughed and rocky and giini said that manvi and jevika are really nice and then they went to their own rooms...

Manvi and Virat went to sleep thinking about their new friend ship and viren and jevika went to sleep thinking about each other and their siblings...

hope u guys like...i really worked hard on it and plz tell me how it is and i will continue soon...