Abhi Abhi merey dil main sawaal aaya hai...for the writers :) P.7 - Page 4

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Posted: 7 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_

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Kya baat hai, it's almost 12 and you are here. Aaj kisi ka birthday to nahi...😆
Last I remember u were here till mid night was on your birthday, and I remember not wishing you...🤣

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I was awake cos it wasn't just my birthday, it was my sister's anniversary 😆

N aaj am awake cos of my lil devil ( Niece) is in no mood to sleep today.
Waiting for madam 😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: Nik03

🤣
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I was awake cos it wasn't just my birthday, it was my sister's anniversary 😆
That's a nice coincidence!😊

N aaj am awake cos of my lil devil ( Niece) is in no mood to sleep today.
Aww... Lil munchkin !❤️

Waiting for madam 😆
Wait wait!😆

Kuch intezaar ache hotey Hain!

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#34
Here I am with my answers..

A reader I am so I read most of the ShraMan Write-ups and Fantastic ones they'll are..but somewhere I always wanted to read something solely about Sumo n her feelings... Even though I felt a disconnect with her character in the last episodes of the show but she is one of my favorite telly character.
Her character was left unexplored somewhere..where as it isn't the case with Shravan. (I realised whatever I wrote, it was all about Sumo😛.)

Imperfectly perfect...I honestly don't know how n Why did I write it in the first place. 😆
It was that one incident in my mind n Sumo looked perfect for that character and I weaved whatever came to my mind at the time.
About the title, I agree with Zoya here. It came instantly to me.

Shikayatein.. Well the theme of Likhavat was rain n Anger and I wanted Sumo to let out her anger or frustration. So...bas ho gaya 😛
The title, again it was an instant one.. As it was all about shikayatein. Deep rooted!

As for whatever else I wrote, same thing happened. 😊

I hope It answers your question.. Thesis or not, your problem😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: Nik03

@Bold
@reply ❤️


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Posted: 7 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: orion23

@Lara Bro! Kya jawab diya hai!

I concur to most of what you said ❤️


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Posted: 7 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: orion23

Cappy!


What a post!

I'll give a general gist of how I come up with names and its similar in a way to Lara's strategy.

I have prompts generally, really vague ideas. I let them develop in my brain, I imagine many different scenarios and then when I have a better idea of what I'm planning to do, a name pops khud se. Cause my names are very in sync with the update, the name itself is enough to give an inclining of the update that follows.

Alfaaz happened cause words are important, said or unsaid. And that's what I wanted to target on this piece. Inception of Alfaaz happened 3 months before I put the prompt up. The actual prompt was a few words, viz:

Apology
Skype
College
Prom
Ragging
Topping
Business
Oxford
Fight
Pain
Longing
Happily ever after

Between all this Alfaaz the name struck. And you have seen exactly how I've built on this prompt.

I won't give details of all cause generally its the prompt that determines my piece name :D

About Alation though, I had used this word in the poetry of Alaahida. I had fallen in love with that word. As a new year's resolution, I had decided to write something towards giving hope. This was November I believe, early. When I spoke to Nik about it, I told her I'm planning a poetry book, she flipped needless to say. Too happy she got. And while discussing what it would have, and what it would contain of, Alation struck.

I hope this is the answer you were looking for 🤗


Awesome technique 👍🏼
It's a lot of weaving and intuition and wisdom.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: Nik03

Here I am with my answers..


A reader I am so I read most of the ShraMan Write-ups and Fantastic ones they'll are..but somewhere I always wanted to read something solely about Sumo n her feelings... Even though I felt a disconnect with her character in the last episodes of the show but she is one of my favorite telly character.
Her character was left unexplored somewhere..where as it isn't the case with Shravan. (I realised whatever I wrote, it was all about Sumo😛.)

Imperfectly perfect...I honestly don't know how n Why did I write it in the first place. 😆
It was that one incident in my mind n Sumo looked perfect for that character and I weaved whatever came to my mind at the time.
About the title, I agree with Zoya here. It came instantly to me.

Shikayatein.. Well the theme of Likhavat was rain n Anger and I wanted Sumo to let out her anger or frustration. So...bas ho gaya 😛
The title, again it was an instant one.. As it was all about shikayatein. Deep rooted!

As for whatever else I wrote, same thing happened. 😊

I hope It answers your question.. Thesis or not, your problem😆



So, your titles possess you. Intuition at it's best. 👍🏼

I love Shikayatein.
Such a masterpiece. 👏👏


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Posted: 7 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: devilaonmoon



So, your titles possess you. Intuition at it's best. 👍🏼

I love Shikayatein.
Such a masterpiece. 👏👏


Coming this from you means a lottt!
Thank you so much Lara!!🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: KitkitMkb

Tabby ka post!!! ⭐️

❤️
Ek welcoming change from Sal ka post 😆
Sal ka post is what we need the most 😆


And you have to answer this one too, okay?!
Okay :)

So let's see for Holding You, it didn't take too long because I had most of the story planned in my head (chapter 3 was the first chapter I had in mind) but i wanted it to be significant.
And it goes so well with the story!!

I chose the title for many reasons:
Bring them on!

First of all, it can be seen from both the character's pov.
True that..

In chapter 6, Sumo tells Shravan to hold onto her (physically) but like Nik had said it means more than holding each other physically, it's Shravan and Sumo not wanting to let go of the person they have grown to love (Chota Shravan and Choti Sumo) and at the same time realizing that with time everyone changes and so have them, Sumo has become a tough nut to crack, she doesn't let him in easily and he is afraid of feeling.
Perfect !! It is about that realisation...acceptance... and their timeless love.

But with time the realization comes that the core of the person remains unchanged and from here on they want to hold onto the 'new version' of their soulmate and never let go.
Never let go. Sigh !

It's also about the safar from holding grudges to holding hands (the sanskariness is still intact 😆) to holding onto each other trhough adversity and merry!
Their Hand holding is life.
A life time of togetherness. #HY

Got too carried away here 😆

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