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Posted: 13 years ago
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that was really cute and i liked it a lot!!! thanks for the PM and do continue soon!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Oy hoy virat and manvi please PM me soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks for the PM, now waiting for the friendship to bloom into pyaar😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I just read all the parts
Love this FF
Plz continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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it was really great
please pm me wen u update
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Someone Forgot To Pm Me!!!!! Never Mind Next U Have To Though Back To Your Update...It Was Fabulous I loved it Lol The Teasing Was Damn Cute Loved The Start Of Virman's Friendship So Shweet...Remember To Pm Me Next Time Or Ill Be Upset
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Hey guys thanks once again for your wonderful comments''..

Part 7

Virat and Viren's elder brother arjun and his wife purvi had came and now they were in virat and viren's room and manvi, Varsha, and jevika were sitting in manvi and jevika room.

Purvi- wow'..jevika to bohot aachi ladki hai''she is really pretty'..

Arjun- tabhi to mera bhai ko vo pasand aa gayi'.

Virat was siting and playing on his cell phone''''

Purvi- oyi virat tera kya haal hai

Viren told them every thing from the begging about virat and manvi how they fought and then become friends''..

Purvi- wow'..ab to hume manvi se baat karni hi padengi

Purvi took phone from virat's hand and called manvi''an put the phone on speaker''

Manvi- hello'..

Purvi- hello'.mein purvi bol rahi hu'..

Manvi- ok'par mein ne aapko pechana nai

Purvi- haan'..tum muje nai janti par mein tume pachenti hu

Manvi- matlab?

Purvi- mein virat ki bhabi hu

Manvi- oh hi

Purvi- vo na virat ko kuch kaam tha

Virat whispered to his bhabhi- muje kya kaam tha?

Purvi gave phone to virat

Virat- hello

Manvi- hello- kya kaam tha?

Virat- vo kuch nai

Manvi- to phone kyu kiya?

Virat- vo

Manvi- vo kya?

Virat- kuch nai vo galti se phone lag gaya

Manvi- ok bye

Virat- bye

Purvi- kya yaar virat

Virat- kya kya yaar virat aapne phone kyu kiya?

Arjun- hey c'mon bro chill yaar

Next Morning-

Manvi went to school and both families were sitting over there and badi ma told virat to pick up manvi''and virat went to pick up manvi to her school''..

At School-

Manvi was talking to some 11 and 12 grade girls and suddenly virat came

Manvi- tum yaha

Girls- di hum kal mile te hai

Manvi- ok bye

Virat- vo haa bua ne kaha ki tume pick up kare lu

They were walking back to the car''..

Manvi- kyu tum khud pick up karne nai aa sakete the

Virat- matlab?

Manvi- we r friends na'.

Virat- oh ok mein ab tume khud pick up karne aaunga

manvi got in the car and virat started driving but manvi told him to stop and virat asked him why? And she told him she wants to eat ice-cream and they went to shop and manvi told him that she always comes here with her di and used to come here with her mom and dad and this is her favourite ice-cream shop''.They sat on a table''.

Waiter- what would u like mame?

Manvi- I would like to have 1 chocolate ice-cream and virat tum konsi ice-cream khoun gai

Virat- strawberry

Waiter- ok sir'.

Virat- to tum e chocolate ice-cream pasand hai

Manvi- haa its my favourite'..tumne kabhi chocolate ice cream taste kiya hai?

Virat- no'.or tumne kabhi stwaberry ice-cream taste kiya hai?

Manvi- no''maine chocolate ice-cream ke siva koi or ice cream taste hi nai kiya'.

Virat- then y don't u try strawberry ice cream and I will try chocolate ice-cream

Manvi-ok

They ate ice cream and told manvi told him that from now on she will always eat strawberry and he tols her he really liked chocolate ice cream and he will also always eat it'.

Then they went home and manvi went to her room and virat went to his room''.

Jevika asked manvi why she is late and manvi told her she went to eat ice-cream

Manvi- vo di mein ice-cream khane gayi thi

Varsha- kon si flavor?

Jevika- arre vahi uski favourite chocolate flavore'..

Manvi- nai di mein iss baar strawberry flavor khai

And manvi told jevika about it.

Varsha- pinch me

Manvi pinched Varsha''..

Varsha- ouch

Jevika- mein ne tuje itni baar kaha ki yeh ice-cream try kare lekin tune khabi nai ki

Manvi- aasa hi di

Varsha teased her a little and then she went home and jevika went to sleep''and manvi was trying to sleep but couldn't she was felling little different but couldn't tell what it was and it was same with virat and so he decided to call manvi and when manvi saw his call she felt happy and nervous at same time and then both of them talked for hours and then went to sleep''

After couple of days they continue talking to each other and virat would always go to pick her up to school as he told her''

Today they are at mall because manvi wanted to go to shoping''..and there manvi was talking to a boy and was asking him something and then they walked away'.

Virat- tume sharam nai aati mera hota hua kisi aur ladke se baat kar rai ho'.

Manvi- kyu jelous

Virat- nai to mein kyu jelous hounga?

Manvi- muje kya pata

Virat- vo manvi muje tume kuch batana hai'..

Manvi- to bolo na

Virat-yaha nai

Manvi- to kaha

Virat- close your eyes'.

Manvi- but why?

Virat- tum kitne saval karti ho

Manvi closed her eyes and virat took her to the ball room (it was in the mall) and then virat told manvi to open her eyes and manvi saw the room was all decorated with red balloons, candles and etc''manvi for once thought she was dreaming but then realized it was reality''..

Virat- manvi I have to tell u something''..muje pata nai kab, kaise, or kaha par tumse pyaar ho gaya in pichle kuch dino mein ne reliaze kiya ki tum kitni important ho mera liye'''jab bhi tum hasti thi to muja aacha lagta tha, or jab tum udas(sad) hoti thi to muje bilkul aacha nai lagta tha'' or muje tumse baat karne ka maan kar ta tha''.Manvi I LOVE YOU''..will you marry me? Or haa yeh mein tumse puch raha hu to tum javab dena tum apni biji ke bare mein soch ke mat javab dena''

Manvi- virat'..i love you too''or yeh mera jawab hai kisi or ka nai''.mein bhi tum se yeh kehana chati thi ki muje tum pasand aane laga ho par pata nai chala ki kaise batau''

Virat took out a ring from his pocket and put it on manvi's engagement fingure'..

Virat- so as I told u ki sari ladkiya muj pe marti hai'

Manvi- oyi hello zayada hava mein uchal ne ki zarrot nai hai''.

Just then manvi got a call from beeji and she told manvi to come home fast''..and manvi said ok...

hope u guys like it...will continue soon...

Edited by nis_n - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48
awww sooo cuttteee !!!!!!!!!!!!! <333333
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awwweee
That was really cute . And finally they have realized there feelings for each other. I hope wen she reaches home there is no problem. But m waiting for the next part . Update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Aww they finally confessed please PM me when you continue

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