ShraMan FF: Holding You, (C18 pg 102) - Page 77

I have been MIA for the longest time and I am really sorry about that. A few things in personal life were taking my time and whatever time I had was mostly spent in Namik's AT (from where I have been MIA as well) so my inbox was unread and now I am slowly catching up on some of the stories I missed. And boy am I glad I am getting to read such good chapters without a long wait :D

Beautifully and Magically written ❤️👏

I always wonder at how beautifully the dynamics of this kind of a relationship could be written where two people, keeping differences aside, could build their life on terms of trust. The foundations laid were really strong but they let it rot with unnecessary things. I wish I l, wish, it was allowed to fly the way it wanted to.

Originally posted by: akrocks77

Hey Saleha!!

Again a very Beautiful update.👏

It feels as if Magic is rewritten with each chapter of Holding you.
I am glad you feel that, I wouldn't want to drag it! 😃

Home sick Shravan...now that's something new!!😆
Haina?! 😆

This reminded me of that episode in which some one(may be eric) calls Shravan asking when he would return and he denied saying not now maja aana toh abhi hi shuru hua hai...and all.
I miss this guy so so much!

He longing for the sense of belonging.🥺

Uff!! That friend request

Sumo's love is binding him to her in a beautiful way that he don't want to let go or go away from her.😳
You have described it beautifully!

Sumo is so cute stealing his T-shirts as a substitute for his warmth is so adorable.

This is something she would have done!!

That hug on the doorstep only.
Dreams come true type haina? ;)

"Of course there is rush!"

"I want to get married to you...As soon as possible."

"I have been waiting for so long."

Aww!! This girl! She definitely knows how to make him do things.😉
Itne saalon ki training hai!

This feels so good that they have came so close to each other.

And so far away from the hatred in the initial chapters.😃
I like to think of it as a safar. ShraMan ka safar. ❤️

Shravan and Ramnath's conversation is amazingly written .

You were right... time definitely heals all wounds.👍🏼
We tend to think that what we are going through is forever, we will never get out of it, but truth is that Life is made of miracles and each one of us, it's tough, it's painful it takes hell of time but there is always light at the end of the tunnel and I believe that the moment on the balcony when Shravan is laughing between tears is the moment of realization for him ke andhere ke baad hamesha subah hoti hai. ❤️

"So you tell me, should I forgive you."

"I learnt from a women what it is to be a real man."

"No child deserves to support the burden of his parent's marriage ,Papa, whether it's flourishing one or not ."

I wish I could for once see Shravan saying all this to Ramnath.😭

These are just so much beautiful.

Ahh!!The fluff is coming.

Shraman are so...☺️
You have no idea how I wrote that scene. 😆

It is Wonderfully written.

Enjoyed Reading!

Waiting Eagerly.

Do continue soon.

Apoorva

Thank you so much Apu! 🤗 ❤️

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_

I know Sal gotto do the replies but I need to tell you,,😳

I so soo much missed these post update notes! !

The analysis is bang on !!

@bold. ..I don't know if you guys have watched zindagi gulzar hai...but there was one scene between Zaroon n Kashaf which was so much similar to this one! ! And I really hope Sumo felt the same as Kashaf had felt, ,when Zaroon told her, ,it's his responsibility to take care of her...and she can't prevent him from doing that !

Sal! Sweetheart. ..only your writing can give takkar to a show like ZGH! !❤️

Zaroon: Tum meri biwi ho, tumhare khayal rakhna to meri zimmedari haina?

Kashaf: Zindagi main bohot saari naimatein hoti hain, ek naimat ye bhi hai ke aapka mard aapko apni zimmedari samjhe aur aap paar kharch karen. Aur mene ye kab socha tha ke ye naimat mujhe bhi mile gi, koi mujhpe bhi kharch karne wala hoga.

Originally posted by: KitkitMkb

Zaroon: Tum meri biwi ho, tumhare khayal rakhna to meri zimmedari haina?

Kashaf: Zindagi main bohot saari naimatein hoti hain, ek naimat ye bhi hai ke aapka mard aapko apni zimmedari samjhe aur aap paar kharch karen. Aur mene ye kab socha tha ke ye naimat mujhe bhi mile gi, koi mujhpe bhi kharch karne wala hoga.

I believe it was this scene you were talking about. Sanam is such a brilliant actress. ❤️

Originally posted by: Meraki.

Sal I can't even tell how much amazing your writing is. You carved their relation of an eternity in one chapter.

Damn, I am still is haze, so will give you comments for all the chapters later. 🤣

#beinglazy

Sanju!! I could see your likes but I couldn't tell if you were reading or not! Thank you so much, hope to see you around. And comments for all the chapters? Me is happy. 😃 🤗

Originally posted by: PrincessAshVik

I have been MIA for the longest time and I am really sorry about that. A few things in personal life were taking my time and whatever time I had was mostly spent in Namik's AT (from where I have been MIA as well) so my inbox was unread and now I am slowly catching up on some of the stories I missed. And boy am I glad I am getting to read such good chapters without a long wait :D

Saleha, you write beautifully. Holding You is my favourite work of yours. I loved the conversation with Nirmala in the last chapter and one with Ramnath in this one! Beautiful!!

Shravan Malhotra will always be special and you've maintained his character traits beautifully!

ShraMan scenes are always a treat to read!!! Looking forward to more on them. The scenes you mentioned:P

Thank you for the PMs despite having no response from me for a while:)

Also, you are rocking that colour:D

Sara!! It has been so long girl! I hope everything is okay though. Yeah that's an advantage you get to culminate chapters ;)
Thank you so much for these words, we are reaching towards the end and you have no idea how happy it makes me to see you here. I like that color. 😆 ❤️

Originally posted by: KitkitMkb

Sara!! It has been so long girl! I hope everything is okay though. Yeah that's an advantage you get to culminate chapters ;)
Thank you so much for these words, we are reaching towards the end and you have no idea how happy it makes me to see you here. I like that color. 😆 ❤️

Originally posted by: PrincessAshVik

Yeah, been a while😳Everything is good, thank you, how about you?

I am glad I came😳😉And I realised we are nearing the end, that plus the chapters being so good and me being MIA for the longest time all made me comment😳

Hehe I loved it too and I kinda miss it😒😆

I am glad it did! I like your color too!