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deltadawn

@deltadawn

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

Story Deleted.

I am sorry girls but moving on required this. I am addicted to EDKV and apparently it has started taking a toll on other important things in life. This is pulling the plug on my own self. I will miss you all the forum a lot 😊

Edited by deltadawn - 8 years ago

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Sunain

@Sunain

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

Ressi res

bhojany bheti tu saalon lag jaein gay...tumharay batany ka wait kar lon gi😆

Oh oh...it was like as soon as i closed my eyes to catch some sleep this came in my mind.

So are u writing something Valantines special😃...wild guess.
Btw i ws planning too...😳

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Unres

Yay tu popat ho gaya...Valentines special soocha tha yahan tu best of emotional season chal raha hai😆

Koi nhi Dino jo bhi likha humein tu parhna hai😉

Waisy ek Valentines special bhi mil jaay tu hum bilkul mind nhi karein gay😛😉😆

wel coming to the update...

Dino!!!

Wht to say...Shravan's tornment his predicament his agony..his every feeling was penned Hell Stupendously!👏

It just touched my heart...i literally cud feel it.⭐️

Wht she lest him...n he didnt even bothered to knw why...😲..but her absence is pinching him like hell...her absence is effects him which means he still loves her n is in denial...he notices her n her movements so well...

I just loved it!⭐️

Plz do continue soon...its hell intruging...season 2 feel k sath😃

Have so many querries wandering in my head n only u knw their answers so plz dont make us wait long😳

Till thn...

Take Care!

Sunain❤️

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_anukulgr8

@_anukulgr8

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

Res...Valentine's day ha...Me vat bhagat aahe...😃
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Valentine's day socha tha aur ye toh pure heartbreak mil gaya..😭
Well aacha hai...I don't like valentine's day.😆..
Liked it...👍🏼
Something new and I hope it will be a charm to read...
Slower than Hide and Seek??Matlab 1 update in 3 days right??
Do update soon...Waana know about Sumo's predicament...
Last line was beautifful...
Love,
Gaavvali😳😆

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Castile2

@Castile2

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

Areee D ka 500th post hai yeh aur valentines day me toh abhi derr hai... 😆 😛

My skewed #NumberObsession logic!! 🤪

D! Bring it on man!! 😎

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Nik03

@Nik03

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

Res 😳
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Unres
Lost...loved the title 😳

Shravan is seriously lost here... 😭
His grief n sadness is well written buddy... 👏
He is cursing his life...all because of that so called loving dad of his..!!
Sumo is gone... 😕
N he is again gonna drink ...!!
It was really sad update buddy...but beautifully penned down 👏
Exited for the next part.. 😊
Thanks for the pm dear..!!
Love
Nik

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Sanjh Bhattacharya

@Itssanjh

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

Res

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Dipuuu darlinggg... What have you done... It was just... Okay see I don't have proper word for it. First of all I should thank Sweksha, for demanding this one from you.. And then you for taking your time to write it.. And how I loved sulky Shravan... It just makes him more cute and adorable... I just loved the portion when he misses her, her holding hand, her smell... Lovely... Okay...I know how it feels when you write a sad track... It makes you sad too! But still try to update soonish...will be waiting for this one too...

Edited by Itssanjh - 8 years ago

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adityasingh.246

@adityasingh.246

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

Wow .. Its like after the media fiasco,the things we missed , we can see(read) now ..

This wud hv exactly been there had they shown.. His thoughts about hating her but at the same time being accustomed to her presence,longing her sign in his room , so nicely put in words ..

No doubt,its sad and emotional but this had to be like this ..

Waiting to read further ..

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Safire

@Safire

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

Interesting start!!!

So Sumo is gone now...

What is Shravan going to do...

Drink to celebrate????

I am so excited to know...

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reshmanair356

@reshmanair356

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

That was deep babe. ..I almost reached out to him...Beautiful!

He wants to be with her...it's as simple. ..and as complicated as that.

' How do I say I am lost without you in a way that makes your heart ache as mine does?'

And Delta mam. ..those last lines. ..gave me feels ya..Bravo👏👏

P.S.- Since my heart is a sucker for happy endings, Hill Station still rules there😉

Edited by reshmanair356 - 8 years ago

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deltadawn

@deltadawn

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: reshmanair356
That was deep babe. ..I almost reached out to him...Beautiful!

He wants to be with her...it's as simple. ..and as complicated as that.

' How do I say I am lost without you in a way that makes your heart ache as mine does?'

And Delta mam. ..those last lines. ..gave me feels ya..Bravo👏👏

P.S.- Since my heart is a sucker for happy endings, Hill Station still rules there😉

all my stories have happy endings.. or I will get nightmares.. so don't you worry.. Hillstation.. 🤣

hey bhaggu!!

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