I Missed You- A ShraMan OS - Page 14

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: nuttynuts

Wow! That was fantastic! You have brilliantly transformed the dialogues and the track into something we wished to see on screen. And thank you for that! It was totally worth reading your story. Must say, you're gifted! Beautifully penned. Would love to read more of your works.

Nuts


Thank you so much.
Thanks a lot for reading and commenting.
It means a lot to me.😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: evaviego


I am not sure at all.
But dekhte hai. 😆
Thanks a ton for reading Sanjh.
It means a lot 😳




No no dekhte Hai nahin na...Please do write...Please


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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ArpitaSingh1806

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Unres

HEY ARPI DARLING 😳
Sorry for replying this late. Really sorry. 😳
socho zindagi res unres saath main kara hai maine😛
kudos to you

Eva di!!! itni acchi hai hindi aapki👏
mujhe translator use karna padha iss dialogue ke liye
"Jaanti ho Suman ye rishtey bhi na paudhon ki tarah hote hai , jis tarah paudon ka khayal rakhna padta hai, unki hifasat karni padthi hai. Aise hi rishton ko bhi sanjhok kar rakhna padta hai. Unhe sambhal kar rakhna padta hai. Rishton ko thoda waqt dena chaiye panapne ke liye. Saans lene ke liye. Hum sabko thodi space chaiye hoti hai, aise hi rishton ko bhi ek tehraav ek space ki zarurat hoti hai. Tum apne aur Shravan ke rishtey ko thodi space dekhe dekho. Phir dekhna sab thik ho jayega."

Arps. Yaar ye wala toh maine bhi nahi likha., 😆 this is from the show only. I just edited a few lines to shorten it bus.😳
thanks to deepti di nahi to aapne to kabhi likhna hi nahin tha😡
voh bhi itna accha likha, main kya bolun...i'm toungue tied but Sumo nahi thi

Yaaa... Alll thanks to Deepti Diii 😉

but i can totally imagine Sumo talking so much...
like maine count kare number of words only she said obviously ms word se
can you believe it 1 thousand 6 hundred 38 words😲😲

OH MY GOD...!!!! Did you actually calculate the no. of words 😲 1638 words...!!!! 😆
You are amazing Arps. 😆

and i love this Sumo of yours...she is so expressive, so free and the biggest thing she chose Shravan over her self respect and i can't thank her enough for that...👏

Exactly the same reason I love this Sumo too. 😊

i'm not gonna quote one which is my favorite because that would be underestimating such a wonderful piece which made me go through a ride of emotions from excitement to ecstasy and even to irritation when shravan didn't reply.

Awww... Thats so sweet of you to say that. Thank you so much.

i love pushkar to no extent right now. but ek cheez show similar thi ek dusre se pehle unhone dusron se ek dusre ke prati pyaar izhaar kiya, but Pushkar's way better choice than Ramnath.😛

Pushkar could have been the perfect cupid. But CVs ka dimaag chalna band ho gaya tha 😆

all i will say is
this piece was: magnificent, imposing, impressive, awe-inspiring, grand, splendid, majestic, monumental, glorious, sumptuous, resplendent, lavish,
beautiful (trust me that's all google offers as the synonyms for great...agar aur bhi hote to main likh deti)

Oh MY MY...!!! So much mehnat for me. 😳
Mein toh itne mein hi flat ho gayi Arps

i would like to conclude with one thing:
tell me the name. who the hell told you that you couldn't write?

Its juse me...!!! 🤣


if no one did and you just assumed your self, so you should better stop assuming nahi toh i'm gonna eat you alive. and deepti di woh to aapko chodengi nahi...you know that dont you?

Okay bro. Will not assume anything ever now... 😆


better right more😆
love
arpita


Thank you so much for reading this Arpi 😳
I am so glad you liked this.
And so sorry for replying so late.
Maafi de diyo please 😳
Hilarious GIFs ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Itssanjh




No no dekhte Hai nahin na...Please do write...Please



Oh Man...!!! 😆
Agnes is ❤️
Cute GIF Sanjh.
But cant promise anything, but will try 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome one shot! But I would rather you continue this into a short story. Greedy much? Food for thought!
Cheers!
Nuts
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Posted: 8 years ago
awesome OS dear..
beautifully written..
thnx for pm dear..
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: nuttynuts

Awesome one shot! But I would rather you continue this into a short story. Greedy much? Food for thought!

Cheers!
Nuts


Thanks Nuts. 😉

Short Story...!!! 😲

Sorry. But I dont think i'll be able to continue this one. 😳
Really sorry. 😕
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: _Eternity_

awesome OS dear..

beautifully written..
thnx for pm dear..


Thank You So Much Ranju 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow! A recreation of ShraMan's unique friendship wala love.
The return of Sumo Day with Pushkar's lost brain.
Rightly said ki joh jhoot ek ache kaam ke liye bola jaye usse jhoot nhi kehte.
"Tumhari Sumo, Suman ban gayi." This line.. Too good!
And this one too: "Us din us jhumke ke sath mera dil bhi toot gaya tha."
Oh mine! And this one too: "Tum to jaante ho na." She told him in his style. Awesome!
Hallelujah! She told him about those cutely senseless Love Tests!
"Phir kabhi bataungi. Abhi bahut kuch bach raha hai." Haha.. so adorable. A chance lost will have no chance of coming back. He surely couldn't risk it.
"Every time I thought you were about to confess yeh dosti beech mein aa jati thi." Funny... He was so fond of kulhadi on his feet!
"Mein matlabi nahi hoon." I feel for her. Poor Sumo.
Oh My Dear God!! He sang!! he sang, he sang, he sang for her!!
You can't see me but I'm crying and dancing together.
What a brilliant choice of song!
A bone crushing hug!!! Good Lord you can take me with you! And he finishes the song with her in his arms. So effing beautiful!
This piece of yours had everything we wished for. A dream come true!
I want to say lots more but just can't find words.
Awestruck. Tongue-tied. Throat choked with emotions.
I'll just say one word :Perfect.

I Missed You Scene
The most underrated meaningful scene.
I'm glad you chose to write on it.
Trust me you've done a marvelous job.

If you call it your first attempt then sorry I don't believe you.
Fabulous one but Hello? What do you mean by the last one? This isn't happening. Big No No! We want more from you.

Please Keep Writing!
Pretty wala please.
Love,
Swarnima.
Edited by theGoldenGirl - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: theGoldenGirl

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(I'll take a lot of time to unress)
But then too wish to reserve my comment. 😃

Sorry for keeping you waiting.

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