SS- Goodbye Shravan-Epilogue updated on page 61 - Page 47

Res..
Will try to Unress quickly

Just started reading this...n I'm already sucked into it!!
Res

Oh god!!
I forgot to comment



Ressing for nowv

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Ist part is tooo good
Shraman in their farm house
Shravan specially bought a farm house for sumo 😳
That 's so sweet
That description of farmhouse is way tooo good

When u said perfect morning with chirping birds
This comes to my mind



That way u described how they need time for themselves



And finally shraman romance

"Molten chocolate eyes "

Ahhh!!!! Way tooo romantic

I can totally image shraman and nimik both in yr story






Sumo, baby, bolte waqt beech mein saans bhi liya karte hain. Bachpan mein yeh seekhna bhool gayi thi kya? Waise Sumo, kuch zyaada nahi bolti tum" Shravan had a pronounced smirk on his face.

This line is so hilarious 😆

Romance ke beech mein bhi comedy 😆😆

Shravan ko breakfast bed mein chaiye...way way romantic



Sumo is so so understanding

It's about time we knew the truth
I've been waiting forever
Now we're together
Nothing could stop us from finding each other
Only time will tell how long this journey will go
hope it lasts forever
My heart needs to know
how much you love me
cuz I've been wounded before
so don't you dare go
sometimes I'm so confused
I can't even see through my window
the light blinds my eyes
But that's okay
Cuz I see us together
that's all I need
for me to see
we were destined to be.

And these lines are so aapt for the shraman which u have shown in the story
They are always so supporting and caring for each other


Shravan always about sehar and suman convo
Of course he is lawyers
But i am glad shravan has no more guilty anymore for anything
He is finally moved on from his past
And thats tooo good and for their relation
And sumo told everything to shravan
That how understanding caring sehar is
She has no illl felling for her
As a wife its general to have graduges aganist the girl
Who had a crush or loved ur husband
But sumo ...is alll different
And that the key thing that I liked abt yr story




Finally everything is sorted between the Rishab and sehar
Finally they are together in every terms ..physically emotionallly mentally
Finally sehar has realised that rishab is only one for her

Rishab and sehar are totally like shraman

The way rishab answer that he know everything
And finally they are together


"Look Seher, you are mine. My present, my future. And I am yours too, till I live. And that's all thar matters to me. Don't let this beauty that we share be marred by the shadow of some teenage infatuation. Everyone has them. I have had a fair share of infatuation or crushes and relationships myself.

I totally love thses lines ...Rishab is such A gem husband
Seher is indeed very lucky ...no doubt

They were good till they lasted and when they ended, they ended amicably.

Beautiful...no words

You might have liked someone, but back then, you were not my wife Seher, so you are not answerable to me for those feelings. It's natural to like or crush over someone growing up. As natural as breathing. This is your life, your story, don't ever be apologetic about any experience of yours.
Shravan told me his story once we came closer, and that's when I could realise that the guy could never for any one else but his wife. He never loved anyone but Suman. She is the centre of his universe.

Its like ...i have no words right
I have save thses lines somewhere
And my mum also read thses lines ...and when she read thses lines .she said that is definitely wiritten be some expert writer...Thses are her exact words

[color= blue]Just like you are my sun Seher.

The bottom line is that I trust you. I love you and I belong to you.
You are my wife, and that's the only truth of my life.[/color]

Thses lines show how beautiful bond can share husband wifes ...only important a understanding in every relation
Loved thses staza to the core


Finally suman and sehar are friends...that too good
Soul twin ...😳

Lovely epilogue

Loved this story

😳


Sorry for such a long comment

Reshma... 🤗
Long time ya 😳
N am late or should I say later than late...Showwiii *Best puppy face*
I do came to know that you had ended it , was lil sad but every journey had to come to an end sooner or later no matter how beautiful it was.N your one was a unique experience for me...To see ShraMan in a whole lot different light.
Thank you for that.😃

Coming to upii [For last chappi]
As usual an awesome one buddy... 👏
I love the way you write tiniest details with such fluency that it seems so real.Like am seeing Sumo n Seher sitting and talking, Shravan noticing Sumo n Rishabh n him talking.
Beautifully captured buddy..❤️

ShraMan's journey...Oh!
You wrote it whole taking me along with you making me feel like seeing their whole journey in a 3-4 min of a presentation infront of me.
Aced it here girl.It do looks simple but you had choosen the exact words for the incidents.

N how true is that ya...ShraMan werent really happy or content ever..there was always that emptiness, hurt, dissapointment embeded within their heart.A growing ache was always there.

Shravan's proposal...Haaye..
N not to forget the nervousness he felt...These are the things that makes him even more special.

Ramnath...I couldnt hate him not before not now.
Atleast he was there for Shravan when he was all alone.Atleast he didnt abonded him.He did loved his son truly.
Sumo-Ramnath bonding...One of the things I always wanted to see.
My Papa ...Loved loved it ❤️

I had conveniently taken for granted in life while this girl might have so badly longed for them....Isnt it what we all do?
We do take granted what we have today in a wish to have more n more whereas somewhere someone would be there longing for it.
❤️

Sumo reading Seher's mind ... ⭐️
Woh tumhe door rakhta tha kyonki main uske saath hi thi har waqt. Woh mera chehra tha, jise uski nazar talaashti thi....Loved it to the core Reshma. Penned down beautifully.

Shravan did fought a battle all along with himself.Not to fall for Sumo ever again, not to see her ever, to throw her out of his heart , to not to think of her, to hate her...Always.

ShraMan ko shikaayatein thi , dil mein ranjishein thi...
Sumo ko khud se , or Shravan ko sab se...!!

N Seher did found her oh so necessary closure...Which she deserved n which was very much needed...for herself, for Rishabh n for their love n marrige...Well done Reshma 👏

No one can understand the importance of a closure more than I and Shravan. The most painful good bye is the one that is not explained....Touched me deeply.❤️ ❤️
🤗 to you for this.

Seher do loves her husband but a part of her heart needed that closure.
Oh you have no clue Seher, the guy is jealous of the air I breathe...Oh My!!...Shravan n his intensity of loving Sumo...
Sumo do love his undivided attention coz she had always longed for this love...All her life until she found her Shravan .

Tedha hai par mera hai...Indeed filmy😆
Seher is really mature one here..😊

I sooo damn loved how Seher asked Sumo if she Will be comfortable seeing her around Shravan...❤️
You are giving answers that can n will arouse in reader's mind. 😉

Ah!!..Sumo 😳
Reading her soo well!!
😉
No need to worry when Seher is in love with her hubby n specially where Shravan is concerned, there cant n wont be any doubt.😳

Biwi...Haaye
Kiss on forehead... ❤️...I cant help it. I so love kisses on forehead.There is something special about them...😊

Missed me?"
Found you...Loved loved loved it immensely Reshma ❤️

Kya mukaddma thoka hai Shravan... 😳
This Beshram Shravan...Haaye Loved him much more

Goodbye Shravan...It gave so many feels Reshma...Cant explain!!
Loved it ❤️

Reshma Reshma Reshma...How much I loved this journey I cant tell you.Even though I had written a short OS here but still words seems so less to explain it.😊

Again sorry for replying this late.
Will be busy now again...Will try to comment on epi asap buddy.
Sorry in advance.

Keep writing buddy...Will wait for your new adventure 😉
Till then ,
Take Care😊
Loads n Loads of Love n tightest of 🤗
Yours Gulaab Jaamun ❤️

Finally I commented officially 😆

Oh Reshma, i missed it all these days😭

Hi Resh dii princess here
Missing you so much that I read the epilogue
3 times but wanted to reply it with undivided
Attention from studies and exams. So sorry
For not replying soon.plz maaf kardo 😭
Coming to epilogue it's best epilogue ever ⭐️
And waiting to see many more of these coming from you dii
Shraman understanding and shravu ninja techniques are
Worth an applause and sumo breathless talk
All in all it's shramanilicious epilogue
As you already know dii I had been seher fan so
Loved her possessiveness towards Rishab.
And also I loved Rishab's every single line
Dii it surely proved that first love might not be true love but
Still true love does exist ⭐️ .
I have so many things to say for every single line but
Can't find any more words dii.
It gave me a huge smile and heart warming feeling after
I read it every time.so twin soul sister friendship part
Was too lovely dii. See you soon di
Loads Of Love from
Princess

Chapter 2

First of all you start with the description of Suman and I don't know if it's me reading too much into the lines or what you intended to show but I feel like just standing there and watching from afar Seher understood Sumo and Shravan's Relationship.

Beautiful song selection and I feel that it was exactly what Sumo must have been feeling ❤️
You made me experience a myriad of emotions through Seher's eyes and ShraMan's actions. As Shravan stands grinning but then the smile diminished as he realizes the gravity and importance of her words as if he was living their journey, their hardships again.

they were two souls who thrived in each other's existence, that they were together but they still ached, that they were content but they still yearned. Beautifully written and a Mirror of their Relationship 👏

Rishabh seems like a real nice guy, I'd love to see how this story unfolds!
The metaphor with the water and the little details add a charisma to the story. Loved it!

Am I witnessing the beginning of a beautiful bound between these two women? I am sure I am in for a journey of self-discovery and I am loving it!

Told you I would catch up 😉

Originally posted by: KitkitMkb

Chapter 2

First of all you start with the description of Suman and I don't know if it's me reading too much into the lines or what you intended to show but I feel like just standing there and watching from afar Seher understood Sumo and Shravan's Relationship.

She did actually. She was very observant. I always wanted her to be someone very sure of her thoughts.

Beautiful song selection and I feel that it was exactly what Sumo must have been feeling ❤️
You made me experience a myriad of emotions through Seher's eyes and ShraMan's actions. As Shravan stands grinning but then the smile diminished as he realizes the gravity and importance of her words as if he was living their journey, their hardships again.

The song is one of my favorites and Shravan was quick to detect the hint of sadness in her voice whic made him alert. The song had everything Suman wanted to tell him and I wanted a public declaration from her for that would perhaps finally salvage his hurt of rejection 😊

they were two souls who thrived in each other's existence, that they were together but they still ached, that they were content but they still yearned. Beautifully written and a Mirror of their Relationship 👏
I had actually forgotten these lines and the story for that matter. Thanks to you to bring it back to me😛

Rishabh seems like a real nice guy, I'd love to see how this story unfolds!
The metaphor with the water and the little details add a charisma to the story. Loved it!

I love water and Seher was me in parts😊

Am I witnessing the beginning of a beautiful bound between these two women? I am sure I am in for a journey of self-discovery and I am loving it!

And I am in for a journey of rediscovery with you Sal😃

Told you I would catch up 😉