I Need You! - A Shraman story : Part 8 on Page 16 - Page 4

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Posted: 8 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: sptrno

awww beautiful dear



Hey thanks 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#32
Part 2

Sumo: Shravan?

Shravan: Urrgghhh! Kya hai?

Sumo: Choro mujhe ab! Niche chalo.

Shravan: Nah!

Sumo: Please.(trying to get free of his hold)

Shravan: Sumooo! No!!(pulling her more)

Sumo: Shravan I can't breathe!

Shravan: (chuckling and releasing her) Oh Sorry..! But Sumo, you are so small.

Sumo: How dare you ha! You know, you should have been married to Urvashi, she is much shorter than me too! He he!!

Shravan: (irritated) Sumo, you should stop taking her name. Nahi to...

Sumo: Nahi to kya Shravu?(showing the tongue)

And they start giggling and chasing throughout their room. Once Sumo thinks that she will get caught by Shravan, she somehow manages to get rid of him and run towards the door. But Shravan being much more faster, catches her and pull her. Oh no! They couldn't keep their balance and fall on the bed! Sumo on top of Shravan.

Thuuddd!

Shravan: Aaahhh!

Sumo: Shravan! Shravu! Tum thik ho na?(choking)

Shravan doesn't make a sound.

Sumo: (tears forming in her eyes) Shravuu!!! Aakhe kholo please.(She gets the water and sprinkle some on his face and pats) Shravan, Shravan?!
PUSHKAR! PREETI!!(crying vigorously)

Hearing her cries, the whole family rush inside their room. They get shocked to see their boy like that. Ramnath and Nirmala cried his name and rushed towards him. Preeti went to Sumo and hugged her.

Pushkar: Sumo? Bhaiya ko kya hua? Bol na.

Sumo: Kya pata Pushkar. Tu Arora uncle ko call kar aur jald se jald bula unhe.(turning towards Nirmala) Maa?

Nirmala: (crying and hugging Sumo) Kuch nahi hoga usse Suman.

After some time, Pushkar brings doctor.

Sumo: Uncle!! Uncle dekho na Shravan ko. Kya ho gaya usse?

Arora Uncle: Suman, control yourself. I am seeing him right? Just have some patience. Please thori der k liye is room se jao sab. Pushkar, you stay.

Sumo: Please Uncle, may I stay? Please.

Arora Uncle: Nahi, tum jao aur get some water for yourself. Ramnath ji, please jaiye aap log. I need to check him.

Ramnath: Jaise aap kaho Arora. Suman, chalo niche(holding her by her shoulders) Chalo beta.

Sumo, Preeti, Vandy, Ramnath, Nirmala, Kamini and Lalaji settle in downstairs. While Ramnath and Nirmala are tensed, Sumo is shivering and the others are worried.

After half an hour, Pushkar and Doctor comes downstairs with a worried face.

Arora Uncle: Ramnath ji, had Shravan been physically injured in the recent days?

Ramnath: What? No.

Sumo: Uncle, kya bol rahe ho aap!

Nirmala: (guessing) I think yes, Mr Arora.

Sumo: Maa?!! What? How, when?

Nirmala: (crying bitterly) Aditya...

Arora Uncle: Whatever be it, Shravan has got much hurt in his head. It was very bad to keep him like this. Suman, beta I need to talk to you.

Sumo: (stammering and shivering) Y-yy-yye--yyeesss Uncle!

Arora Uncle: Shravan ko head mein thora sa swelling hai, that's normal though. But..

Sumo: B-bb-but w-wh-whaa-whattt Uncle?

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Hey Everyone!
It's Sreyu here..
I am up with the second part of this story.
I know that I seem much merciless here. But good stories are worth suspenses! Don't worry, I won't do much harm to this couple, they have had a lot.
Waiting for your votes and comments on this small suspense part.
Happy Reading!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#33
Suspense update 😉
Soon unfold wat happened to Shravan
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Posted: 8 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: -Emerald-

Suspense update😉

Soon unfold wat happened to Shravan



Sure 😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
#35
A very good update!!
And thanks for the assurance at the foot-note!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#36
A very good update sreyu 👏👏
I hope shravan will be fine
I hope there is no scene of memory loss😭😭
Plz unfold the mystry soon dear 😳😳
Thanks for pm 😛
Update soon
Waiting for next dear

Luv
Tii se tinna😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: Tinna28

<font color="#cc0099" face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">A very good update sreyu👏👏</font>

<font color="#cc0099" face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">I hope shravan will be fine</font>
<font color="#cc0099" face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">I hope there is no scene of memory loss😭😭</font>
<font color="#cc0099" face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">Plz unfold the mystry soon dear😳😳</font>
<font color="#cc0099" face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">Thanks for pm😛</font>
<font color="#cc0099" face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">Update soon</font>
<font color="#cc0099" face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">Waiting for next dear</font>
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<font color="#cc0099" face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">Luv</font>
<font color="#cc0099" face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">Tii se tinna😛</font>



Hey, thank you so much. And don't worry, there will be no memory losses, as I myself am much tired of that.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#38
Shravan got hurt on his head by hammer when Aditya's goons kidnapped him. That pain showing its effects after many days. 😲 nobody knows about his kidnap except Nirmala, hope he would be fine. How Sumo will react to this when she come to know Aditya kidnapped on the day of their court marriage & he came 5 hrs late to take her to MM. 😭 Sumo has to show her Sumoness to Aditya 😡

Thanks for PM

Vinu
Edited by vimikrao - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#39
Poor Shravan hurt. I thought he was fooling around with Sumo 😆 Forgot about Aditya's encounter 😎
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Posted: 8 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: vimikrao

Shravan got hurt on his head by hammer when Aditya's goons kidnapped him. That pain showing its effects after many days. 😲 nobody knows about his kidnap except Nirmala, hope he would be fine. How Sumo will react to this when she come to know Aditya kidnapped on the day of their court marriage & he came 5 hrs late to take her to MM. 😭 Sumo has to show her Sumoness to Aditya 😡

Thanks for PM

Vinu



Yes, after all she is Shravan's Sumo.
Thank you for your support 😊

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