SHRAMAN FF....Soulmates - chapter 26 updated pg 101 on 11/2 - Page 24

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Awww beautiful amazing wonderful lovely as always dear...


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Hi all thanks for your comments, its really meant a lot for me . they encourages me to write more 😃. Hope you all are doing well and really sorry for persistently late updates 😳 please bare with me.
ab jyada nahi bolna here we go with next chapter 😊


Chapter 7

"Meeting you was destiny.
Becoming friends with you was a choice.
But failing in love with you...
I Had no control over"


Here this two souls sitting tongue-tied on a bench, beneath of the dark sky filled with stars that flicker, staring it and thinking about "What to say and what is next?"

After a long silence finally shravan decided to break the ice between them, their eyes were still immersed in black sky finding their answers.

"Sumo i am sorry, for whatever i did on dance floor" his thick remorseful voice broke silence,
sumo let out a long breath and turned to face him "shravan i am also really sorry, it was not only your fault, i am also blameworthy and shares equal part"
shravan now turned his face to catch her glimpse with his apologetic eyes
"haan shravan galti hum dono ki hai, aur hum dono janate hai ye sahi nahi hai, muze lagta hai hum logo ko es pe koi solution nikalana padega" she castes her eyes down

he straighten himself an turned his body to face her completely
"Haan sumo, if we will keep behaving like this then it will be awfully laborious for both of us" she assented to the agreement and he continued
"I guess hum logo ko ek rule book banani chahiye what you say?" he lifted an eyebrow in question
"Haan shravan you are right, nahi to hum logo ka kuchh nahi ho sakata" she passed a sheepish grin
"Okay madam so first rule is we are friends from now onward, aise friends jo ek dusare se sab share kar sake without any ambivalence okay?" he forwarded his hand for friendship


Sau khwaab hain, Ik zindagi
Kaise chune kya chahiye
Shayad teri haan na mile
Phir bhi humein teri na chahiye

she accepted with wide grin "Yes friends" he responded with a radiant smile

Zara si dosti kar le
Zara sa humnasheen ban ja
Zara sa saath de bas
Phir chahe ajnabi ban ja

she continued "now my turn 2nd rule no teasing to each other"

his eyes narrowed in skepticism "don't know but will try" she chuckled
he continued "achha sumo, no blushing and no flushing" he said in modulated voice, a flush crept up her face and her eyelids drooped
"r u kidding me yaar sumo tum aise mat karo please tum to abhise rule tod rahi ho" he whinged, without warning he captured her picture in mobile
her eyes went round on sudden sound of camera click "shravan ye kya kar rahe ho?" she inquired in perplexity
"Dekho kitna achhi photo aayi hai, ekdam sharmati hui nayi naveli dulhan, aab mein apane sare dosto ko dikhaunga tumhara ye photo and they will have a sweet misunderstanding that bhabhiji kitni sharmati hai" he said looking her photo with mischievous smile

she rolled her eyes "whatever" now its her turn "Okay okay fine, next rule no jealousy and no interference in each others life"

"Okay, but we can give and ask suggestion if we find something is wrong as friend" she hummed and he continued "and we will be equal partners in each crime okay"
she rolled her eyes "Okay"
"Achha shravan ek baat batao tumane ring intentionally girayi thi na" she casted doubt on him

"haan actually nervousness ho rahi thi" he said sheepishly, she chuckled on his honesty "achha ek aur baat if we feel anything awkward about other then we tell on face without any second thought that what the next person will think"

RULES ARE MEANT TO BE BROKEN !!!!

"Okay, chalo aajke liye etana kafi hai, ab andar chale sab hume dhundh rahe honge" she requested
both gave a warm smile to each other and got up to leave but found pushkar coming toward them
"Bhaiyya aap log yaha kya kar rahe ho sab andar aako dhund rahe hai, agar aap log bhul gaye ho to mein yaad dilau ke aaj aapki sagai hai sab log aapke liye aaye hai yaha" pushkar was annoyed for searching them from past 10 mins
shravan rolled his eyes "Are chote sas to le le, woh actually sumo ko thoda suffocation ho raha tha to hum log yaha aa gaye thodi khuli hawa me" he concealed innocently,
but how can pushkar waste golden chance to pull his big bro leg "Hmmm bhaiyya, sachme khuli hawame aana tha ya akele me aana tha huh? waise to jis tarah se aap log ek dusare ko tadh rahe the i doubt, kyu sumo bhabhi" he flashed a wide devil grin, within a sec red leaked into her cheeks as she nervously smiled and bit her lip.
shravan shook his head in disbelief on quick rule break and shifted his gaze to pushkar he wrapped one hand on pushkar's shoulder
"hmm...chote muze lagta hai na gharwalon ko jara batana padega ki hum log dopahar me kaunse imp kaam me fase the hai na?"
pushkar's eyes widened and smile slipped, shravan gave him "Don't mess with me" look with a wide smile
"Bhaiyya woh...woh...sorry aap chaliye sab bula rahe hai" he stammered and scooted to backyard,
shravan smiled on his brothers predicament and gazed at perplexed sumo "Kya hua aise kyu dekh rahi ho woh hum dono ke bich ki baat hai haan lekin tumhe bhi bataunga afterall we are partners in crime" he winked and continued "aapka sharmana ho gaya ho to chale by god sumo tum nahi sudharogi na turant rule tod deti ho, achha aab jab tumane ek rule tod diya hai to mein bhi ek rule todu " a line appeared between her brows and she raised a brow in question
"You are looking ravishing in this lahenga, just a compliment take it easily" he smirked
"Thank you btw tum bhi" she said shyly

Meri khaamoshi se baatein chun lenaa
Unn ki Doree say taareefein bun lenaa

Kal nahee thee jo aaj lagtee hoon
Taareef meree hai khaamakhaa
Tohfaa hai teraa meri adaa

"kya sumo mein bhi means don't say mein beautiful lag raha hu lahenge me" he smiled quizzically
she whacked on his arm "stupid beautiful nahi handsome lag rahe ho es sherwani me" she irked on his tease

Tujhse milke dil ko ye yaqeen ho gaya
Aaine mein main sab se haseen ho gaya

Tu nigaahein phere to lage yun mujhe
Mujhse khoobsurat har koi ho gaya

"Waise sumo tumane 2 2 rule tode , lekin sachme agar hum log anjan bhi hote aur tum agar kahi muze dikh jati na to mein pakka tumhe palat palat ke dekhata jab tak tum chali nahi jati" he beamed
her mouth fell open "Chhi shravan tum aise ho tapori kahike ladkiyon ko tadhate ho, mein tumhe achha ladka samazati thi"
"Are usame tapori wali kya baat hai, agar sundar ladki dikhi to use dekhana chahiye na, aur ek baat batao tum ladkiya kiske liye etana taiyyar hoti ho taki ladke tumhe dekhe hai na, esiliye etane bhar bharke makeup karti ho, to etani mehnat waste to nahi jani chahiye na, duniya me kadardan to hone hi chahiye" he winked "aur haan please sumo ab sharmana shuru mat ho jana, its dangerous to my mental health, ab chalo nahito sab log yaha aa jayenge aur tum chalti firti tamatar ban jaogi" she lost her tongue and kept staring him

he hold her hand and went inside before someones appearance. When they entered backyard everyone bombarded them with questions but shravan handled situation very well, now they are more comfortable with each other and relaxed.
preeti reached sumo and opens her mouth in question but shravan jumped in to save sumo "are preeti muze lagta hai koi tumhe dhund raha hai"
she gazed him question "kaun jiju"
"Shayad pushkar tumhe dhund raha tha" she bit her lip and skipped off from there. Remaining evening passed happily without any more troubles but shraman was getting good amount of tease from everyone. All had dinner and Tiwaris left as it was getting late.

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Next day evening MM
kamini and nirmala were in dadis room discussing about how well engagement accomplishment without any trouble
"Muze to laga tha anguthi nahi milegi to pata nahi kya hoga, lekin bhagwan ka lakh lakh shukar hai sab achhese par pad gaya" dadi gratified with the function

"Haan maaji muze to jab tak un dono ki shadi na ho jaye tab tak chain nahi aayega" nirmala smiled mildly
"are esiliye bol rahi hu jaldi panditji ko bula ke shadi ki date fix kar lo, waise bhi kitani sari arrangement karani hai" dadi enjoined zealously
nirmala and kamini stared her perplexedly

"haan dadima mere shadi ke baad es ghar me pahali shadi hai mein to bahot shopping karungi aur haan mein apane sare friends ko bhi bulaungi" vandy chirped while entering room with evening tea for all

"Are puttar tu apana ye jo khwabo ka hawai jahaj hai na use jara lagam de agar tum bhul gayi ho to yaad dila du shravan ne bola hai wo register marriage karne wala hai" kamini busted vandy's dreamy bubble
sudden disappointment made vandy sulky and she stands there with a sullen pout, nirmala and kamini grinned on her innocence and concentrated back on dadi

"ekdam sahi kamini maaji shravan ne to bola na ki wo court marriage karega to usame kya taiyyari karani hai?" nirmala darted her eyes toward dadi in bemusement

dadi went silent and started deep thinking about how to convince shravan for big fat marriage while stroking her chin, nirmala and kamini kept her staring dumbfoundedly
after few moments "ek baat batao nitmala tumhe kya lagta hai shadi kaise honi chahiye?" dadi asked thoughtfully
"Ye bhi koi puchane wali baat hai maaji mera aklauta beta hai aur kitane arman hai usake shadi ke lekin sahabjade mane tab na" nirmala chided
"Hmm to thik hai tum log dhire dhire taiyyari me lag jao baki sab muzape chod do kamse kam ek reception to hona hi chahiye nahi" dadi gazed them naughtily and a nod was as good as a wink to lit up trio
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All malhotra's were having dinner, vandy was feeding dinner to eti, suddenly eti signaled her to stop
"kya hua baby abhi to aapne thoda hi khaya hai" vandy asked with concern,
everyone heeded toward eti
"mumma eti ko chachi se baat karni hai very very very imp baat hai" eti spreaded her hands in air widely as much as possible for her small hands
all family members stared her with inscrutable faces "puttarji etani raat me tumhe chahchi se kya baat karni hai" kamini caressed etis hairs
"eti ko baat karni hai abhi dadi plz" she pouted with 2 big fat tears in her eyes and now no one in the family have venture to refuse her and all shifted their pleading gaze to shravan
he got up from his chair and took eti in his arms "baby abhi bahot late ho gaya hai na aap chachi se kal baat kar lena na" he tucked her hair braids behind her ears
she quickly wrapped her tiny hands around his neck and gave him peck on his chick "chachu aap eit ki ettisi baat nahi manenge plz chachu" now he also dropped all guards how can he say no, he smiled beatifically
"okay ek kaam karate hai eti aur chachu apana dinner finish karate hai badme aapki baat karawata hu okay" eti clapped happily,
ehan also jumped of from his sit and crossed his hands to his chest with frown on all over face "ab ese kya ho gaya, vandy tumhare bachhe bhi kamal hai ek manta hai to dusara ruthata hai" varun smiled on ehan's antics, he bit his tongue as soon as he realized what blunder he made but its late now
"achha mere bacche hai aur tumhare nahi hai" vandy frowned
"mera woh matlab nahi tha vandy" terror overtook his face
"haan muze sab samaz me aata hai tumhara kya matlab hai jab kuch achha kare to mere bachhe mera sona mera mona aur jab bhi kuch shaitani kare to tumhare bacche" vandy scowled and folded her hands across chest
everyone suppress their smiles and tried very hard to retain doleful expression on their faces, ehan slapped his head in dismay he was the one who supposed to get attention but here his parents started their tom and jerry fight again
"mumma papa aap to muzase bhi chote ho jab dekho tab ladhte rahate ho... huh" vandy and varun chuckled in ehans antics and smiled radiantly , all busted in laughter
"sorry beta papa ko maaf kar do" varun knelled down infront of ehan with holding his ears "achha ab batao kya ho gaya aap kyu ghussa ho gaye the" varun caressed his chick
"muze bhi chachi se baat karani hai, aap sab sirf eti ki baat manate ho koi muzase pyar nahi karta" he pouted
"dhat tere ki etani si baat beta ye to bina ruthe bhi bol sakata hai waise bhi tere chachu ko to ab suman puttar se baat karne bahane chahiye honge na, esame to usika hi fayada hai" lalaji grinned widely and winked and everybody joined him turning shravan crimson

"haan to lala tu bhi kam nahi tha shadi tay hui thi to hamesha bahane dhundate rahata tha apane sasural jane ka" dadi glared lalaji and he ceased his smile a flush crept up kamini's face "shravan to sirf phone hi kar raha hai, vaise ladsahabji kal aap kaha gayab ho gaye apani sumooo ko leke" dadi teased shravan stressing on sumo

finally uncontrollable pushkar opened his mouth "dadi wo khuli hawa me gaye the aur lalaji ab to bhaiyya ko jitane bahane mile bhabhi se baat karane ke utane kam hai" and flashed his colgate smile
shravan glared him "haan lalaji waise kal hum log thode imp kaam me phase the na" and fear crossed pushkar's face and his smile slipped
"haan shravan kaha fas gaye the kal tum dono" ramnath inquired while taking bite of his food
pushkar pleaded sharavan with eyes not to reveal yesterdays incident, and he passed a "i told you don't mess up with me" look, pushkar downcast his eyes in fear

"Actually kuchh nahi papa wo jara car band ho gayi thi usame toda time lag gaya" pushkar snapped his eyes toward shravan and he winked
All finished their dinner and retired to their respected rooms and shravan went to his room along with two cuties
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Suman's condition was also not different, in office she was the hot topic for whole day and was sure soon it wont change. Anjali didn't left any chance to tease her which were perfectly exhibited by each different shade of pink on her chicks.
Everyone was praising shravan such as they met with some kind of celebrity and he was the center of discussion for all girls in the office.
She was already tired with all the gibberish talk in office but it was not end for her when she reached home masi and preeti also teased her. finally when she came to her room after dinner it was very soothing for her.she changed into her pajamas and loose tshirt.
She slides on bed under her pink flowery duvet, it was already 10.30 in night so kept her phone on side table and played with engagement ring in the finger while remembering all teasing comments she received today.
This engagement ring is new for her, this feeling is new for her, she never thought this will happened, her life is going to change from mow.

"chachu jaldi karo na chachi so jayegi" both siblings chirped joyfully while jumping on bed
"haan haa laga raha hu aap log pahale shant ho jao nahito sumo dar jayegi" he picked his phone to call her
she was in deep thought when her phone ringed, she shuddered with unexpected sound.
after 3 bells she composed herself and answered phone.

since both fighting for who will talk first shravan failed to discern that his call got answered
"Hello shravan, hello kaha ho kuch bolo" she replied impatiently when she didn't heard any reply
he heard her voice "are haan sumo yahi hu jara sas to lo, kitani impatient ho tum"
"haan to koi phone lagake aise gayab thodi ho jata hai aur etani raat me phone kiya kitna dar gayi thi mein" his comment irked her more

"ohh sorry sorry haan pata hai late ho gaya hai lekin ye do shaitan mane tab na en dono ko tumase baat karani thi abhi pura ghar sar pe utha rakha tha bapre" he quipped

"ohh ehan aur eti woh log etane raat tak soye nahi" she got up and rested her back on headrest
"haan lo pahale enase baat karo nahito aur hungama khada kar denge mein speaker pe dalta hu" he put phone on speaker
"Hello chachi" ehan and eti replied in unison
she felt pleased hearing chachi from this 2 cuties, her mouth curved into a smile "hello ehan and eti, aap log abhi tak soye nahi baby"
"nahi chachi muze aapse bahot imp baat karani thi" eti replied earnestly,
shavan was admiring cute interaction of this two siblings with sumo
"haan beta bolo kya hua?"
"chachi aap ghar kab aayengi?" mystified eti inquired
"beta abhi nahi aaungi shadi ho jayegi na tab aaungi" sumo smiled on eti's adorableness
"lekin chchi abhi kyu nahi aa sakati aap, i miss you" eti gave her cutest pout, shravan chuckled on her antics
"haan chachi aap aa jayengi na to mein aapke sath bahot sare games khelunga, i have so many video games" ehan beamed
"haan baby we will pakka play" sumo grinned "aap log jaake so jao abhi bahot late ho gaya na ehan aapka school nahi hai kal?"
"ya ya hai na chachi boring school, eti bahot lucky hai she dont have any school" he pouted and eti pop out tounge to annoy him more "chachu dekho na ye muze chidha rahi hai" he whined
shravan shook his head in disbelief "eti stop annoying him ab ho gayi baat karake ab jao tum dono sone late ho gaya nahi to bhabhz aa jayegi fir mat bolna chachu bachao" he urged

"yes chachu good night chachi, love you" and ehan gave her a flying kiss
"love to you too baby good night" she replied beatifically
"good night chachi, love you" eti mocked her brother and gave a flying kiss
"love you too baby and good night"
"chahu aap bhi chachi ko i love you boliye na, aur aap bhi chachi ko good night kissi dijiye jaise papa mummy ko deti hai" eti chirped leaving shraman dumbfounded

shravans face flushed completely on this lil monsters comment
"shaitan kahike ruko bhabhi ko batata hu tum logo ki shaitani bhago yaha se badmash kahike" both siblings dashed out of room
shravan turned off speaker "sorry woh bachhe bhi na ye dono bahot shaitan ho gaye hai aajkal" he faked anger to clear out embarrassment

"hmm...its okay bachhe hi to hai" she replied shyly and tucked her hair braid behind ear
"tum so gayi thi kya?"
"hmm...actually leti hui thi. it was very long day for me"
"aaj jyada kam tha kya?" he inquired casually
"are kaam nahi lekin logone bahot pareshan kiya aaj"
"Kyu? kya hua? any problem?" he agitated
"aur kya problem hoga tum ho problem?" she replied absently
"matlab meine kya kiya ab?" his eyes widened,
sumo slapped her head
"are nahi actually woh woh haan sagai ke bare me baat kar rahe the sab" she stammered
"ohh haan to madam finally hum logo ki engagement ho gayi"
"haan pata nahi lekin but its a different feeling" she replied while checking her ring
"hmm, ghar me bhi aaj sab wahi baate kar rahe the"
"hmm yaha bhi wahi haal hai sagai to ho gayi leking sab abhi tak wahi pe atake hue hai" she rolled her eyes
"lekin sumo ek problem hai ab hum log ko bhi typical couples wale line me aa gaye na?" he asked quizzically
"haan na aur ab kahi bi jayenge sath me to muze aisa bolna padega ki ye mere husband hai...ehh?" she shuddered by imagination
"ohh god sumo really muze bhi ye bolna padega meet my wife Mrs suman Shravan malhotra, ye bahot acchese events manage karati hai and all na?" he asked wryly
she nodded "hmm...achha abhi ghar walon ke hisab se to hum logone sagai kar li hai lekin ab shadi ke liye hum logo ko 1 month pahale notice dena padega na" suggested roguishly
"ohh haan kya muze to pata hi nahi nahi tha" he deapanned
"shravan tumhe sach me nahi pata, hum logo ko kal hi jaana padega, kaise ladke ho tumhe kuchh nahi pata, kal jayenge mein bhi aungi, mein apane sare kaam khud karati hu" she speaks out her mind impatiently without any break

"ohh lady please hold your horses, don't forget you are getting married to one of the best lawyer in the country" he irked on her continuous bombarding

she bit her tongue "oh sorry sorry,lekin hum logo ko 1 month pahle registration karna padega na"
"haan registration to karna padta hai, but i will manage no need to stress yourself" he replied nonchalantly
"nahi shravan mein bhi aaungi muze apane sare kaam khud karne ki adat hai aur waise bhi tumane kaha tha na we are partners in crime correct" she grinned widely

he shook his head on her stubbornness "okay baba aa jana kal office me to hum log sath me chalnge"

"okay do dona done done" she chirped with wide grin
"kal meri 12 baje ek meeting hai tum usake baad aa jana okay?" he lifted an eyebrow
"haan chalega mein half day ki leave dal dungi, chalo abhi rakhati hu bahot neend aa rahi hai muze" she yawned

"ek min ek min" he intervened "kal 12 baje milna hai pakka yad rakhana okay late mat karna"
"nahi late to nahi hoga lekin agar 5, 10, 15 min late ho gaya to please wait karna" she said shipeeshly
"hmmm...to sumo madam late latif hai interesting thik hai mein 12.30 tak wait karunga, okay chalo bye" he smiled on her innocence

Ek din kabhee jo khud ko taraashay
Meri nazar se tu zaraa, haaye re
Aankhon se teree kyaa kyaa chhupaa hai
Tujh ko dikhaaoon main zaraa, haye re
Ik ankahee si daastaan daastaan
Kehne lagegaa aainaa
Subhanallah..
Jo ho raha hai pehlee dafa hai wallah
Aisa hua..

"ek min ek min" this time sumo urged to hold back

"kya hua kahi tum typical ladkiyon ki tarah miss you love you aise to nahi bolne wali ho na" his eyes narrowed in sarcasm

"ji bilkul nahi aisa kuch nahi bas etana bolna tha Good night" her chicks turned pink
"Ok good night" he scratched back of his head and ended call
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Both families new mission was started, everyone tried their best to convince SHRAMAN for big fat indian wedding from past 4 days but all in vain finally dadi decided to call nanu and figure out solution for this problem
dadi dialed nanu's number

"Hello tiwariji baat kar rahe hai"
"Ji haan mein raghuvar tiwari hi baat kar raha hu"
"Namasteji mein sumitra baat kar rahi hu shravan ki dadi"
"Namate namaste maaf kijiyega mein pahchan nahi paya"
"Koi dikkat nahi tiwariji meine darasal es liye phone kiya tha ki shadi ki tarikh final kare to taiyyari bhi karani hai lekin shravan man hi nahi raha hai" dadi was absolutely cheesed off with her GS

he sighed "kya bataye aapko behanji yaha bhi wahi haal hai suman to kuchh manane ke liye hi taiyyar nahi hai" smiled sadly

"esiliye meine aapko phone kiya hai aise kaise chalege hum logo ko samaj me rahna hai ki nahi kya bolenge log hume" dadi annoyed beyond limits

"App bilkul sahi kah rahi hai en bachhon ko koi kuchh nahi bolega lekin hum logon ko to sabko jawab dena padta hai" nanu consented to dadi blackly

"mein kya soch rahi hum log suman se baat karate hai aur aap log shravan se baat kariye tab woh log hume mana nahi kar payenge, bina rasmo ke kaunsi shadi mayane rakhati hai" dadi said playfully

"haan ye sahi hai ek kaam karta hu mein rachana aur babulal ko samazata hu woh log shravan se baat kar lenge" nanu put forward his idea

"thik hai mein bhi kamini aur lala ko bolti hu wo suman se baat kar lenge" dadi replied slyly
"Thik hai rakhata hu ab lekin aaj bachhose baat jarror karenge thik hai"
"Thik achhaji namaste" dadi ended call

So finally as per plan rachana and babulal met up shravan and on the other hand kamini and lalaji met suman. After long discussions they induced SHRAMAN for marriage with bag of tricks and lies. Both triumphant couples informed family members about news haughtily.

Truth always comes out!!!

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Its a early evening, Shravan was thinking about how to talk with sumo regarding his endorsement for big fat marriage, how she will react.
Its an hour he was thinking about this again and again and finally he decided to call her. He called her and asked her to meet in park.
Shravan reached on time but sumo as usual reached 30 min late, he saw her and waved his hand to catch her eye
"HI shravan" she came running toward him
"when we met first time and i was late for 5 mins, you remember how you acted and see now you are the one who keep coming late every time" he aggravated on her late latif habit
"okay baba sorry woh actually last moment pe kaam aa gaya tha to late ho gaya" she said sheepishly like a cat on hot bricks.
"Hmm...better lekin yaar tumhari yeh late aane ki adat kabhi nahi jayegi na" he said gravelly
he looked into her fearful eyes "jis din tumhe kisika intejar karna padega na tab pata chalega" he said wryly
"sorry na shravan ab please maaf kar do" she pulled her ears with puppy eyes
"achha achha thik hai jyada sweet banane ki jaroorat nahi hai its okay, pareshan mat ho lagta hai muze adat ho jayegi tumhara wait karane ki" he shrugged and her lips curved into a beatific smile, both lost in admiring each other



Ek din kabhi jo khud ko pukaaray
Meri zubaan se tu zaraa, haye re
Tujh mein chhupee si jo shaayari hai
Tujh ko sunaaoon main zaraa, haye re
Ye do dilon kaa waasta waasta
Khul ke bataayaa jaaye naa
Subhanallah..

shavan composed himself and snapped his fingers to break her trance,
"sumo ek baat batao ye pagal pan ke daure tumhe hamesha aate hai ya aaj kuch special hai?" his eyes darted quizzically

"Matlab?" she dazed on his question
"Matlab ye jo tum hamesha baat karate karate muze ghurne lagati ho, kahi janeman aapka dil to nahi aa raha hai humpe" he winked and she roller her eyes

"Oh hello apane aapko kya prince charming samazate ho jo tumape mera dil aayega...huh" she crossed her hands to chest

"achha baba thik hai ab ye sab natak ho gaya ho to jis kaam ke liye aaye hai wo kar le" his eyebrows rose showing he is slightly miffed so deflected their conversation to main point

"okay bolo kya hua kyu bulaya tumne?" she ensconced on bench beside him

"Actually woh kya hai na sumo, you should have given me an inkling of your mothers last wish, i would have never impelled you for register marriage even though i have issue with sitting long time for all those rasams" his gazed her with his remorseful eyes

"kya bol rahe ho shravan?" she flabbergasted "meri maa ki last wish kaha se aayi"
"Haan tumhari maa ki last wish thi na tumhari shadi sari rasmoke sath ho waisa unhone masi re wachan bhi liya tha" he uttered earnestly

"what? aur ye kisane bataya tumhe?" she narrowed her eyes sensing something is fishy
"Are aaj tumhari masi aur mausaji aaye the office me muze milane unhone bataya" he stared her broodingly
"aur tumhare chachaji aur chachiji mere office aaye the muzase milane" she passed sly smile and realization downed to him
he ground his jaw,"what a astute thespians, they..."
"trapped us" she completed him and shrugged

"and what they thought they can keep us in dark" he irked and she shook her head in dismay
"yaar ye log kitne achhese emotional blackmailing karate hai, har waqt hum logo ko fasa lete hai aur..."
"aur hum log fas bhi jaate hai we are the biggest jackass in the whole world" she scowled
"do they really think we are puppet of their hands" he frowned

"Sach me man to kar raha hai na aisa kuch kare..." she fumed and squeezed her eyes shut
"hmm...kuch karna padega how they can play with us" after thinking for a moment he continued "sumo see hum logo bhag ke shadi karate hai" his eyes glinted with devilish smirk

"Kya bhag ke shadi matlab himlogo ki to shadi hone wali to hai na fir" she narrowed her eyes in perplexity

"Hmm dekho shadi to hum logo ko karani hai correct, ab gharwalon ne apana kaam kar liya, agar hum log kal hi court marriage karenge to unlog kuchh nahi kar payenge aur hum log apane hisab se shadi bhi kar sakenge"his face lit up with mischievous smirk

"great idea i am in...lekin shravan ek din me shadi kaise hogi" she got baffled
"Ms Suman tiwari aap ek baat bhul rahi hai lekin ab akhari baar bata raha hu, aapki shadi es country ke one of the top intelligent lawyer se ho rahi hai never ever forget that" he pulled his collars assuredly
"haan haan pata hai okay done then kal milate hai okay"
"kal mein tumhe subah subah pickup karunga"
"ok then bye kal milate hai" they shakes hand and left with the new plan in minds
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In late evening shravan called sumo and informed her all details, but he forgot to lock door as always, pushkar was on the way to entered his bro's room but stopped at door and overheard all discussion but he decided to keep mum and entered shravans room
"Bhaiyya kya kar rahe ho?"
"chalo mein tumhe badme call karta hu bye bye" he ended call hurriedly
"are kuchh nahi chote woh mein woh mein...haan apane dost se baat kar raha tha" he stammered his forehead started sweating
"Ohh to esame etana ghabrane kya baat hai bhaiyya aapko etana pasina kyu aa raha hai?" pushkar raised a brow
he wiped off his forehead with his hand "are lagta hai ac band hai, tu bata kya hua?" concealed his anxiety
"bhaiyya suniye aapki ek help chahiye thi?" pushkar beamed, he knows his brother cant deny him

"woh actually aap bhabhi se.." he stopped by killing shravan in anxiety and color drained out of his face "preeti ka number loge kya muze actually usase baat karani hai college se nikalne ke baad kuchh pata hi nahi kisike bare me" pushkar smirked
shravan sighed in relief and let out a breath which he was holding unknowingly
"chote tu bhi na dara diya tha muze waise tere college ke friends nahi hai kya, today out of blue you are missing your college and wanted her number, chal kya raha hai bhai?" he wrapped his hand around pushkars shoulder playfully
"waise aap bhaiyya abhi bhabhi se baat karhe the na" pushkar stared him with mischievous grin imposing a secret hint
shravan gave in reluctantly "achha thik hai mein sumo se puchunga lekin use kya bolu?"
"woh aapka problem hai bhai, i just need preetis number" he shrugged quizzically "mein chalta hu you please continue" pointing toward his phone, pushkar left his room
shravan shut his eyes on his vulnerable position how easily this moron screwed him

Nirmala entered his room with content smile reflecting into her eyes, he can see how happy she is. she thanked him for his consent to marriage with all rituals while planting a kiss on his forehead sending him on a guilt trip.

Nanu also called suman in his room and thanked her for giving him most precious gift by saying yes for marriage with all rituals, he looked very serene and face lit up with impish glee, tears of guilt shimmered in her eyes.
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Next morning nirmala came to shrvans room with his morning coffee as usual but he is missing, she came down and solicited everyone about shravans whereabout, but no one have any clue.
She went to pushkars room "beta tuze pata hai shravan kaha hai?" nirmala inquired apprehensively
"badi maa bhaiyya court marriage karane gaye hai" he replied nonchalantly and her eyes widen
"Kya bol rahe ho tum ye?" his reply startled her
"Haan badi maa aap log unhe etana big fat wedding ke liye pareshan kar rahe the so he decided to opt for court marriage without telling you all" he split out matter of fact
nirmala flump on bed holding her head and tears filled her eyes

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Completed finally after getting deleted twice 😭, please let me know how it is?
please ignore typos😳
Luv,
Priti



Edited by pritiyerne - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Ressi res!
Mein aagae🤗

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Prriiittiii...!!!🤗🤗🤗
Wht an update yaar...so so loved it!
Was hell beautiful...full of lovey dovey Shraman emotions and teasings😳
Really loved the way you comprehended their predicaments their new feelings for eachother their venture of their new relationship...everything was penned so Beautifully n damn brilliantly⭐️


Starting from the qoute u use...ohh man tht was an apt one..❤️
Their convo thy had towards their strnage ehaviour was damn lovely...both traveling in the same boat😆...means both are falling for eachother😃...positive sign😳⭐️

Their rules n regulations😆...Sumo madam nay break bhi kar deay😆
So so true...Rules are meant to be broken!

The most cutest rule was tht no shrmana wana wala😛...Sumo is going to have hard time keeping tht promise or shud i say wud herastically fail every God damn time😆...Damn cute yar😳and the loveliest one was...Partners in crime😈

I felt so k ring aisa kaisa gir sakti hai..now got cleared🤓

So Shravan got Pushkar's weak point han...blackmailing n all😆...thts the most fun and irritating part of life...jab blackmail karo tu bara maza ata hai aur jab khud blackmail ho tu terrible😕

Pushkar is a cute tease😆

Oye hoye both the songs u used were apt one...❤️...my most fav one is SubhanAllah❤️...so perfect for Shraman😳

Taporii🤣🤣...wakai ismein tapori wali kya baat hai😆...larkiyan bhi yahi karti hain...handsome hunk dekha nhi k ankhein glue ki tarha ussi par tik jati hain😛😳...ab Namik ki hi example lay lo...Our irresistible Hunk☺️...This part was damn funny and damn cute...loved it!⭐️

Haay...Eti and Ehan...Oh God!❤️...Bundle of sheer adorableness...i soo adore thm..thoz two cute pies...really loved their cute convo❤️...i so wished to pull their cheeks on their cute antics😳

Their phone convo was amazing...both are silly i tell you😛

Exactly truth always crwals out😆...Yay tu Shraman hain jin k sath unhi ki Families nay double cross..aur yay unhein Triple cross karnay chalay...Elope😲😆...Shraman type😃

Ohh you made me remember his dialogue..."Yar tum mjhy ek baat smjhao...yeh pagal panti k duray tumhein regular cycles par atay hain ya kabhi kabar!"...🤣🤣...Thoz days yar😭😭

Shraman planing their Mission Elope n Pushkar ki timing😆

Sab kuch bak dea Nimmo k samnay😕...Shraman so dead😆...ab tu bara maza aay ga😃
Plz Priti do update soon..wil be waiting😳
So loved this Lovely update!
It was hell Beautifully Penned!...specially Shraman Moments
Just loved it!😃



Take Care!
Sunain❤️



Edited by Sunain - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Excellent...
Shravan and sumo are going for court marriage...
Ab kya hoga?
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Posted: 8 years ago
I have a bhel of emotions right now Priti
Post engagement rules 😆

Sumo Breaking them 😳

Shravan breaking them 😉

Pushkar ki situation 😃

Their phone convo❤️

Little kids⭐️

Shravan ki dadi and sumo ke nanu👏😎

Plan of eloping and Pushkars timing🤣

The end where they r now going to hurt their families by their stupidity😭

Update soon na.. and please use google docs... Tum logo ke itne achche writeups delete kyu hote rehte hain yaar...docs is safer for recovery...

P.s. I am not in Tech support 😆although aaj mai aise hi jawab diye ja rahi hoon 😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
Amazing update... Shraman's post engagement rules😆
Eti nd ehan are cuties..Nd nanu's nd Dadi's another master plan..
Waiting for next update
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Posted: 8 years ago
Ressi res
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First of all sooo sorry dear for not commenting earlier... 😕

Lovely lovely update dear...❤️
ShraMa are falling in love slowly without realising it... 😳
Rules thing was damn cute... 😆

Eti n Ehan are soo damn cute... 😳
So adorable 😳

Loved the choice of songs...Perfact❤️
Court marrige that too without telling anyone... 😛 😉
Exited too see what happens next...
Thanks for the pm n cont soon dear... 😊
Loads of Love n 🤗
Nik
Edited by Nik03 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
As always it was superb👏
Thank u
Please continue sooon

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