Alfaaz - A ShraMan FF - Now Moved to Wattpad - Page 52

Originally posted by: Safire

Nice flow, just beautiful!!

Originally posted by: imshveta

That is just so sweet what Shravan did for her.

Haina!!😃
You really paint such a vivid scene going in front of our eyes. It was a pleasure to watch the camaraderie among friends.
Aww thank you so much!
As always very well written 👍🏼
Thanks hon!

Originally posted by: reshmanair356

Hey Zoya!

Hey Reshma!!

Raftaar it is 😃...loved the pace. Shravan having fun brought a solace that nothing else can match. You have created Eric and infused him with a spirit so supportive that we have begun to love him for all that he has become for Shravan. So take a bow there creator!!

Bow taken! Thank you so much hon!!! 😳

I loved the bromance to say the least😛.the bickering and the advice included, to think of those whom he loved more than he would ever think for himself is actually an innate part of Shravan's character, but Eric warning him about the probable unpleasant consequences made such a melting read.

I'm glad you liked that bit! I was a bit apprehensive, I thought it might come across as childish.. But I'm happy the point came across just fine 😃

The three musketeers and their fun made me laugh but what actually accentuated my laughter was the pal part of the word principal. ..never thought that the dreaded word could have a deeper and funnier innuendo attached to it😆...and boy...his reply could beat Shravan's swag😃

Hahaha... Now you know😆

PrinciPAL bhi kabhi student tha!

Shravan arranging such a cute surprise for Sumo...is it a surprise then why we love the guy the way we love him😳..The cake part was sigh inducing!!..jhoola and kandeel..wow is the word!!

He always was a darling, never thought for a moment before going all out... I believe had they made up, such celebrations would be constant😳

Pushkar and Shravan always made such a heartening team and you just added spirit to that here. .add Sumo to it..and you ran a parallel 3 musketeers plot😃

And you caught it! Keen eye of observation and depth of insight as always!

So now we come to my most favourite part..her anger and that pang in her heart when she realises that Shravan actually took someone to the prom and worse, she was not duly informed about it. Those tears in her eyes spoke that the raftaar of your Shraman's journey towards each other is going to pick up😊

Yes, it will...

I think Suman will do a stellar ob at conveying her feelings but then again Shravan is more vocal too😉

Sumo is impatient and so are we..when will London see the dawn?

Sigh.. A little more patience...

Could you hug Amanda for me?😆...the cupids are my favourites, whichever form they take to strike or ignite.

Done and done!

Wonderful update as usual Zoya!

Thanks so much Reshma!

Originally posted by: lizzy1299

Awesome update.

Thank you!!!

I love the way u have portrayed the bond between Shravan, Amanda and Eric.

I'm glad you did!

Sumo's jealousy is well described. Poor Shravan will have to bear her wrath now😆

Both are near equals now... 😉

Originally posted by: deltadawn

Kiye karaye pe pool ka paani fir gaya !! 🤣

Maza aaya na paani phirne se😆

Love the bond that Shravan and Eric share. Guys understand each other better any day so the exchange of words was so perfect. Like bro I know you and I hate to tell you this but ye quality tujhe le dubegi !! 😊

Le Doobegi bhi toh ab tairna aa gaya hai usko😎

Amanda the innocent still third angle 😆 here to add just the right amount of Raftaar to some teenage emotions.

Oh yeah! Ahan!

So Suman madame ko gifts acche lage, he still helps her out in spite of the distance. Kahi ye aanewali "Sumo-naami" inke pyar ki raftar ko dheeme to nahi kar degi? Why do I keep feeling now that Sumo's dreams of going to a big shot institution will be held back due to Mamiji's convo here?

Sumo-Nami🤣 Do you mind if I use this in one of the updates?

Mamiji, we'll see...

Kya toofan laanewalii hain aap JahanPnaah. Itna hale an dhearty sab kuch rehne ki aadat nahi hai Dil ko. To darr raha hai 😳

Hahaha.. Ab aandhi aaye ya toofan, ShraMan ki Pehchaan mai lagenge chaar chaand 😆

A chirpy, fast paced and witty update.

Glad you felt that way!

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Happy Birthday to Perpetuity 😊

Zoya ka update as a dedication might just be the perfect gift . I believe she was one of the people who made you write here Zoya. To unke ehsaan to hum sab pe hain 😃

Ehsaan jatana usko pasand nahi...

But thank you for wishing her!

Originally posted by: pinky.padda

totally amazing

absolutely loved it

sumans surprise was too good

continue soon

Originally posted by: Zenab78

Zoya Api 🤗

Zainab my love 🤗
Ramadan Mubarak

Wish you the same hon!
And Happy birthday Resh Dii 🥳
Gift bahut pyara Hai ❤️
Ji shukriya!
Update was fantastic as usual

Aww thank you Chotu!
Manju Mami I hate her she is so greedy Sumo is topper wow and surprised party from Shravan and Pushkar they arranged it so well giving her so many surprises
Shravan had trust that she will prove herself and she did
Nanu was so proud of her grand daughter
These 3 people we the best to Suman on the show too...
Last part I really hope she will not misunderstood Shravan for not telling her about Video

How well do you know her?😆
Waiting for next update 😊
Me too!

PS. Good news for you Api I am topper of my stream this year 😃
Wow! I'm so so proud of you love!

I always knew you had it in you🤗

Lots of Love
Zainab

Originally posted by: Faith28

This was a very happy and sweet update.

Hainaa!

Sumo topped👏 College starts n newer challenges will be faced.

Yes, to new beginnings!

Loved the Bromance👍🏼 And pool masti.

Yey!!

Waiting to know more what a jealous sumo does😃

Soon enough...

Ramadaan mubarak zoyA😊

Thank you so much hon! Ramzan Mubarak to you too!

Originally posted by: bworm

A very satisfying update but the ending left hungering for more.

Thank you so much!!! And won't keep you starving too long!

Jealousy is gonna be painful.

Oh yeah!

Loved the pool banter, the suprise party. Sumo and push kar are so cute.

Haina!

It sure had raftaar...now waiting for what you may have planned next.

Me too!

Thanks for the pm

Anytime!

Originally posted by: Edkvforever

Mind blowing update zoya

Thank you so very much hon!

Yes I agree college life is most beautiful phase in our life. No one forget it.

I know right!!

Shravan is amazing here. He can arrange Everything for celebration with suman, even though he is far away from her..distance doesn't matter...

Jaan boy!

suman is jelous seeing videos... what the next...

We shall see!

Curious to know..

Update soon

I will try my best!