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Posted: 8 years ago
Mind blowing update zoya
Yes I agree college life is most beautiful phase in our life. No one forget it.
Shravan is amazing here. He can arrange Everything for celebration with suman, even though he is far away from her..distance doesn't matter... suman is jelous seeing videos... what the next...
Curious to know..
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Unresd @59...

Raftaar! !
A leap of time or a leap of emotions! !😳
Bromance is breaking the Internet and the prom prompt somebody's feeling! !😉
This is going to be fun !! I Don't mind this cliff at all !! #PopcornReady !!
Let the insecurity,, jealousy pop in !!😆

(And there is another leap...orkut to Facebook! ! Mark Baba made a dhamakedaar entry !! Videos can be present day cupids! !)

So,,Sumo is a top ranker! ! Wohooo! !🥳 Outsourcing not just helped but rocked! !
Waqt ne kiya kya haseen sitam! !

The celebration was love! ! Very well written! ! ❤️
All the favourites did their best to make her day special !! Nanu,,Shravan n Pushkie! ! Dil...Dosti...yariyan! !
(You are keeping Ramu kaka in loop! !)

Mami ji zevar not for you! !😲

Am made a comeback and like how! ! Was missing her in the previous update! !

The story is entering the phase which is the least explored! ! How Suman realised her love for Shravan!! There is a difference between missing a special friend and realising he/she is a special someone!!
Roller coaster ride it will be... And I am sure you gonna nail it !!

Raftaar kuch aisi hai zindagi ki,,
waqfon main ensaas badal deti hai!!

P. S. There can't be a better present! ! HAPPY BIRTHDAY !!

Edited by CarpeDiem_ - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Unresed on page 67
@ Pri. Kaheka belated re aur kaheka slow. U wished me like hundred times till the new day started 😆🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hey!
Awesome chap.

First of all - I ship Eric and Shravan = Eravan. 😆
It even sounds terrific! 😲😕🤗

Loved the Bromance and their fun.
I don't know why... it reminds me of Supernatural brothers - the Winchester brothers. 😳😳😳

Shravan's surprise to Sumo was really wow!
Not everyone gets such superb friends who take that extra step
to make you feel so special. ❤️

Now, Suman's jealous.
The smell of burning never felt so fantastic. (evil laugh)😈
Eagerly waiting to see how things will unfold.
But I'm also afraid that this upcoming argument may create
some problems between Shraman?
I hope Shravan doesn't misunderstand her?💔
I'll have faith in you, let's see what you've in store. 😃

And most important fact, I love your recent dialogues more. It sounds livelier
with the emotions and expressions you are tagging to them.
Superb. 👏👏👏

Now... updt as soon as it is possible.
Take care of yourself.
Lots of love,
Lara.




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Posted: 8 years ago
Unresed @ Pg 68...Finally!!
Thank you for the beautiful upii bro.
🤗
Edited by Nik03 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Brilliant update Zo... Sumo is quite pissed, as she must be. 🤔

Poor Shravan.. 😛

Continue soon!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Perpetuity

Res.

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Unres
Zoyi 🤗
Resh 🤗
This is one of my best birthday gifts.
Yeyyy!!
I mean it can't get better. Getting a chapter by u dedicated to me is the best feeling in the world. I love u yaar 🤗
I love you more!❤️
I m really touched. And doesn't matter how forgetful I m, u too be rest assured I will never forget u guys. One reason being U guys won't allow me too. My leg pulling is one of ur fav pastime I knw that 😆
Hahaha yeh baat! Samjhdaar ho gayi hai tu saath rehke😆
This chapter is pure love ❤️ In every sentence I can feel it's dedicated to me or more so us 😳.
Well, that was the plan!😎
Friendship dripping from all corners 😆 But I never felt it was out of place. Pure brilliance.
Thank you so much my love!
And yes there are too many similarities to us 😳
Haina
Three Musketeers 😳

Bs yaha pe tuney emotional blackmailing nhi include ki 🤣
Sab bata doon tujhe? Patience my friend!
Eric-Shravan's earphone fight is so me. I do that sometimes when I just don't feel like using earphones. And those were also times I play songs nobody understand 🤣
Well, good guess on my part then 😆
Pool drama 🤣
Paisa wasool right?
Amanda is awesome yaar. I love her as of now 🤣
You will continue to love her!
Shravan as always is a darling 😳
Oh yes!
Full faith on Sumo. This guy ❤️
He did have a lot of trust o her...
Pushki v ❤️
My Pushkudent 🤗
I just loved it 🤗
I'm glad you did!
And of course u too 🤗
That I know!
Thanks yaar for this wonderful wonderful gift ❤️
The pleasure was all mine!

@Bold Love you Resh!
Stay blessed always!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sapphire3

Res
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Unres
Resh meri jaan 🤗

I hope you had a great day .

Bol toh aaise rahi Prri, jaise tujhe pata nahi tha how it was...
And late? 🤣
Kuch bhi avaiy!
Zo🤗
Prii🤗
A/N ❤️❤️
Shukriya 😳
Shravan and Eric. This duo is FriendshipGoals ❤️
I adore their bond . Their bromance i love like i loved Stefan and damon's ❤️
I know right! It's so cute!

GIF love! In the last season more than Delena, I was waiting for a Damon - Stefan Reunion! These two were love!
Fighting over earplugs and headphone...too cute they are ❤️
Like you!
Amanda 😆 😆 😆 ...i love her .
Me too!
Pool scene was quite funny n cute.
Yeyy!
Three musketeers ❤️ just like us ❤️
Yes! Just like us!
Ugh Manju mami ghise pite record ki tarah bajti rehti
Avoid ya, she ain't so important😆 She's in the story for aesthetics😉
He is so sweet ...he brought cake to congratulate her and celebrate her success❤️
Your Shravan is such a sweetheart . I wonder if people like him exist in real
As I explained, they do ❤️
My Shravan
Aur Kutta sach me adjective hai 😆 ...atleast i feel so *hides face*
Me too! Kamine tak adjective hota, uske baad gaalian start hoti😆
Uske liye kitna kuch plan kiya
Zo itna acha mat likh mai yahi sab kisi me dhundhne lgi to afat ho jayegi 😆
Dev-Willing you will get all of this and more!
Jealous sumo? I like it
Me too! Green looks great on her🤣

Damon😳
I'm loving this tadka of jealousy 😉
Cutest chappy of Alfaaz ❤️❤️❤️
Thank you!!!
Loved loved loved it!!
Loads of love🤗

@Bold Love you too darling!
Thank you!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Animagus_Sirius

Res

Couldn't resist to comment on the weather part.Its raining like hell here,I haven't seen proper sunlight in 2 days
Hahaha😆

Then you need to come to Bombay, we see only the sun
Unress
Zoi Bro, the pace is superbly fantastic.
Thank you ji!
I needed some time to gather up my thoughts.
This itself is a huge compliment...
The more you write ,the more I love this Eric.I would never categorize him as a perfect but he has all the qualities that made him so dam lovable. He is fun -spirited ,supportive with a past.The bond He and Shravan shares is just beyond words literally.
I know right! We all have our own faults, but hey, that doesn't make us any less lovable right?
Its like Eric and Amanda are innocent cupids ,knowingly or unknowingly.
Yes! At the moment, innocent they are!
Despite the distances that are there ,Shravan still helps sumo and the fact that Sumo is jealous jusyypoints out the fact that she cares for Shravan as we as what he does.It was very well described.
Thank you!
And the Awesome threesome thing you added with Sumo ,Push and Shravan was fab.
Shukriya!
I'm loving this Rafter.
Glad you are!
Continue soon
Sure thing! I shall try my best😃

@Bold Thank you so very much love!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Nik03

Ress 😃
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Unres
Zealous si Zoya🤗
Nikka sa Nik 🤗
How are you bro?
Chal ra...
Sorry for being late again.
That's alright hon!
Coming to the upii...
Raftaar..⭐️
There was indeed a raftaar in the story.
Thank you ji!
Eric studies while listning to rock music!!!Big smile
Mee too...I would plug in my headphones n study...well just in case of Maths!! 😆
I need complete silence to concentrate 😆
I lose it if someone makes a noise...
Friendship...it can be between any two persons no matter if their choices are same or differ...what is necessary is understanding and that bond which in case of Shravan and Eric is there for sure!!
Amen to that!
What a cute fight there!!
They didnt noticed when they started fighting for each other. #FriendshipGoals
It was beautifully penned down bud!!
Thank you!
Amanda🤣
What a lively character!!
Haina!
The whole Eric-Amanda-Shravan scene was beautifully captured!!
Loved it ❤️
Glad you did!
N that I can't see to I can see was superb 😆
Happens with me when it randomly rains🤓
What an explanation Shravan 😆
Kuch bhi, avaiy!
N that princi was two steps ahead of them 😳
Ye to sach ho gaya ke...jis school mein tum padhe ho hum uske principal the.😆
Hahaha...
Three musketeers 😉
Oh how much I love the bond they share❤️
Me too!!!!
kaam ke na kaaj ke, dushman anaaj ke Daamadji 🤣
I cant agree more maamiji!!😛
For once she was right...
Maamiji was even though not completely but somewhat right. she had always given up and compromised in her life...for herself and for her children.
But she wasnt bad at heart.
Someone sees that!
Sumo fulfilled her chashmish's dream...Aww
Tum dono mere chaheete ho, koi ek se na oopar na doosre se kam." ...Nanu ke do anmol ratan, ek Suman or ek Shravan.😳
He is really a sweetheart.
He's the cutest grandparent I've ever seen!
Shravan...his anxiety, restlessness😳
Slapping his palm across his forehead...That Shravan during Khosla track.😉
Oh yeah 😎
I'm proud of you Motu...❤️ ❤️
Their bickering is life!!
I agree!
N Kutta sach mein adjective hi to hai😆
Exactly my point!
Pushkie pie...Lakshman of his Ram!!
Sigh! Such brothers ❤️
n here our dumb Sumo...tubelight.
As always😆
That Trust me was
Will make a come back a lot many times...
And I love kandeel too.
I love kandeels!
The Whole surprise ...the way you have written every minor detail just took my heart away literally!!
Sigh.. Shukriya!
I cant explain how much I loved it Zoya.
It made me emotional...happy tears you know.
Aww yey!!!!
This friendship is actual friendship...no facade just pure love!!❤️
Jo dosti ho to aisi ho...Always waali!!
I wish the bond that these three musketeers share , remains as strong always 😃
Amen! I will try my best!
Sumo...The green monster is here😳
Is this a starting of a realisation??
Not yet.. Of love if you mean...
Importance, yes...
Depth in the relation, yes!
I so loved how Sumo felt anger within herself regarding the comments on Shravan-Eric video even while dealing with jealousy.
Well, they did always care!
But was it just jealousy??
So far? Yes...
For me it was a mixture of jealousy and insecurity and fear.
Next chapter you will see.. And you are dead right!
Fear of losing Shravan, fear of losing her friend who means much more to her than just friend, fear of being left alone again...Fear of losing her place in Shravan's heart and life.
Wait and watch😉
The thought of him forgetting her made home in her heart...Loved it sooo much❤️
This feeling is worst.

So Shravan Malhotra is in real problem now.
Really Excited to see what happens next!!
Uski waat lag gayi! Leking kuch khalish toh Shravan mai bhi baaki hai...
😎
What a beautiful update Bro!!👏
Thanks hon!
Really really loved it❤️
I'm glad you did!
Thanks for the pm bud and cont soonish.
Always! And sure!
Loads of Love n 🤗
Nikka sa Nik.

@Bold Thank you so much hon!!

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