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orion23

@orion23

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Posted: 7 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: swatiagarwal89

I never thought a day like this would come...😕

Pehla wala mujhe ab tak pareshan kar raha hai...!!!

Arey re!

Mujhe aaise lag ra mere updates se peedtit hai sab..

Sab res se pareshan..

Ek word likh Do, kaafi hai..

Stress nahi leneka 😃

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CarpeDiem_365

@CarpeDiem_365

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: orion23

See it's like this..
You are always around, kahin bhi ho.. kuch bhi kaam ho.. update aya, and you come.. that shows how much you care.
Toh woh res bhi sar aankho par..

Dil lelo mera!

❤️

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Sidhi

@ArtThouTheBest

Navigator

Posted: 7 years ago

#103

Res

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Unres

I so much love this chapter❤️

This was so hilarious🤣

The whole 'Tum homeless dikh rahi ho', 'Bhaiya mere piche goons hai', 'Chotte mat bulao mujhe', siren ke saath hamare hero ka entry and other comic scenes...I was giggling and laughing the whole time😆

And the way you involve all your characters and make them a hero on their own is really👏

Is baar chota sa hi comment...University life😭...So sorry for that

And thank you for the PM

Love, Sidhi

Edited by Ivvy - 7 years ago

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Apoorva Kushwah

@akrocks77

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

#104

Amazing update Zoya!!

How do Sumo come up with all this.😆

Pushkar and Varun ...OMG!!

I am glad Varun was doing something other standing and talking on the phone.

Bichari Sumo uska pura surprise ...chaupat kar diya puskar and varun ne.😛

Pichla plan Ramnath caught ...this one Shravan.

Shravan played them so well.

For a moment even i thought he brought Police.😆

What's up with this father son duo...keep on failing her plans.😉

I love your Sumo so much.

Shravan is leaving😭...bring him back soon please.

Super excited for the next one.

Do update soon

Apoorva

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orion23

@orion23

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_

Dil lelo mera!
❤️

Le liya😆

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orion23

@orion23

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: Ivvy
Res

Hey bro!

Long time!

😃

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orion23

@orion23

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: akrocks77
Amazing update Zoya!!
How do Sumo come up with all this.😆
Pushkar and Varun ...OMG!!
I am glad Varun was doing something other standing and talking on the phone.
Bichari Sumo uska pura surprise ...chaupat kar diya puskar and varun ne.😛
Pichla plan Ramnath caught ...this one Shravan.
Shravan played them so well.
For a moment even i thought he brought Police.😆
What's up with this father son duo...keep on failing her plans.😉

I love your Sumo so much.
Shravan is leaving😭...bring him back soon please.

Super excited for the next one.
Do update soon

Apoorva

Thank you so much Apu!

Love ya!

Will reply in detail soonish..

And about him returning, it will be a fun ride!

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Apoorva Kushwah

@akrocks77

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: orion23

Thank you so much Apu!
Love ya!
Will reply in detail soonish..
And about him returning, it will be a fun ride!

He he...all my friends call me Appu only in school and college😆

Love you too ..much more ...i feel so happy when i see you here active.

No problem take your time.

Well all set for fun then😃

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BloodRune

@BloodRune

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#109

Zoya this was just a beautiful piece!

Okay, so I'm in bed reading this piece (and writing this comment) with the blanket on my head and that whole prank that Pushkar and Varun played on Shravan had me literally the phone done on the bed just so that I could control my absolute glee and laughter and then it turned out that the genius played a prank on them .🤣 I couldn't even laugh out loud like I wanted to!

And then you went ahead with one of my all time favourite songs and I was a goner! So much love for that song and that section, specifically.

Can't wait to find out more!

Edited by BloodRune - 7 years ago

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Nik03

@Nik03

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#110

Originally posted by: orion23

Arey re!
Mujhe aaise lag ra mere updates se peedtit hai sab..
Sab res se pareshan..
Ek word likh Do, kaafi hai..
Stress nahi leneka😃

@Bold Sacchi?!!!

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