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Faith28

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1041

Superb...loved tg wny they dgligently followed doctors orders👏 Def worth it...great improvement and understanding in their relation... Yayyy its shaadi time now😃 But before that pre wedding shraman moments chahiye😳

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priety.priti

@priety.priti

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1042

amazing update dips , finally they overcomes with the insecurities and specially shravan he controlled his anger and concentrated on others like nimmo so good time he had with his mother 😊

finally both are fully prepared for marriage 😳

as usual amazing update dear 👏

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vimikrao

@vimikrao

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1043

Beautifully penned. 👏

Shraman's messaging part & phone call part is nice to read. Usne 2 messages kya reply nehin kiya Shravan ka haal behal hota hai. He tried to distract his mind he went to talk to his Papa. 😲.Dr Das & Shravan convo was good, as per Doctor advice he decided to go to Mumbai but he quite enjoyed with Nirmala 😛 he came to know different side of his mother, a successful entrepreneur who is just looking after Ahuja industries, she said she just employee of the company not the owner. 😕 lekin yahan par Sumo ka haal dekh ni layak thi she was missing him badly where as he enjoyed his entire week with his mother. 😆 bechari Sumo apne aap ko zyada din nehin rok payi she finally asked him let's get married 😳 yeh ki na Sumo wali baat 😉 chalo ab in dono ki shaadi karwado toh hum aram se Dubai ja paye. 😆 😆

Thanks for PM 😊

Vinu

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deltadawn

@deltadawn

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1044

Originally posted by: KitkitMkb
Chapter 12

She was seeing his pain each day in trying to revive Sumo in spite of knowing all well what fate he will meet once she did recall everything. His unconditional love. Argh.

This Shravan is damn cute, cutting onions 😆
But his way of apologizing was so genuine ❤️

He bought her home 😭
This is one of the most wanted ShraMan scenes. So many feel.
The swing scene. FAV.
Your Sumo is so hopeful at the moment, it sucks to know how much they are going to hurt. How she kept talking about him

The hug and the kisses were so unexpected 😳
Here also Shravan is on his guards, but rightly so !

"Please aaj mat jao"This line. Just.

What he experienced next was a healing for so many half done goodbyes in the past. This line is beautiful, fav from the chapter.

"Tum chaho bhi to apni replacement nahi bana sakte kisi ko meri life me Shravan"
She is so in love with him.
And the gift 😳 These two babies deserve to be happy.
Big problem on its way but can't wait to catch up!
I am loving it !

Someone made my day.😳

I started re reading the chapters with you cause I am in love with your comments. 😃 thank god for vacations 😉

Araam se padho. I dont know how to keep a tight grip on my story like u gusmys do. But thik hi thak hai. Enjoy 😃

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deltadawn

@deltadawn

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1045

Originally posted by: LubSha
Another amazing chapter Dips!!
You always do this to me, I was so lost in reading this that didn't realize when my eyes welled up messing up even my waterproof eye makeup 😆
Par ye khushi ke assoon the. I just loved it. OK my phone I sent acting up now typing very slow on this site. But you made me very happy today.

Lubna

You and Priti. My cry babies 🤗. Ab khushi de rahi hoon tab bhi ro rahe ho yaar. Karu to kya karu mai lubs 😆

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deltadawn

@deltadawn

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1046

Originally posted by: Faith28
Superb...loved tg wny they dgligently followed doctors orders👏 Def worth it...great improvement and understanding in their relation... Yayyy its shaadi time now😃 But before that pre wedding shraman moments chahiye😳

Yess it is shaadi time😆

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deltadawn

@deltadawn

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1047

Originally posted by: priety.priti
amazing update dips , finally they overcomes with the insecurities and specially shravan he controlled his anger and concentrated on others like nimmo so good time he had with his mother 😊
finally both are fully prepared for marriage 😳
as usual amazing update dear 👏

Tu roi nahi is baar😉

Thanks dear. Yes problems over shaadi time. Matlab ending of lost 😃

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deltadawn

@deltadawn

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1048

Originally posted by: vimikrao
Beautifully penned. 👏

Shraman's messaging part & phone call part is nice to read. Usne 2 messages kya reply nehin kiya Shravan ka haal behal hota hai. He tried to distract his mind he went to talk to his Papa. 😲.Dr Das & Shravan convo was good, as per Doctor advice he decided to go to Mumbai but he quite enjoyed with Nirmala 😛 he came to know different side of his mother, a successful entrepreneur who is just looking after Ahuja industries, she said she just employee of the company not the owner. 😕 lekin yahan par Sumo ka haal dekh ni layak thi she was missing him badly where as he enjoyed his entire week with his mother. 😆 bechari Sumo apne aap ko zyada din nehin rok payi she finally asked him let's get married 😳 yeh ki na Sumo wali baat 😉 chalo ab in dono ki shaadi karwado toh hum aram se Dubai ja paye. 😆 😆

Thanks for PM 😊

Vinu

Ha ha tu to jaan hai yaar. You read twice and comment twice 🤗

Thank you so much for loving the story. Haan haan u tell me kaisi shaadi chahiye and I ll do it vinu. 😉

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reshmanair356

@reshmanair356

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1049

Uff finally I am here!!..too late?

But in my defence, I read it thrice. Loved the last line. There was a certain abatement in it, after that tumultuous way this relationship went, as a reader, I could feel the deliverance.

You will be doing a wedding later on, and undoubtedly, I shall rejoice. But this relief is still unparalleled.

The whole graph of gradually instilling confidence in him..I have to give it to you for that!!...He has not stopped worrying, the fear still lurks, and he still cannot let her go out of his sight, but he loves her enough to fight these for her sake. She's of course worth the fight.

Guess what makes you so popular as a writer Dips?

It's the fact that other than the intelligent plot lines, you also serve the readers these extremely relatable dialogues, these free flow conversations that we normally have in our day to day life. It actually gives us a feeling that we are present in the vicinity when the characters talk. Connection fit and the story hit😃

Loved all the conversations here, the airport one was my favourite though. .they are so much at ease while romancing.

Sumo misses him equally, I can't ever get enough of that.

Waiting for that marriage now!!

Feel good chapters are essential Delta, they just make the journey worthwhile!!

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vimikrao

@vimikrao

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1050

Originally posted by: deltadawn

Ha ha tu to jaan hai yaar. You read twice and comment twice🤗

Thank you so much for loving the story. Haan haan u tell me kaisi shaadi chahiye and I ll do it vinu.😉

Mijhe toh tham jam wali shaadi chahiye bilkul show se opposite wali Shravan ko aise feel karwani hai Sumo ko jaise woh asmaan se utri huyi pari ho. Shravan ki Pari. Aaj tak kisi writer ne nehin bola Sumo ko pari. Traditional marriage with all the rituals from roka to engagement & haldi,mehndi, sangeet & traditional shaadi. Shraman ki dance jo hum nehin dekh paye show mein 😭 😭

Thank you meri list zyada badi ho gayi 😆 but can't help it 😉

Edited by vimikrao - 8 years ago

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