Shraman ff- Destined thread 3 chapter 28 updated @page 17 (26/11/17)

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sweksha

@sweksha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#61

ohhooo aapko yaad aa gai kya baat hai 😉 gussa to mai bahut hona chahti thi but kya karu aapne mere shravan ko jo bacha liya...mera Sara gussa sumo ko chala gya... 😛 and shravan's bath scene 😳 you naughty girl...that was funny...I was thinking show me sumo ka kya reaction hota 😆 ...short update but awesome...I can understand your majboori dear for not updating because I am also busy with studay... my finals are going to start on 20th April...and these physics and maths will kill me..isliye mai aapka dukh samajh sakti hun 😭 ..thanks for pm and big thank you for saving our hotiee...don't worry about next update...focus on your finals and all the best...kripya spelling or grammar me dhyaan naa de meri English thodi zyada acchi hai.. 😃

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KitkitMkb

@KitkitMkb

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Posted: 8 years ago

#62

I was right ! Shravan was shot 😆
And finally we got his point of view !
I loved the subit care between them, like so much has happened between both of them but the care is still present ❤️
The shower scene had me in splits 😆
I hoped that Sumo would sent the nurse but oh well I am sure we'll be getting more Of ShraMan.
All the best for your exams, slay them ;)
🤗

Edited by KitkitMkb - 8 years ago

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phoenix_edkv

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Posted: 8 years ago

#63

My guess was wrong. I thought Shravan would kill Aditya and then some court room scenes we'll get.

But I'm so glad my guess went wrong.

Thank God Shravan is safe.

I like the story from Shravan's POV.

Sumo jealous of nurse. Jealousy is the best catalyst for love reaction.

I love this obsessive Shravan.

Itne pain mein bhi, his thoughts are about Sumo.

I never ever said this, but Sanjh, I love your Shravan a lot.

He did terrible mistake doubting Sumo, but still, I love him that way.

Short update, no probs Sanjh. I'll wait. Exams are more important than anything else.

All the best for your exams. And next update must be a bang with some Shramanlicious moments.

Love

Madhu

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Spandana

@sptrno

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+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#64

Awww beautiful as always dear...love it..thank you

Take care All the best...

Love,

Spandana

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Reeba shukla

@ReebaS

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Posted: 8 years ago

#65

Oh my god finally... After a huge gap... But awesome one ha specially the sponge bath section. Thank god our super sumo save him.. This update was the mixture of all emotions happy , sad, comedy, and silent romance.. Loved it Rockstar you Rocked again

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Tinna28

@Tinna28

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Posted: 8 years ago

#66

This was again a lovely update 😊
And finally from shravan pov 😛
Firstly i thought goli lagi sumo ko
But then it is shravan 😭
But finally everything is going to well
Sumo is stilll very much affected because of shravan 's parents
Sumo is jealous of nurse ...too cute
ShravAn answer is mindblowing 😳
Again good update diii

And All the best for ur exams
😛 😳

Edited by Tinna28 - 8 years ago