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Manal Ali

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Posted: 13 years ago

#161

Lekhu 😲 !! OMG Thnks Alot <3 Means alot to m e<3

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Jazmin

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Posted: 13 years ago

#162

aye haye Behoodi!! you wrote a Virman SS!! woot woot!!! 😃 chal...let me read and comment...

Part 1:

haye re teri spelling...😆 sumfin rong...🤣...lol...the chemist is just...uff! India mein confidentiality naam ki koi cheez hai ke nahin...koi aaire gaire aa kar kehta hai he's Manvi's family and he buys it...uff!! koi aur hota toh...like a stalker or something 😡 but haila...Lung Tumor!! eeks!! ...when he said "im there for you...with you"...aww!!! 😳

Part 2:

the way VIrat takes charge is cute and at the same time a bit annoying as im putting myself in Manvi's shoes...yes he cares...that is clear...but as Manvi..i'd be so annoyed with that CHEP! 😆😆😆 i'm just saying!! 😉...why does Manvi keep saying "sagi"...we know she's your sister...stop aleady...ha ha...j/k...Shloku! 😲 oh the poor boy...what a nickname!! 🤣...Virat to Manvi's rescue!! aww!!!

*leaving work so will edit later*

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Manal Ali

@.YixingsManal.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#163

love yeww jaz <3 n ur detail comment <3 ! will reply once u done 🤣

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Malangan

@TeriMalang

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Posted: 13 years ago

#164

awesome OS..

i read it in one go..
i wanted it to continue..but OS is n OS..
it was soo very good...

ur a brilliant writer...

do write more..😊😊

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Manal Ali

@.YixingsManal.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#165

@Sweeet Shab Awww Thnaks LOL <3

Wrote an Happy 1 :) postin now :)

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Rachel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#166

oye oye oye Manl... tu toh badi talented nikala yaaar!!! How did I miss all this? was this posted in FB? I lovvved it yaaar, keep writing man. Take other alternate routes in the story now. I lubvvved reading it.😳

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Manal Ali

@.YixingsManal.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#167

Rach my kamini <3 ya it was on fb too <3 thnks <3

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â™ªáƒ¦â™¥Jazzy..!â™ªáƒ¦â™¥

@thejazzgal

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Posted: 13 years ago

#168

lovely OS..

loved to the core..

sorry for late comments..:)
now reading ur another OS .. virman shaadi..

u r an awesome writer.. must sayy :)

do write more such loves OS's/SS's &FF's...

Edited by thejazzgal.s - 13 years ago