ShraMan FF - The Thing Called Love (Updated on 21/2/17) - Page 3

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Interesting concept
Marriage too early
Update soon
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Originally posted by: reshmanair356

If the subject matter is Shraman. ..I would vote a yayy for a wedding at 6 years of age😆😆

Bring it on!!


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sadia.Ritu

Child marriage - bal vivaah bol bol ke you guys are making me nervous😆

I am feeling like I am breaking law🤣

Gosh...take it easy!!😃
Story will be posted soon..


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Thank you so much guys for your opinions...And yeah belated Happy Valentine's Day...Sorry for the delay too!
Exams...you know!🤢
Enjoy reading😃

x.x.x

Chapter 1


"Boys don't cry, Dumbo!", Suman says sounding annoyed, but in actual she is damn awestruck by the sight in front of her.

Suman Tiwari, a beautiful fun-loving girl of 16 years is staring at her best friend, Shravan Malhotra. He is crying because Landon lost Jemmie, yeah they're watching her favourite movie "A Walk To Remember" for the 53th time and as always he's crying. Suman knows lots of guys but never saw any guy crying, and because of an emotional movie scene? Never!

"I hate this movie", Shravan says, wiping his tears secretly.
"Yeah I can see that", Suman chuckles offering him a tissue paper.

He glares at her & takes the tissue.

"I can't understand tumhe ye sab stupid silly romantic movie itne pasand kyun hai"
"Excuse me! Neither its stupid nor its silly!, Dumbo"
"Yeah right", he rolls his eyes sarcastically.
"Now I gotta go. See you tomorrow", she says, getting up.
"Sumo...", he calls out from behind.
"Hmm?"
"Thank you!"
"For...?"
"For coming and making me feel that I am not alone"
"Shravan, even if I don't make you feel ever that, just remember you're not alone ever!", she smiles & blinks.

He smiles & gets up.

"Kahan jaa raha hai?"
"Tumhe bahar tak chhorne!"
"Oh please itna formal mat ho. Chup chap betha reh. Warna koi tere ankhe dekhenge to bolenge ke maine tujhe rulaya hai, cry baby!", she teases.

He laughs.

~~~

Next morning.
At school.

"Dear students, the cultural program week is coming up next month. Register your names in play or any other field. Details are pinned in the notice board. Go after classes", The teacher announces.
"Hey Sumo! What are you going to do?", Purna asks.
"Paratha khaane wali hoon. With extra butter"
"Arey pagal, main cultural week ki baat kar rahi hoon. Tu kis cheej mein naam degi?"
"Pagal hai? Main nehi dene wali kisi cheej mein naam"
"Why not?", Purna asks confused.

Before Suman can say anything, Yukti comes and interrupts.

"Hey Sumo! Tune dekha Shravan Urvashi ke saath dance karne wala hai. Par tu to kehti thi woh tera best friend hai"

Suman sighs.

"Haan woh mera best friend hai. Iska matlab ye nehi ke usse mere siva kisi se baat karna allowed nehi hai!", Suman smiles.

Yukti leaves defeated while Purna laughs and appreciates Suman.

"Well done meri jhalli"
"Chal"
"Kahan?"
"Play mein naam dete hai"
"Par abhi to tu keh rahi the ke tujhe nehi participate karna"

Suman smiles.

"Tu nehi sudharne wali Sumo!"

Purna & Suman go to the rehearsal room.

"Hey Abhishek!", Suman calls out.

Abhishek, Shravan & Urvashi's classmate, senior to Suman and one of most popular boys of the school turns back & smiles at Suman. Not revealed, yet not unknown that he has a crush on Suman. He comes near her.

"Hey Sumo! Whats up?", Abhishek says cheerfully sipping in his pepsi.
"Abhishek, will you be my Romeo?"
"What!?", he almost chocks.
"Hey easy! I am talking about our play. You know, for cultural week?"
"Oh!"
"Are you relieved now?", she teases.
"No. disappointed", he sighs dramatically.
"Shut up!", she whacks his arm playfully.

Shravan, who is discussing their dance steps with choreographer along with Urvashi, he looks at them.

"Whoa! That will be romantic, isn't it Shravan?", Urvashi asks.
"Yeah", Shravan replies still glaring at Suman & Abhishek.

"Okay Sumo! I'll take leave. Don't worry, your Romeo will be at time in the rehearsals"
"Bye!", she smiles at him.

Suman's gaze meets with Shravan's and they smile at each other.

~~~

"Why Abhishek?", Shravan finally speaks up when they reached Tiwari Killa after school.
"Why Urvashi?", Suman asks back.
"Sumo you're being childish"
"Shravan I am 16. Not 80 like you. So don't expect to do mature things from me"
"fine!", he turns back to leave by stops.

"When we first met you were annoying.
Who knew we would become the bestest of friends.
Talking on the phone. Chatting on the net.
Every minute thanking God that we met"

Suman recites and leaves. Shravan smiles & turns to Suman but finds her almost reached at the door and ringing the bell. He leaves, smiling.

~~~

At midnight.

"Hmm?"
"Hello! Sumo woh..."
"Shravan its 1am and agar kuch dhang ka kehna hai toh bol warna phone rakh. Mujhe subha jaldi uthna hai", says a sleepy Sumo.
"Kyun?", Shravan gulps in fear.
"kyun matlab? Uthna hai jaldi"
"Kal kuch khaas hai kya?"
"Offo tune raat 1 baje phone kiya idhar udhar ki baate karne ke liye?"
"Nehi kuch puchna tha..."
"hmm?"
"Woh poetry mere liye tha?"
"nehi Hari Prasad Chaurasiya ke liye tha"
"Who's he?"

Suman cuts the call being annoyed.

"Pagal!", she groans.
"Jhalli!", he huffs.

The next day.
At evening.
Suman reaches at home tired.
"Suman, beta Ramnath bhai sahab ka phone aya tha, woh log gaaon jaa rahe hai. Sumitra masi jee ne tujhe bhi bulaya hai. Apna bag pack karle", Sameer announces.

Suman gets confused.

"Okay mama jee"

Suman goes to her room & calls on Abhishek's phone.

"Hey Sumo!"
"Hello Abhishek, listen main nani ke ghar jaa rahi hoon. Toh I don't think main aaj rehearsal mein aa paungi. Tum Purna ke saath rehearsal karlo please"
"Okay. Have fun"
"I'll try", Suman says, yet tensed.

They end the call.

~~~

At Shravan's grandma's home.

"Aise aasman se gidne wali kaunsi baat kehdi maine? Mujhe mere Shravan Suman ki shaadi dekhni hai sirf yehi to manga hai", Sumitra says dramatically.
"Par maa...", Ramnath says but gets interrupted.
"Ram, jab Suman payda hui thi tab hi maine keh diya tha ke inki shaadi hogi"
"Kab? Maa ne toh mujhe kabhi nehi bataya", Suman asks, being impatient.
"Arey kaha tha. Teri maa batana bhool gayi tujhe", Sumitra says avoiding Suman's glare.
"Aur tum sab, jaao taiyyari shuru karo. Ghar mein shaadi hai, arey mere Shravan Suman ki shaadi hai, tayyiari mein koi kaami reh gayi toh kheyer nehi tum logo ki", Sumitra says happily to the people standing around.

Ramnath leaves the room sighing, no matter how was his and Nirmala's relationship but he always respects his mother in law. Shravan who was standing there totally clueless, once looks at happy Sumitra then at tensed Suman. He doesn't know what to say. Generally people get spellbound in such shocking situation.

"Tu kuch bolega, mouni baba?", Suman glares at Shravan, being irked by his silence.

Shravan sighs. What should he say? Mmm is he happy about it? Getting married to Sumo, spending the whole life beside her, seeing her being his wife from his best friend...wait what? Wife??? Seriously? What kind of crap is that? Sumo the jhalli the most impatient the trouble maker - his wife? No freaking way!! His eyes wide open in realisation. He sits on a chair, nervous, hell nervous!

"Kya hai ye sab?", finally Suman asks Sumitra.
"Kya? Shaadi hai tum dono ki", she says casually.
"Nani, don't act so innocent. Kya naya drama hai ye? Please not again! Last time apne same bahana banake mujhe aur Shravan ko apne paas bula liya tha jab ke humare exams chal rahe the. Ek din ka gape tha next paper mein aur hum yaha aa gaye, ye chashmish to paas ho gaya..aapke zid ke wajeh se main fail ho gayi. But not this time. Main ab aapke jhanse mein nehi aane wali. Shaadi? Aur wo bhi ab? I'm just 16.."
"Arey tu 16, Shravu 18 - perfect match hai. Tere nana ji 20 aur main 14 ki thi jab humari shaadi hui thi pata hai?"
"nani, you must be kidding. Aap apne generation ke saath compare kar rahe ho?"
"Beta waqt badalta hai soch badalti hai par rishte, pyaar aaj bhi wohi hai jo pehle tha"
"Sorry to say but Shravan aur main hum dono aapke aur nana ke jaise nehi hai. Humare bich aisi koi baat hai hi nehi"
"Arey nehi hai to ho jayega. Puri zindagi padi hai tum dono ke saamne. Aur main kaunsa keh rahi hoon tum dono ko abhi ghar basalo. Main to bas chahti hoon shaadi abhi ho jaye, jab tum dono legally eligible ho jaoge shaadi ke liye tab registry kar lenge", Sumitra says happily.
"Matlab aap nehi maanne wali?"
Sumitra gives a sheepish smile which makes Suman understand everything. She sighs. Sumitra chuckles and calls her near. Suman sits near her.


PS: Remember the poem..I'll complete it in any of the next chapters.
Poem credit: Owner.
Edited by Sadia.Ritu - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#25
Amazing!
Marriage at 16 &18, i am super excited to read next parts!
Please update it soon!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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🤣🤣awesome update I'm sure nani inki shadi karva k rahegi or phir kabhi kabhi ye dono ek dusre ko tease kiya Karenge or kabhi kabhi irritate😆 bhi karenge I'm waiting for read more😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome it is!!..I am so tempted to ask you to update the next chapter in like the next hour😉..
Can I take this Nani home...I am in love with her😆
Solah baras kind bali umar mein shaadi. .this is so exciting😳
This chapter cheered me up..so thanks for that!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Getting ready to witness the marriage of Shraman!!!
BTW, the story flow was beautiful...
Update the next part soon..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Very interesting story Ritu. Very well written. Can't wait to read what happens next.

Lubna.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wonderful update.please update next part soon.

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