His and Her - Two Shots. Last part updated page 7. 12/2/17 - Page 8

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Posted: 8 years ago
#71
Unres on pg7..
Really sorry...I always read ur stories and ll reserve my spot...
But i get confused on which post I commented...
Will try my best to comment on all soon...
LavSriya
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Posted: 8 years ago
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amazing finish
absolutely brilliant
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Posted: 8 years ago
#73
First of all sorry for the late comment... Ur story was just awesome... Jealous shravan has always been very cute but here u wrote about jealous sumo which was also gr8... The confession part was finally done very nicely...😉All over a great update dear👍🏼👏
Edited by Rubyag23 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: amlavs

Res

--unres--
It's an another lovely update...
Sumo got jealous... lovely...
Falling in love with ShraMan again and again...
Beautifully written...
Waiting for more to come...
LavSriya


Thank you so much lavanya..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Namiksfan

Bunnnyyy🤗

Haye i loved it soo much yar
Pehle to i got scared seeing shravan with urvashi and for yaad aya..oh ts hi h hero heroine aj hi milenge 🤣(mad me)
But then shravan ne use ignore kar diya😭😭😭
And that punch. ...wohooo shravan malhotra is back ...uski sumo ko ulta seedha kese bola😎 i love this part of him
And that proposal omg!!! The uniquest in the history of fan fictions only you could do that my bunny
sonnet omg!!! Never in my life i read them with so much interest🤣 2 baar padhe
And then the confrontation hayeee i was smiling like an idiot making my sister ask me "boyfriend ka message aya h kya jo itna muskura rahi h"🤣 unko kya bataye...mere dost ese h...love u mera bunny❤️
And the kisss omg !!! Hot hot ...i got all red like a tomato...please or likhna ese pieces ...ise tu meri request samajh ya gundi ka order...idk but please...this was too good
And p.m se pehle hi padh liya ...i almost read it the second u updated🤣 (imagine the amount of eager i was)
And excitement me thoda zyada hi bada comment ho gaya...but then deal with it...u said that u love this dramaqueen
Again i love u bohit sara and this piece too
Gundi 😎


Ohhh my gundi, Dolly the dramaqueen! Tu aur tera comments! Makes me laugh always! Love u too bahut sara... Aur sonnets tune dhyaan se pade iske liye bada wala pappy... Aj kiss day hai na.. 😉 btw thank you pagal!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: Tiii28

Hi love!!love !!your writting and this is just marvellous
I like the way shravan react after aditiya and sumo fisco
And how the shravan described his feeling through the book
And shravan punch aditiya that was too good
And plzzz provide epilogue if possible got know aditiya uarvashi reaction when they know abt shraman
If possible i know greedy me 😆


Epilogue iska! I don't think achcha rahega! Epilogue I am leaving on your imagination! Rats and meow kaise rahenge sath mein imagine karlo... Btw I am glad that you liked it..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: LubSha

Res... sorry dono post ka saath me.

Unress...

First of all Sanjh I'm very sorry for being so late that you posted the last part too. But every time I sat down to unress something was coming up and had log off.

It's perfectly fine baby...

So Miss Bunny as many call you,

Bunny is my nickname!

this was the cutest one ever. You described their friendship so beautifully. Shravan loved her but she just thought him as a friend, even picked a girlfriend for him. Shravan let her and he didn't stop her either, as he did wanted her to find out by herself. That's Shravan, could do anything for Sumo, even go on date with Urvashi.

Loved it when Shravan punched Aditya. We always love to see that. But Sanjh loved it when Shravan said "jab bhi koi zaroorat ho to Shravan, bas pyar ke liye Aditya, kiss karne ke liye Aditya, kyun".
That line said volumes. It just poured Shravan's heart out.

Glad that you liked it...

And the other best part was the sonnets, you picked up beautiful sonnets. You are or must have been a Literature student for sure, are you???

Not at all... I am strictly a science student, did my engineering, now doing my MBA. I just love reading this sonnets!

Kiss was the other best part ( you had too many best parts). The way he told her "I'll kiss you if you want, and then I'm dying", tooo cute Shravan.

Moral of the story: Kissing someone you don't love makes you a statue, but kissing someone you love will make your body dance.😆

Haha true... 😆

Seriously I didn't get that this could be inspired by "Jaana Tu Ya Jaane Naa", but if you write anything like this again, I'll try my best to catch it.

Haan...because they had this similar storyline, Meow finding girl for rats, but later they leave their esteemed partners! This was the base. Baki have to stick with Shraman essence!

Lubna.



Thank you so much for commenting Lubna! Love you a lot!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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thanx for PM...😊
sorry for late comments...
so beautifully penned...
loved it...
Sharman...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Sorry kaan pakad ke for the late reply!
Coming to the part dhasu tha yaar!
Sumo is sooo jealous 😆 aur jaa Aditya ke paas 🤢
Yahan pe bhi Aditya has get slapped acha hai 😆
Coming to the passionate scnes you sure know how to write those!
Lovely one, keep writing!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey saanjh this is so unlike shravan-sumo except sumo's sumogiri and shravan's undying love. I want to kill this aditya how he dared to kiss shravan's sumo😡 but end mai hamare shraman hi saath hai toh i loved it yaar.

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