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_anukulgr8

@_anukulgr8

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#61

Hey delta...

M madly in love with this story man...

Its too too good..

Loved all the chappies...

Plz Update soon as I u do always...

Love,

ANU

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laavanyam

@laavanyam

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Posted: 8 years ago

#62

Am eagerly awaiting next part ... Please upload quickly 😊

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Castile2

@Castile2

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Posted: 8 years ago

#63

Nimmo ke aanchal par laanchan!! 🤣

Yaiee!!
Update milega!!

Edited by Castile2 - 8 years ago

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A.Hajnal

@A.Hajnal

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#64

This is Amazing! *speechless*

From the first chapter to the 4th, everything was well-written and I am so glad that I could read it all in one go, nahi toh I would have gone crazy guessing how would you take the story forward, not that now I am not, but still... I loved ShraMan as children, they were everything they needed, teen ShraMan were amazing too, and I loved the fact that this time around in your Story he was able to give her the letter as non of our us other writers have let Shravan do that... 😆 And your Suman is different than the 'Sumo', in fact, it's like she has always been 'Suman'... And her reaction was understandable... Poor girl... This time around it's Shravan who is being unreasonable, aree, at least let the girl come closer and the woo her, cast a spell on her with your charm... But Shravan is after all, Shravan... Never had that guy used his charm and sharp brain to trap her, to make her fall for him...

Can't wait for the next chapter to see how are you planning to take your story forward... Update soon! 😳

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Nik03

@Nik03

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#65

Res 😊
****
Unres
Lovely Update dear...
Finally ShraMan became friends again.. 😊
Loved their convo!!!

Really exited for the next part.. 😊
Love
Nik

Edited by Nik03 - 8 years ago

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vimikrao

@vimikrao

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: deltadawn
AUTHORS NOTE - correction
Hi all,

So I have updated chp 2 which was the only one as I found to mention the 25th anniversary.

So we are now celebrating the 30th anniversary and 25 yrs of Malhotra associates.

Thank you to my two little angels Vin and Arpita for finding the folly which would have brought laanchan on nimmo aunty again.😆

Thanks everyone for appreciating and giving your inputs and for reading the story logically as well 😊

For changing the age diff - I want to keep the age difference but also keep it to a minimum because a greater age difference would lead me to question the volatile character of Shravan in my head. sumo is allowed to do it coz she is 23!

Next part coming up in a few hours.

Don't keep more than 4 or 5 yrs difference between these two... Nehin to Sumo ko apne pati aap aap bolna padega... 🤣

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reshmanair356

@reshmanair356

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#67

Delta. ..sweetheart. ..absolutely in love with your story. ..deep in love😳

Waiting eagerly for it to unfold!!

Are you sure you are new in this game. ..coz you sure write like a pro!!

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Prenik

@Prenik

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#68

Loved it ... awesome update.

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Meera

@Jerry2308

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Posted: 8 years ago

#69

Awesome update... Beautifully written especially the part where sumo starts eating daal to punish her for his pain..

Thanks for the PM

Looking forward to see how shravan is going to make Sumo realize her love for him

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deltadawn

@deltadawn

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: reshmanair356
Delta. ..sweetheart. ..absolutely in love with your story. ..deep in love😳
Waiting eagerly for it to unfold!!
Are you sure you are new in this game. ..coz you sure write like a pro!!

thank you for the kind words Madam. Shuruvaat to aap ki help se hui hai.😃

I am not new to writing.. but definitely new to writing on a forum and writing love stories with many parts and characters into it. I fear that I will lose track of them in between like I did about the age calculations..😕

wish me luck.

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