Only You..... A ShraMan TS - 16/01/2017 - Part 3 - Page 14

Originally posted by: krutish22

Dear zoya,

Hey!

I read both parts. It's beautifully written,

jealous sumo.. Caring shravan...love Confession...

Thank you so much!

Really loved it

Oh yeh!!!

What will shravan do after hearing sumo.. Eagarly waiting for last part..

Let's wait and see...

Do continue

Absolutely...

Originally posted by: vimikrao

Thank you so much for reply for comments...yes we r already friends...that's why u could able sent me the PM...when is the next part dear...

Update soon dear 😛

Originally posted by: pisces17

Hi Zoya,

Hey!!

How do you manage to do this every time yaar...

I honestly don't know...

Surpassing yourself... i am dumbstruck in awe...❤️

Aww man, stop it you 😳

can only say HATS OFF TO YOU...👏👏👏

Thanks ya...

eagerly waiting for the final part...

Won't keep you long...

Originally posted by: an_chau

Hey lady, read both chappies in one go... and all I have to say is "Wow!" Love the intensity of these two pagal lovers...

Hey Anu! Wow ke liye thanks 😉 Intensity is the key!

BTW you deserve one extra Hi5 for making Shravan say: "I'm done. Done trying to win you over. Cause you don't want to be won cause that for you would be loosing. You'd do anything to get back at me and I fear for you. I don't want anything wrong happening to you. In your spite you might not realize when to draw the line. So I'll draw it between the both of us."

Hi5 right back at ya!!!!

You know well how ardently I hated the viciousness of their relationship in the latter phases of the show, and I sure am glad you are writing these updates... Don't ever think we'd get bored of your writing, cuz they r awesome! 😛

I I ma'am, momentary error in judgement... I ain't going anywhere, not soon at least 😆

Hugs,

Anu

Originally posted by: theGoldenGirl

Amazing chapter ❤️

Thank you!

Finally our hero could understand the strength of jealousy trick! Sure it's the most tried but it's an effective formula😉

As far as it works who cares right 😆

Woh gaane sunn kar mujhe padte-padte jealousy ho rhi thi toh humari bechari heroine ka toh bura haal ho rha hoga!

Bechari! Woh kabhi bechari nahi thi🤣

Wow! Aditya received his much deserved slap!

Punch! Yes well deserved!

Loved their convo in the end

Finally she spoke up

Oooh! Shravan is Love.

Dying to meet the Real Shravan Malhotra!

Don't die please...

And never ever think that we can get bored of your works

Never, apologies...

Keep writing!

Absolutely...

Swarnima

Originally posted by: evaviego

What an update...!!! 🤗

Shravan's Tashan Mode ON... 😎

Thanks Eva🤗

Jealous Sumo was 😆

and she surely has got some wit too...she called her Nangi..!!! 🤣

Hahahaha😆

Awesome songs selection Zoya... 😳

Shukriya...

I loved the punch part... ache se kutaaai honi chaiye thi uski... 😉😉😉

Harakten hi pitne wali hoti uski 😆

Finally she confessed...!!!

Oh yeh!!!

The dialogues were apt and absolutely beautifully written... How do you manage to write so well..!!!! 👏

I swear I have no damn clue...

Your writing style is just fab Zoya.. I fall more and more in love with your writings with each new updates. ❤️

Aww man! Thanks a ton EVA!!!

I just cant wait to see how the story unfolds from here...

Me either...

Please do send me a PM 😊

Absolutely will...

Originally posted by: Naamika

Zoya what an amazing update.👏 The way you have described every single detail about shravan's look for sangeet I can totally imagine how handsome he must be looking.Poor jealous sumo but I think i was way more jealous than her

Hahahaha well after all most of us either mentally dating Shravan or married to him 😆

Finally she uttered that three magical words, now without a doubt I can say that shravan will make everything alright.

Yo!

Originally posted by: Deetya123

Wow it was amazing ... plz pm me when u post the last part ...

Originally posted by: kennashreign

This was really good, Zoya! Poor Suman had to succumb to Shravan's ploy. I liked Shyra, she seems cool. And i look forward to the next chapter. Will await your pm. Cheers!