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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: BloodRune

Loved it! Comments await you on Wattpad!❤️And a belated Happy Birthday!

I read them and as always they made me smile. ❤️
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Ranified009

So damn late in reading this time.

Will try to finish reading when I get some time.
Thanks for the PM.
❤️

No worries, it isn't running anywhere! Take your time! 😃
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: akrocks77

Hey Saleha!


This is mesmerising!

Sacchi?

It's so beautiful that I don't have enough words to describe how I feel for this one!
This is so dreamy!

Dreamy! That makes me the happiest! :)


My heart feels content ...I can't tell you how happy I feel after reading this. I have read it thrice already😳 Thrice already?! I have noticed you do reread chapters of FF (Fate in Wattpad ;))




Sumo and her longing for him is heart touching!
That realisation of being in love with him after he left that too because of her fault must have been so painful💔

Wo to hai! But she kind of deserved it!


This conversation... I love these little banters😃

Me too!

All that longing and love is expressed in such a subtle way!

I love when people use this word for my stories! 😆



"That explains why half of my t-shirts are gone"
Hayee! I love this Sumo!
😃 ❤️


"You deserve the world, Sumo and I want to be the one giving it to you even if for that to happen I need to stay two weeks away from you."
I have fallen in love with your Shravan all over again!

Mera Shravan! 😃

The moment I read this for the first time... I myself said you are her world! But then she said it herself😳

Great minds think alike ;)


Pushkar outsmarted Shravan and how😉


Pushkar is one sly fox!

What an excellent timing for telling him that😆
I always wanted him to have a sibling too!

Sneaky Sumo! Bossy Sumo! Outsmarting the lawyer Sumo! I love this Sumo!

❤️

Early morning Tom uncle's tea date...this sounds like some plan.

This whole conversation is love❤️
These are the Shraman we wanted...the one that understood each other's fears and struggles ... and then showing the other one their strengths.


So far, it's my favorite conversation between them as it really focused on their fears insecurities but also their positions in society, the prejudices around them!


Shravan is learning the art of sneaking well😆
Ahh! Flustered Shravan!
And she knows it too😳

This song...and Shraman❤️
"I have you trapped in the lines of my hand."

❤️


Shraman ki shaadi!
All that has been described in the best possible way!
"I am so incredibly lucky."
You both are cause you found each other⭐️

"Kaun Sumo?"
"Meri Sumo?"
"Meri yaadein, meri duniya, meri zindagi, sab kuch..."

Finally, she was home.

Indeed they both are!
This is love❤️

This one was such a bliss to read ...thank you for this treat!
Happy Birthday again!
Loved it so much!

Apoorva




Thank you so much Apu! Much love! 🤗 ❤️
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Posted: 6 years ago
The last two chapters of Holding You have been planned since the 10th chapter because of your comments that give me ideas and tips. I draw inspiration from you guys and I could never thank you enough for it. The best. ❤️

It is my first story and it has become like a personal diary to me because it has been filled with my emotions, my own insecurities and fears. We will talk about this deeper in the last chapter. ;)

It's like a little baby (why can't I use the tissue wala emoji here?). 😆. Jokes apart, I hope I am able to deliver soon and not make you guys wait for another four months but I want you guys to know that I had the time of my life while writing this one and it will be the most special to me because you guys made it so special to me! Massive hugs from me you. 🤗
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Posted: 6 years ago
Saleha!

It was beautiful story... and you have executed it perfectly!
Last chapter already😭
Dil Abhi bhara nahi
It will be missed dearly... saari story khatam hori ab mien kya karungi 🥱

You are gifted!
I have always loved your Shraman... and I always will!❤️
🤗
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: akrocks77

Saleha!


It was beautiful story... and you have executed it perfectly!
Last chapter already😭
Dil Abhi bhara nahi
It will be missed dearly... saari story khatam hori ab mien kya karungi🥱

You are gifted!
I have always loved your Shraman... and I always will!❤️
🤗


Abhi 2 chapters rehte hain aur likhte likhte I am afraid this story will enter 2019. 😆
Don't worry, I have many ideas regarding one shots, I owe you guys My Best Friend from Sumo's pov! ;)
Thank you so much Apu! 😳
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: KitkitMkb


Abhi 2 chapters rehte hain aur likhte likhte I am afraid this story will enter 2019. 😆
Don't worry, I have many ideas regarding one shots, I owe you guys My Best Friend from Sumo's pov! ;)
Thank you so much Apu! 😳

Koi nai take your time... they are worth the wait!
And next year toh we are already getting new FF this is big relief😃
My best friend...Sumo's POV
BTW breaking free kaa third part bhi chahiye please... when ever you find time.
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: akrocks77


Koi nai take your time... they are worth the wait!
And next year toh we are already getting new FF this is big relief😃
My best friend...Sumo's POV
BTW breaking free kaa third part bhi chahiye please... when ever you find time.

OH MY GOD! Thank God you reminded me of Breaking free I had completely forgot about it. Once I have finished HY, I'll focus on the shots!
By the way I want to read something from you one day (only you are comfortable and if you want)
And I forgot to ask, how could you be scared of me, mujhse zyada innocent bandi dekhi hai kahin pe? 😆
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Posted: 6 years ago
Yey!🥳
Khushiyaan!😃
Third part aayega😳

Me writing trust me I don't have it in me... mujh mien koi creativity nai hai in all this!
And please no disclaimers mien bilkul bura nai maanti.😊

You are innocent ...It's not about you being khukhaar bass h ek Lambi kahaani... being a silent reader woes😆
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: akrocks77

Yey!🥳

Khushiyaan!😃
Third part aayega😳

Me writing trust me I don't have it in me... mujh mien koi creativity nai hai in all this!
And please no disclaimers mien bilkul bura nai maanti.😊

You are innocent ...It's not about you being khukhaar bass h ek Lambi kahaani... being a silent reader woes😆


No worries! I wanna know these silent reader woes! Sunao sunao

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