ShraMan FF: Holding You, (C18 pg 102) - Page 75

It was an amazing reading experience...all the sweet little nothing's came flushing into memory. I felt I could actualize the scenes before my eyes. Thank you so much for writing this Sal. Holding you holds me to the simplistic world of love and friendship of ShraMan❤️

Hey Saleha,

That was a very beautiful update after a very long wait...very beautifully penned...I often wonder how do u people manage to do it everytime , again n again... 👏

So finally the place where all d bitterness began is now d place where d proposal happens...wow...what a perfect way to put an end to pain n let in peace and love.

Great chapter...plz don't make us wait more than a month for d next one...

rgds
Anuradha

Originally posted by: rajiti

My gosh!!!! Be still my heart!! Finally, finally.
What a fabulous update!! Tears in my eyes, smile on my face.
Thank you so much Saleha for this beautiful journey.
No more words, just thank you.
Rajiti.

Thank you for being with me on this journey! ❤️

Originally posted by: akrocks77

Hey Saleha!!

Hey Apu!!

This is Beyond Words...Beyond perfect👏

Marvelous!!

How do you do this??

You created magic girl.⭐️

Beautiful Update!!
🤗

I am in love with this one...My favorite chapter till now.
I am so happy to read this! ❤️

This feels like dream...and I am still in my Dreamland.😆
I hope that the dream continues ;)

Your Shravan is Perfection personified.
My Shravan

I have said this before ...I will say it again your Shraman feel like directly from the show.
Thank you so much!

Conversation between Shravan and Sumo regarding her parents is love.

I love the way their bond is becoming stronger with time.

Their love still feels so fresh...yet the depth it has.
I want them to have that depth as in for both of them to be able to talk about everything and anything and yet have those lovey-dovey moments a newly married couple can share.

He brought back her home for her.❤️

Suman Tiwari Malhotra...Aww!!

Adhoori Khwaishen!

"You can't take it or you can't take it from me."

The Vulnerable Shravan...Hayee!!

"Let me fulfill this dream of yours."👍🏼

Her Dilemma and then her lack of words is nicely penned.

"I just feel that no matter what I do, you will always be the most invested one in this relationship."

This one had me for forever.

❤️

Ahh!! Lalaji and Shravan.

Favorites!

Wounds that Ramnath gave...Won't heal so early.
It will take time but he will heal eventually!

Sumo's Surprise!!😃

She was worried initially of her inexpressive behavior.

But this special way of saying everything is even better.

She proposed marriage to him at the very same place where she denied his importance in he life years ago.

It feels like She is asking him to take her back in his life at the same place where he decided she is not worth-ed.👏
THIS! This is exactly what I wanted to show and I have been waiting for so long to pen it down.

And He said YES!!😃
He didn't really had another option! 😆

Loved reading every bit of it.

Waiting Eagerly.

Do update soon.

Apoorva

Thank you so much Apu! 🤗

Originally posted by: ShivAnyafan

Beautifully written Saleha,😊👏

My most favorite chapter of all...😳

Thank you so much! ❤️

Originally posted by: BloodRune

The response is waiting for you at Wattpad!😊

The response made me smile like anything! ❤️

Hello guys! the update is either coming by Sunday or Monday. See you then! ;)

Originally posted by: KitkitMkb

Hello guys! the update is either coming by Sunday or Monday. See you then! ;)

Originally posted by: KitkitMkb

Hello guys! the update is either coming by Sunday or Monday. See you then! ;)

Originally posted by: swatiagarwal89

Hii...sorry for not commenting on previous chapters... Goofed up my comment twice!!

N then lost patience!!!

That's okay, no problem! you are here now, that's the most important.

This is beyond beautiful!!

I have loved every word in this update...!

Thank you!

Tea flavoured loneliness... I haven't read something like this is ages..!

Home was the rickshaw both of them sat on, accommodating themselves within the limited space the small backseat offered, their arms slightly brushing, their knees touching times to times and strands of her hair caressing his face whenever a gentle breeze passed by as they savoured tea and fell into a comfortable silence... this is the most heartfelt description of home.. this is love!!!
I love this one!

Each drop is bequeathed by God himself unto the blackened roads, hurriying mortals to go back to the warmth of their homes, spent the day by the cheminy fire and share anecdotes from decades ago over cups of coffee or tea... u have a unique way with ur words... This is beauty!!

Thank you!!

Shravan Malhotra wore his heart on his sleeve...this person certainly has a heart of gold❤️

He was born to love and she was made for him to love.. dreamy

Shravan cuddled up in a blanket, his head resting on Suman's lap while she sat her back propped against the backrest, her legs crossed and resting on the table in front of her, one hand holding the remote and the other one twirling strands of Shravan's black hair between her fingers... This is an awesome visualistic writing!!👏
This is one of my many wishes ;)

"After they left, did you ever feel angry on them for leaving with a debt?...

Such questions are omnipresent without anyone being vocal about them🥱

"I don't blame Mamiji or Mamaji, they were right in their own way but I won't lie to you there were days I was so tired, I just wanted to run away from there, I would be so angry at my parents that I would start complaining to their photo and then I missed them even more," ..this is a brutal reality.. a harsh truth... N u have dealt with this very maturely!!!
I am glad you think so.

And you know if it wasn't for the debt then perhaps I wouldn't have worked so hard, PCT might have never seen the light... Every cloud has a silver lining... One just needs to realize its presence!!
Exactly!!

Suman Tiwari Malhotra,❤️

"You can't take it or you can't take it from me?"

"Let me fulfil this dream of yours,"

"I have been saving up since the first time we came here, please don't refuse it,

"Main kabhi tumhara koi sapna toot ne nahi donga Sumo

This summarises HOLDING YOU for me... !!!
That's a huge compliment. *Hugs*

"I just feel that no matter what I do, you will always be the most invested one in the relationship." .. this is shravan from the show...sigh!!!
❤️

I know that when you say I love you', it's not for the sake of it but because you absolutely mean it.. this sumo is beautiful... My favorite among all her versions!!
Aww that's so sweet!

Exhaling roughly, he whispered, "I'd rather say, the perfect puppet to the puppeteer.".. internal wounds takes time to heal n it seems he is still not over it!!!

Aati hai, bohot aati hai lekin phir ghusa bhi bohot aata hai... such innocent confession.. !!

Admitting it to himself was one thing but hearing it from someone he held high in regard was entirely different... word!!!👏

Main udna chahti thi apne pinjare se nikal kar aasmaan chuna chahti thi aur mujhe patha hi nahi chala kab main udne lagi, kab tum mere pankh bangaye,... again this sumo is love.. she is beautiful angelic none of my favorite versions of her...!!!
Thid is my favorite dialogue from the chapter!

He had only wanted her world to revolve around him like his revolved around her.😭

Healing cannot be described in a more better way than u have...
I have tried and I am happy that you feel so. *HUGS*

Words will always fall short to praise your write ups!!

The feeble vulnerable shravan... N the way he is being healed by his life.. very slowly cautiously meticulously ... It's beyond appreciation

This is so subtle yet leaves a huge impact... !!
Healing does not happen overnight this is why I am trying to do steadily!

They would never stop bickering.. at least not in this janam.. lol

He gifted his sumo the house of her dreams... This is dreamy!!

This inexpressive sumo reminds me of so many known persons who are least vocal about their feelings... Only their actions speak.. speak love n care!!!

Aah.. finally the heart to heart with lalaji... This had my heart❤️

These kinds of conversations connects me with HOLDING YOU on a personal level... This is written to perfection.. I have loved reading it thrice already!!!

Sumo's way of saying she cares was something different n incredibly cute.. those lil tucked up notes at different places is enough to light up anybody's day!!!

She turned the place with the most bitter memories of his childhood to a place with the most beautiful memory which they will cherish for life!!!

I will definitely read this book of yours to my son when he grows up... Such is it's beauty!!!!

the fact that you even said something like this, you consider it to be Worth reading to your son is really huge to me and really means a lot. This comment keeps making my day whenever I read it. Now that you have started, I hope to see you here more often. 🤗