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Dolly Chouhan

@Namiksfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#231

Originally posted by: amks2016

Resh Devi 🤣 pura fandom abhari rehega 😆 😆 lage raho 👏

Kya karu yar...ye maani hi nahi😭

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Dolly Chouhan

@Namiksfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#232

Originally posted by: amks2016

🤣 🤣 woh hum nahin samajenge !! Woh wali kuch kuch hota hai ?
Supaari !! Omg !! Dipti

Bilkul. ..vo hi vala🤣

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Tinna28

@Tinna28

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#233

Hi di nice update
Itna acha update kaise likte hoh
My reaction is always speechless

Loved the sehar and sumo conversation
Seems like sehar such innocent girl
Must say she has pure heart
She is just like shravan ..innocent soul

So caring sehar is abt her husband
Must say her husband luckey to have her
And sumo is so eager to know abt shravan ' past
Imagining sumo reaction

And also loved how theeir conversation goes
And when sehar proposed shravan
I was like ab kya hoga

But finally shravan ne na keh diya
Shukar hai babaji ka

Loved the entire chappy
Your update always put smile on my face

Waiting for next
Jaldi update karna
Luv
Tii se tinna

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evaviego

@evaviego

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#234

Mayu is getting a lot of dedications these days. Lucky girl. 😉

Coming to the update.

You will never fail to amaze me. Conference room mein beth ke koi kaise itna acha likh sakta hai?

That too without a single error. 😛

Beautifully penned.❤️

Love the bonding between the ladies.

Seher is a wonderful human being. After all she is taken after someone very special to me 😛

She is deeply in love with Rishabh, but has not realised it yet.😊

Suman's expression whenever Seher mentioned about his pain is so on point.

How Shravan spent his years in London and how he transformed was a bliss to read. And his loyalty is what make me fall for him.

How can you end this in the next part? We want a part where you show us how Suman changed Shravan's opinion about women. Itni aasaani se hum aapko ye khatam karne nahi denge.😉

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HappyLibran1910

@HappyLibran1910

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#235

Originally posted by: deltadawn

I know !!! 😳🤗

Resh last update matlab. Maar khana hai kya tujhe? I have Mayu to give supari ok !!

aur Eva bhi teen ghante me pohoch jayegi.

Dolly ek aaur bar agar tune Shravan ki Jaan li to Supari teri taraf redirect ho jayegi.

P.S. Even sumo ka baal bhi baanka nahi hona chahiye 😡

Last update 😲 ye kab likha ..

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Tinna28

@Tinna28

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#236

Originally posted by: amks2016

Last update😲ye kab likha ..

Last update
😡
Kyu kab kaha kaise hua
Di aapko shravan ki kasam

Edited by Tinna28 - 8 years ago

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deltadawn

@deltadawn

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#237

Originally posted by: Tinna28

Last update
😡
Kyu kab kaha kaise hua
Di aapko shravan ki kasam

Ha Ha ab to FF bana degi Resh

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evaviego

@evaviego

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#238

Oh man. Ye Tina maar daalegi ek din...!!!

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Tinna28

@Tinna28

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#239

Originally posted by: evaviego
Oh man. Ye Tina maar daalegi ek din...!!!

Eva abhi nahi marna
Dekho shravan bol raha hai payaar se 😳

Edited by Tinna28 - 8 years ago

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priety.priti

@priety.priti

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#240

ohh its a output of cancelled meeting 😉 then i hope aise meetings cancel hoti rahe and we should get such updates regularly😆😆

there is no disconnect at all and the narration from third person is best idea i mean everytime ppl write either of Shraman's pov but observing things from 3rd person is really amazing

you penned sumo's pain perfectly only explaining her expressions 👏

"Should have thought of it before marrying these hunks though" ...i was like really 🤣

"Baar baar toota hoon Seher ,ab nahi. Jhoot jis kisi ka bhi ho, yakeen toh hamesha mera hi haara hai. I can't love Seher..I won't love. It hurts. " this line stole my heart reshma really touching one 😭

please give next soon amazing update

Priti

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