ff-virat and manvi(updated part 16 page 20)

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Main Characters:

manvi bachpai- 24 year old completed collage and loves her sister very much and stays with her biji and family in bombay and they are rich.she is bubbly and fun-loving.

Jevika bachpie- 25 year old completed collage and loves her sister very much and stays with her biji and family in bombay and they are rich.she is quite and shy.

virat vadera- 25 year old completed collage and started to work in business with his brother and loves his brother and stays in bombay with his family and they r rich too...
viren vadera- 26 year old completed collage and is bussiness man and loves his brother very much. he is caring.and stays in bombay with his family and they r rich too...




Today viren is going to see a girl name jevika with his mom, brother (virat), bua, dadaji, chacha, chahi, cousine sister ginni and cousine brother rocky.Jevika was little nervouse but manvi was there to comfort her both of the live with their chacha, chachi, cousin brother name rahul, biji, and badi biji...

AT VADERA HOUSE:
viren- chalo i m ready...
virat- oh ho bhai so really excited
ginni- (is in 8th grade)virat bhai aapne rocky ko dekha hai kya?
rocky-(is in 10th grade) kissi ne muje yaad kiya kya?
ginni- haa...ab chale we r getting late...

every one left to meet bachpies...

AT BACHPIE HOUSE:
manvi- c'mon di
jevika- muje bahot daar lag raha hai
manvi- di kuch nai hoga main hu na

vadera family was there and every one came inside the house...


manvi and jevika came downstairs and manvi was wearing
manvi's dress

jevika dress

manvi and jevika introduce themselves to everyone and jevika and viren went on terse to talk and manvi was taking to ginni and virat was sitting with them in manvi's room...
ginni saw crown in manvi's room and her how she got it and manvi told her that she won it in valentine's ball for her dance...and virat and virat had a little nok-jhok and swamini bua thought that jevika is perfect for viren and manvi is perfect for virat so she thought she would talk to her dad and family about it...

part 8-https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2734275&TPN=9
Important Note on page 10.
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Luved it! Plz pm me wen u update.😊
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its an awesome start
please pm me wen u update the next part!!
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love the start!!! do continue soon and plz pm me when you update! thanks
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Nice start plsz continue and pm me hope to see more virika and virman scenes plszzz
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Vadera's reached home and every one was sitting in living room but virat was going to his room but swamini bua stopped him told him to sit with everyone because she has to say something important and now everyone was there and dadaji asked her what is it?

swamini bua- vo jevika to aachi hai
dadaji- haa vo to hai
vanshika- or uski chooti behan bhii bohot pyarri hai
virat(in his mind)pyaari nahi aakdu ladki hai
Just then virat got a phone call and he excused himself to his room and swamini told them that she thinks manvi would be perfect for virat and vadera family and everyone was really happy and then swamini bua told viren that it is his responsibility to tell virat about this and then she called biji to tell about this and biji was really happy to hear this and after talking on phone she called a family meeting but manvi was not there (because she teaches dance at school)and then biji told everyone about this and jevika was really happy to hear this and biji told jevika that this is her responsibilities to tell manvi about this.

There manvi and virat had made first impression about each other. How will jevika and viren will tell their sibling about this?

I know this was little boring but i promise next parts would be fun and sorry for late update i had exams but i will update soon...

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please continue soon i like the concept of this story. please PM me when you do update.
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I love it and wow that was a nice twist of swamini please PM me when you continue...
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