ShraMan FF: Holding You, (C18 pg 102) - Page 3

Originally posted by: Tiii28

Hi dear nice update
I always wanted to read something on this when shraman are married
Plz update soon
Waiting 😊

Happy to fulfill your wish !

Originally posted by: Castile2

Unressed!

And Saleha...kudos to you for writing this for the fourth time 👏

I know how it feels like 😛

Thankfully I had saved it somewhere else but I had to write the last part twice as I hadn't saved it 😆

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">Fourth time lucky!😆</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">Kya khoob likha hai..!</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4"><font color="#ff00ff">You gave her ur heart,,she wanted ur soul..!😳</font></font>

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4" color="#006600">Let the night be longer!😉but our wait be shorter!!</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">M super eager to read the next part!</font>

Loved these lines 😃
They are in for a long night 😆

Originally posted by: Artist_Forever

ResWa ;D

Can't guarantee but I'll try my best to read it😳

Mahi ! Long time, it's okay koi baat nahi ;)
Miss you and your updates though :(

Oh my god!!

Amazing start... Very well written

Hey Sal,
Just got to know that your name is Saleha in the comments but I'll call you Sal as some does. I don't know how I missed this one.

Excellent write-up. You described Shravan's plight so beautifully, we all felt his pain. Kudos to you. Shravan is a very complex character yet you made his emotions simply out for us to feel. He's feeling mad but yet guilty, he's feeling victorious yet defeated and you described it really well. Waiting for the next update. Thanks.

Lubna.