SS- Goodbye Shravan-Epilogue updated on page 61 - Page 25

Originally posted by: reshmanair356

Hi Sara,

You love the direction the story is taking so far..phew. .I needed that vote of confidence from someone like you.

We can't blame them can we, heck, I am myself in love with the guy hook, line and sinker😆

Yep...am having a bad case of viral infection.

Thanks for the review. You do realise that I look forward to hear from you, don't you😳

Ek tarfa pyar ki taqat hi kuch aur hoti hai... auron ke rishton ki tarah yeh do logon mein nahi bat'ti... sirf mera haq hai ispe..! Seher! Her narrative reminds me of these lines..! There is a certain completeness in that unrequited love!

Originally posted by: reshmanair356

Hey Tabby,

Fever is all gone. Am colder than Nimik's equation now.😆

🤣 u made me laugh in the middle of night!

I like Seher too...feels familiar.

Very much..!

London Life...Shravan went there broken.

True!

I am hoping Seher gets her peace too.

Ditto

Thanks for liking this.

Appreciate!!

My pleasure!!

Originally posted by: amks2016

Res :)

Unres 😳

Awwie Resh 🤗 bro #majorhappinesshappening !! Aaj toh sach mein mein happy Wala holi hai Aur jab aapne Bol hi Diya ki .. Dil mein jo baat hai chupana Nahin .. Toh aapke hukum sar ankon par 😳

Aww...Mayuuu, I love you!!

When Im reading it hits me it's not Sumo .. But Sehar whose narration is happening :)) Coz so used to seeing POV of Shravan n Sumo 😊

Can visualize two sophisticated ladies sitting n having a convo in a high society gathering n the good looking dashing dudes ( their husbands ) loitering btwn the bar n their friends 😆

I told you. ..these are big shots here, highly successful bunch😛

The issue Now is y am I feeling sad for Sehar 😲 Dnt want too 😕as its always Shravan ki sumo n Sumo ki Shravan dnt want it any other way :))

How beautifully you hve characterized Sehar ( even tho she is kinda a rival for sumo we dnt hate her ) like Sumo I'm willing to hear her out 😳 and she is not the typical OTT parallel lead where their is an evil streak or scheming involved .. Err so far I mean 😊

appreciate the way she has taken to her stride what life has offered to her ( the instruction to the waiter not to serve mushrooms to her hubby ) is a clear indication that all is not lost .. So hope it remains that way n progresses positively 😳 or is there a twist 😉

I am a big fan of being dignified even in loss Mayu. So OTT parallel lead who is on a self destruction mode is oh so tacky for me😆...positive or not, transition will be smooth. I appreciate that 'taking things in your stride' aspect of Seher as well.

Sumo Apna wrestler ( Iron Lady 😆) wants to know abt her husbands life when she was not a part of it 😲 hmm Sumo being true to what she represents .. wants to take the problem head on rather than keep the nagging thoughts in her mind 😆 she doesn't let bygones be .. She is like the Rubix cube which needs to be solved always .. Y does she want to know abt Sehar after she already trusts

Shravan so much n Shravan has in fact told her intrigues me 😳

Another thing I literally worship in a person is to take things head on rather than cribbing. Have you tried a rubix cube?..It's not so tough actually, there's a technique to solve it. A perfect marriage of patience and focus is the key. Sumo digging Seher's past, might have a different agenda to it altogether.

But so much pain in Shravan n Sumo's life want only happiness thereafter for them :))

And Apna hero Shravan sorry a bit biased when I write abt him .. Coz even if he is wrong I can't see it 😉 the Smart Oxford law grad. realized what was happ with Sehar n distanced himself 👏 refused point blank to even give another realatuonship a try 😊 I'm glad he turned out that this way .. Even tho he comes across as an insecure person .. Sumwhr down the lane it will show how strong his love has been that he is not wiling to give an iota of thought to any other relationship even tho his mind us full of doubts and misconceptions !!

You have analysed Shravan bang on there Mayu!!...you deserve an award for this❤️

Lastly Resh can't wait for the story to progress n see how ur gng to ease out the pain in Sehar .. Sail the Shraman Ship amongst the strong winds blowing against them .. Sumwhr my gut also says Rishab s not all that bad too 😳

Shraman together are a nightmare for any storm😆..

Rishabh and his goodness is for Seher to notice!

Phew did I finish !! I thoy my rant won't stop !!! I found some awsome gifs but still trying to figure how to post it .. Hopefully one day 😳

Thanks for trying so hard with the gifs Mayu!!...and I cherish your rants😃

Pls dnt take too long for the next one 😛

Originally posted by: Arpi1234

Res
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So suman and sheher's conversation is going on how Shravan was abandoned..
Looking like sheher is an honest person taking Honestly about her feelings to Shravan's wife 😉
Sheher is also a very caring wife taking care of her husband...
Sheher also understands Shravan very well, that's why she knew he was not happy, he was just pretending to be happy..
Sheher started thinking from sumo's behaviour that she might have something to do with Shravan's pain..
Both the girls are crazy 😉 😃
Look like though sheher has feelings for Shravan, but he doesn't have feelings for her. .
Hunhh looks like Shravan was talking about sumo to sheher in london when he said he used to teach someone like her...
Sheher's Heart realised that Shravan May never return and she can never tell him her feelings, so she told what she feels about Shravan to him..
Shravan also some how knew about it but as we know he loves sumo how can he love anybody else..
Looks like due to his experience of sumo and nirmala he rejected sheher..
Curious to know what happens next, update soon and thanks for pm..

Love
Smita