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KitkitMkb

@KitkitMkb

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Posted: 8 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: evaviego

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<font color="#ff0000">Thanks a ton for reading Saleha.🤗</font>

Your birthday epi ? Mujhe yaad rahe ga 😉
I quite like your Sumo, she's expressive, meri pata nahi kab bole gi 😆
I really want to read more from you ! If I suggest you an episode can you write on it if you have time ?
And yes waiting for your your comment 😆
🤗

Edited by KitkitMkb - 8 years ago

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evaviego

@evaviego

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: KitkitMkb

Your birthday epi ? Mujhe yaad rahe ga 😉
I quite like your Sumo, she's expressive, meri pata nahi kab bole gi 😆
I really want to read more from you ! If I suggest you an episode can you write on it if you have time ?
And yes waiting for your your comment 😆
[>:)<]

Your Sumo said kitna kuch "Confessions" mein. 😳

Saleha, mujhse jaan maang leti mein de deti. 😆

You are asking me to write again, i am nervous already. 😲

I cant promise but i'll definitely try. Toh batao aapka suggestion😉

And yaa.. I promise i'll UNRES on you SS today itself. 🤣

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KitkitMkb

@KitkitMkb

Rocker

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Posted: 8 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: evaviego

Your Sumo said kitna kuch "Confessions" mein.😳
Saleha, mujhse jaan maang leti mein de deti.😆
You are asking me to write again, i am nervous already.😲
I cant promise but i'll definitely try. Toh batao aapka suggestion😉

And yaa.. I promise i'll UNRES on you SS today itself.🤣

There is one ShraMan scene I LOVE and it's really underrated but I'd love to read your take on it. Just after the Aditya fiasco when she comes to him with food and they have so much to say but they just can't. This scene is so beautiful like it still showed after everything how much they cared <3
To boliye aapne iss dost keliye kar paye gi ? 😆
Unress aram se no issues ;)

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evaviego

@evaviego

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#124

@Sal

Now thats one super beautiful scene i tell you.

Mein puri koshish karungi. I'll try my level best.

No idea if i'll be able to do justice to it or not.

But i'll surely try.

And nahi hua toh bura na maanna. 😛

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KitkitMkb

@KitkitMkb

Rocker

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Posted: 8 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: evaviego
@Sal
Now thats one super beautiful scene i tell you.
Mein puri koshish karungi. I'll try my level best.
No idea if i'll be able to do justice to it or not.
But i'll surely try.
And nahi hua toh bura na maanna.😛

Haina ? This scene is SO underrated ❤️
I know you'll give your best and no tension ;)
Main bura kyon manoon gi ?
You are doing it on my insistance it means a lot 🤗
I am sure I'll love it ❤️
Chalo I have to study now

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1095142

Hibernated

Posted: 8 years ago

#126

Res

...

Unres

socho zindagi res unres saath main kara hai maine😛

kudos to you

Eva di!!! itni acchi hai hindi aapki👏

mujhe translator use karna padha iss dialogue ke liye

"Jaanti ho Suman ye rishtey bhi na paudhon ki tarah hote hai , jis tarah paudon ka khayal rakhna padta hai, unki hifasat karni padthi hai. Aise hi rishton ko bhi sanjhok kar rakhna padta hai. Unhe sambhal kar rakhna padta hai. Rishton ko thoda waqt dena chaiye panapne ke liye. Saans lene ke liye. Hum sabko thodi space chaiye hoti hai, aise hi rishton ko bhi ek tehraav ek space ki zarurat hoti hai. Tum apne aur Shravan ke rishtey ko thodi space dekhe dekho. Phir dekhna sab thik ho jayega."

thanks to deepti di nahi to aapne to kabhi likhna hi nahin tha😡

voh bhi itna accha likha, main kya bolun...i'm toungue tied but Sumo nahi thi

but i can totally imagine Sumo talking so much...

like maine count kare number of words only she said obviously ms word se

can you believe it 1 thousand 6 hundred 38 words😲😲

and i love this Sumo of yours...she is so expressive, so free and the biggest thing she chose Shravan over her self respect and i can't thank her enough for that...👏

i'm not gonna quote one which is my favorite because that would be underestimating such a wonderful piece which made me go through a ride of emotions from excitement to ecstasy and even to irritation when shravan didn't reply.

i love pushkar to no extent right now. but ek cheez show similar thi ek dusre se pehle unhone dusron se ek dusre ke prati pyaar izhaar kiya, but Pushkar's way better choice than Ramnath.😛

all i will say is

this piece was: magnificent, imposing, impressive, awe-inspiring, grand, splendid, majestic, monumental, glorious, sumptuous, resplendent, lavish,

beautiful (trust me that's all google offers as the synonyms for great...agar aur bhi hote to main likh deti)

i would like to conclude with one thing:

tell me the name. who the hell told you that you couldn't write?

if no one did and you just assumed your self, so you should better stop assuming nahi toh i'm gonna eat you alive. and deepti di woh to aapko chodengi nahi...you know that dont you?

better right more😆

love

arpita

Edited by ArpitaSingh1806 - 8 years ago

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1095142

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Posted: 8 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: maddy_edkv

🤣 mujhe laga, mai hi sab se lazy hoon ab tak unres nahin kiya . yahaan mujhe competition bhi mil rahi hai 😆😆

@eva monday ko unres karoongi. kal math exam hai 😛

madhu main bhi join karungi

mujhe to pata hi nahi tha eva di ne kuch likha bhi hai😆

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Sanjh Bhattacharya

@Itssanjh

Voyager

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Posted: 8 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: evaviego

Kab ayega wo din 😆😛

Finally finally woh din aahi Gaya!!!!!! Hufff!!! 😉 unressed a@ 16

Edited by Itssanjh - 8 years ago

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nuttynuts

@nuttynuts

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Posted: 8 years ago

#129

Wow! That was fantastic! You have brilliantly transformed the dialogues and the track into something we wished to see on screen. And thank you for that! It was totally worth reading your story. Must say, you're gifted! Beautifully penned. Would love to read more of your works.

Nuts

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evaviego

@evaviego

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#130

Originally posted by: Itssanjh
Res... Sorry... For being this late! 😭😭 Will unress soon!

Unress

Ohhh finally...!!!! 🤣

First of all, a badaaa walaaa sorry, for being this late!!

Its absolutely fine darling. Maine replies dene mein usse bhi bahut zadaa time liya hai. I suck at giving replies . 😆

And thanks to deepti, who tricked you to write this! A big hug for her!

😆

It was just just pure love!! It was like reliving EDKV moments through this!! Ohhh!! First time I am lacking vocab to explain, how was I feeling reading this!

Thats a huge compliment. Thanks 😳

The most difficult part was Sumo's confession! And you have done that so easily, so beautifully, every word, every sentence ...Was just bang on!.

I tell you it wasnt easy at all. Jaan nikal gayi likhte likhte 😆
Glad you liked it 😳

And the cherry on the cake, Shravan's singing!

The song, one of my favorites, and it suited the situation so well!

Mine tooo...!!!! 😳

I really really hope, you write more and more! Will be waiting eagerly!😲

I am not sure at all.

But dekhte hai. 😆

Thanks a ton for reading Sanjh.

It means a lot 😳

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