SS- Goodbye Shravan-Epilogue updated on page 61 - Page 48

Originally posted by: reshmanair356

Yup...thanks for catching up babe😛...would love to hear how my favourite finds this.

Originally posted by: KitkitMkb

Chapter 4

You had me hooked in the beginning and as I said before I love, love the realistic approach to the conversation like when the waiter interrupted them.

I am a huge fan of realistic approach Sal. .even in movies😊

You turned a random scene into a meaningful one, the fact that she remembered about the allergy shows that she cares and loves her husband more than I had thought.

This usually happens in arranged marriages you know..concern and care creep in and we don't even know.

It didn't seem out of place or anything, the way they continued to talk, loved the flow here.
The transition to the teenager to the man was beautifully described. They say that with the age, eyes are the only organ which sustain and it's so true here, no matter how much he grows up or changes, the loneliness is omnipresent, I really liked this bit because here we see Shravan through someone else's eyes.

This story was actually a product of my curiosity. How could his life in London be. .would he still carry the hurt with obvious overtones.

The numerous questions which surround Seher's mind will unfold in due time, I'd like to see if Sumo is able to open to Seher, the way the latter does.

The whole bit on good-looking men had me cracking and their reaction was heart-warming - definetly the beginning of a friendship!

You know, we should always be cordial to our our partner's ex.Jealousy is such a waste. We loved the same person at different times So might as well sit and talk. .for what's yours can never be snatched.

When she mentioned the Facebook and the stalking part, the initial smile which takes over his face but then the anger which empowers every other feeling, this was Shravan in the initial episodes, you did him justice beautifully 👏
Thank you Sal😳

When she realizes that it doesn't hurt anymore - which means that she has healed and is ready to move on from that period of her life.

Shravan's dialogues in the end, my dil toots 💔
I know it's human nature to doubt, to hurt but I wish we wouldn't let one bad incident or one bad memory eradicate a life-time experience.

We shouldn't. .true that. One person, one incident, one heartbreak. .none of these should decide the course of our lives. Mourn and then move on..that's my mantra😆

Amazing chapter !

Originally posted by: KitkitMkb

Chapter 5

Seher truly is a beautiful person and I guess she is the replica of the author herself ❤️

I like her grit😳..aww Thanks Sal!!

The only thing she had wanted is the guy to be happy and have a chance at a Relationship with him. I guess some things are just not meant to be.

Very true!!

I love how honest she is, like she doesn't hold any grudges against him because she had moved on and rightly so but she won't shy away from the fact that she has been hurt. A very real and relatable character!

She was all logic I guess...no drama.

I loved the debate on Devdas perhaps because he stays one of those iconic characters that seldom people are able to understand and the way you described him here gave another dimension for the character to me, while the show was on air so many people compared Shravan to Devdas most of the time in a mocking way and I wish they could read these lines to understand the depth of both the characters. ❤️

That's what I actually felt about Devdas. .perhaps it took someone deep in love to understand him..no wonder then that the practical me could never get his point.

Practicality for the win, now I am sure Seher is your replica 😆

Dee vouches that Seher is me and now even you think so 😳 I did give her my approach towards life..to embrace success and failure with equal fervour 😃

When she talks about Shravan, there is a sadness, almost a melancholy that can be felt, but when she starts talking about Rishabh, there is this happiness and peace that I find and that shows the parallel between the present and the future but also clears the stand of these two gentlemen in her life.

There's a reason why you are one of my absolute favourite writers😃..you took my heart away with these lines girl!!

Sumo and Shravan - my actual loves, that flying kiss left me smiling like an idiot ❤️

I actually imagined Shravan doing that!!
Oh and Resh you are really cute 😆

Aww thanks. .to be honest..that's one adjective one doesn't easily associate with me😆

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_

just wanted to say,, I am loving this conversation! ! 😃

Aur Dev Babu meri bhi samajh se pare hai! !😳

Aur aur, Seher meri bhi favrt hai! !

Sorry for trespassing! !😛

Originally posted by: KitkitMkb

Chapter 6

The beginning of the chapter itself leaves me with a smile through one paragraph I went through ShraMan's journey, I could see the scenes play in my head, to their childhood, the parallels, till the last bone-crushing hug.

A proper proposal and courtship, this is how things are done! ❤️
I could imagine Shravan fussing over every small details to make it look perfect, it reminds me of the IV when Namik said that he was a a sissy in this matter but I don't know why I find it justified for the kind of history they share, this would have been adorable to watch
I know right...I waited and waited for their courtship. They would have slayed it. The first series that took my heart had to be half baked😕

The FIL-DIL bonding seems genuine and reminds me of the start of the show, old good days!

I loved it when Ramu thanked her for taking care of Shravan after he exploded after hearing of his father aircrash. They would have made a good FIL DIL pair.

Woh tumhe door rakhta tha kyonki main uske saath hi thi har waqt. Woh mera chehra tha, jise uski nazar talaashti thi. Beautiful lines!
Thank you😳

His mind wanted to move on while his heart still carried me.You have described Shravan Malhotra from episode 2 till episode 72 with simple yet impactful words!
This line was something that I believed in. There was always this tussle between Shravan's heart and mind.

You know what is beautiful about this story? You feel for everyone and in this one everyone has a right to closure and happiness, I love such stories 😉

Oh I always champion for closure rights😆

Sumo is so samajhdar in this story, could have used some in the show. Alas!

Sumo..how I wanted her to be sensible. She could have been an examplary Female lead.

This is beautifully written, I am in awe.

I am sooo happy!!

I wanted to see this side of Shravan, the possessive side so badly 😭

These two ladies have some swag ;)

Just finished reading and I have a big smile on my face. It's one thing to create a story with characters, readers already love and explore them and it's another to create a full-fledge character and make them love by the readers. Seher is definetly one of your most beautiful creations and you can take the praise for it!

Tabby always loved Seher and that made me very happy and I started shamelessly taking praise for Seher..with you on board...I am gong to be a tad more immodest 😆.I had initially thought that this whole meeting in a party and talking sensibly might not click here..It was too Resh style..glad that you liked it😳

I am really happy that I was able to read this one, like they say better late than never ;)