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adityasingh.246

@adityasingh.246

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#1061

This was amazing ..

am down with fever ..

just love your updates .. so much warmth in there .. Immense joy in reading it ..

I'm loving it .. Finally Shadi .. Khatam mat krna Lost ko ..

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KitkitMkb

@KitkitMkb

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#1062

Chapter 13
I feel for your Sumo, really.
He could see his life standing there. So simple yet impactful.
He didn't care about the world looking at them he only left her when he realized that he was squeezing her and I don't know why but it really made me think of our show ❤️
Sumo's inner turmoil has been shown so beautifully, so real.
"Are you hurting because you think Shravan does not want you in his life" Breaking point. I love the fact that everything is connected to both of them. Dr Das is ❤️
The whole conversation was heartbreaking and yet healing in so many ways for both of them.
He confessed !!!
"Tumne dusri baar mera dil tod diya tha". This.
I can't wait to read the whole thing 😃

Edited by KitkitMkb - 8 years ago

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deltadawn

@deltadawn

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#1063

Originally posted by: KitkitMkb
Chapter 13
I feel for your Sumo, really.
He could see his life standing there. So simple yet impactful.
He didn't care about the work looking at them he only left her when he realized that he was squeezing her and I don't know why but it really made me think of our show ❤️
Sumo's inner turmoil has been shown so beautifully, so real.
"Are you hurting because you think Shravan does not want you in his life" Breaking point. I love the fact that everything is connected to both of them. Dr Das is ❤️
The whole conversation was heartbreaking and yet healing in so many ways for both of them.
He confessed !!!
"Tumne dusri baar mera dil tod diya tha". This.
I can't wait to read the whole thing 😃

Making my day yet again sal. I am going back to the chapters literally 😃

Keep reading. And dr. Das you will like him more n more 😉

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nuttynuts

@nuttynuts

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#1064

Their four weeks went by real quick! Loved the pings. Sweet.

Good to see a brand new Shravan. Would you like Mr.Malhotra reloaded or Mr.Malhotra 2.0?

So finally Sumo popped the question. Yay! But what about the BF-GF moments you promised?

Happy days again! Yay!

Nuts

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deltadawn

@deltadawn

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#1065

Originally posted by: nuttynuts
Their four weeks went by real quick! Loved the pings. Sweet.
Good to see a brand new Shravan. Would you like Mr.Malhotra reloaded or Mr.Malhotra 2.0?
So finally Sumo popped the question. Yay! But what about the BF-GF moments you promised?
Happy days again! Yay!
Nuts

Arre nutty nuts 😉 shaadi karenge matlab kal thode karenge. Lost will be all lost in louv now 😆

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nuttynuts

@nuttynuts

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#1066

Originally posted by: deltadawn

Arre nutty nuts 😉 shaadi karenge matlab kal thode karenge. Lost will be all lost in louv now 😆

God bless you in that case 😆 BTW, somebody needs a new thread huh? 🥳

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#1067

Loved every bit of the chapter. ❤️

Glad to know Shravan's issues are getting solved

with the help of the

good doc.

ShraMan romance, easy and then naughty conversations... everything

was so adorable.

The way you're moving the story forward,

the plot development and

the flow of it is apt.

Keep it up. 👏

Now cont soon,

and take care.

Love,🤗

Lara.

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Sanjh Bhattacharya

@Itssanjh

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#1068

OS blackmailing Kahan se aa gayi bich mein! Res!!!

Os writing is an innate ability of you, like C and Assembly 😆

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reshmanair356

@reshmanair356

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#1069

Told you...I am the godmother for this story...it's the closest to my heart😳

For a moment you know, I hated Dr.Das. I was scared that they would postpone the wedding. Thankfully Sumo was determined to move on, and I caught my breath back.

Dhinchak shaadi vs trendy pastels, I would go for pastels. .but that's me😃

I laughed out really loud when he bought 15 dresses, I was expecting 10, but then when has Shravan ever stopped exceeding our expectations? 😆

Shravan was ready to wait for her, if she required that time to recover...here your character progression culminates. The guy has finally understood the concept of trust, time and space. Incredible.

Sumo wants the marriage and to create new memories, I wanted that conversation between them always, where she would express a desire for a new life, leaving everything else behind. That would give him his heaven , of being wanted by someone whom he dreamt of.

Awesome as usual Delta!! This story is getting it's peace now.