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deltadawn

@deltadawn

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1031

Originally posted by: Rahi111
Yeah chapter toh kitna aacha likha hai 😊

Thanks Rahi 😊 welcome to the forum😊

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KitkitMkb

@KitkitMkb

Rocker

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1032

Chapter 11
[B]"Aaj hum saath haina."/[B]
I don't know why but I loved this line.
I am loving the pace and your Nirmala is love.
Without using big words you are still able to convey the fact that Shravan and Sumo are it and they can't do without each other.
Dr Das is bae though 😆 ❤️

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CarpeDiem_365

@CarpeDiem_365

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#1033

"I love you, boyfriend!!"
"Thank you"...

Free conversation with papa... and a sneak peek of mamma..! Did wonders..! Apne to Apne hotey hain!

He could hear her relief on the phone, was he scaring her so much?...
All she heard was a deep sigh and she could imagine him smiling... these two! ! The unsaid but not ignored..!

Counting days to counting messages! ! He is pro..!!
Haha..Dr.Das feared for his life. .!!😆

"Sumo ko Delhi me chhod ke?" he asked alarmed... instincts!
Dehradun...😳

"Tum itne excited sound kar rahe ho jaise picnic pe ja rahe ho"
"Really? It's never too late to have a happy childhood! !

"Bas Bas!! Kal dikha chuke ho mann kya karta hai"...hmm...high and dry..!😆

"You are blushing!! Hmmm. doctor ki to mai..."

Lekin tumse mile kisi bhi dard ko wo puri tarah zahir nahi kar paati. Aur shayad pyar ko bhi nahi. Hai na?" Wow! ! Brilliantly put.!

Also, I am supposed to be your support, not your saviour at all times. I feel so much lighter at this realization. Because I know I love you, for all of the things that you are, not in spite of them.Mumbai ke hawa paani mein aisa kya! !itni samajhdaari! !

"Shaadi karoge? Mujhse?"

Can't get enough of this ShraMan..! Sumo deserves a mention a here..! Ever since she has stepped into that London apartment,,she is has been on a roll...not that she miss Shravan any less.!

@Red are my favourites!

Again a fab piece! !

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Sanjh Bhattacharya

@Itssanjh

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#1034

Finally!!!!!

Res

Abhi tak incompatible unress nahin hua!!!

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lavanya

@amlavs

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#1035

Res

--unres--

Lovely update...

Shravan - nirmala Convo was lovely...

Looks like treatment is working...

Final part was bang on...

Excited for next ShraMan moments...

LavSriya

Edited by amlavs - 8 years ago

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Diya

@Sonai_02

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#1036

Res

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Unres 😊

Another super awesome chapter. I'm spell-bound as always.

Shravan has succeeded doing this super tough exercise !!

ShraMan conversations are damn adorable .

"Hmm. Shravi kaho"

"Pagal!!"

"Sumooo"

"Shravi"

I love them so much. I miss ShraMan like hell 😭.

Your FF really rejuvenates the spirit of EDKV in a all new way.

Shravan feels like strangling someone, and his target is obvio the Doctor I guess 😆

"Tab tak to mai unko nani bana sakta hoon"

No comments on this line ☺️

The happiest and most wonderful part is that Sumo has agreed for marriage

Dying to know what happens next, kyunki itni asanise to aap unki shaadi nhi dilwaoge lagta he.

Let's see.

Update soon .

Love 🤗

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Reeba shukla

@ReebaS

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#1037

Oh my god its sooo cute.. Their conversation... Doctor's visit part was lovely.. And the Last scene was cherry on top.. Finally sumo agreed to marry shravi. Next update asap dear.

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pinky.padda

@pinky.padda

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#1038

yay

shraman are getting married

so happy

awesome update

loved it

continue soon

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KitkitMkb

@KitkitMkb

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#1039

Chapter 12

She was seeing his pain each day in trying to revive Sumo in spite of knowing all well what fate he will meet once she did recall everything. His unconditional love. Argh.

This Shravan is damn cute, cutting onions 😆
But his way of apologizing was so genuine ❤️

He bought her home 😭
This is one of the most wanted ShraMan scenes. So many feel.
The swing scene. FAV.
Your Sumo is so hopeful at the moment, it sucks to know how much they are going to hurt. How she kept talking about him

The hug and the kisses were so unexpected 😳
Here also Shravan is on his guards, but rightly so !

"Please aaj mat jao"This line. Just.

What he experienced next was a healing for so many half done goodbyes in the past. This line is beautiful, fav from the chapter.

"Tum chaho bhi to apni replacement nahi bana sakte kisi ko meri life me Shravan"
She is so in love with him.
And the gift 😳 These two babies deserve to be happy.
Big problem on its way but can't wait to catch up!
I am loving it !

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Lubna

@LubnaK786

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#1040

Another amazing chapter Dips!!
You always do this to me, I was so lost in reading this that didn't realize when my eyes welled up messing up even my waterproof eye makeup 😆
Par ye khushi ke assoon the. I just loved it. OK my phone I sent acting up now typing very slow on this site. But you made me very happy today.

Lubna

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