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Posted: 8 years ago
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I am completely in love with this story😳. am regretting for not finding it even before. Today I got to read this, and the urge within didn't allow me to wait and comment after each chapter instead I was running to read all the four parts one after another. (*Sorry for not being patient*)
you are writing so beautifully. all the characters, their portrayal are so strongly placed. there are many little details that am adoring about this. Like, ramnath's character and his affection towards sumo. Sumo's love for ram and nirmala that she is calling them ma and papa. I loved it how the cute little girl at 3 called him papa. Shravan's care and love right from the beginning when she was still a baby. Sumo was not any kind of bully and was not being selfish AT ALL. She never used shravan at any stage for her own reasons during childhood. The fight due to which they parted is not silly. It makes all sense. Sumo is very young and her fear can be justified. Shravan was in his teens as well, that he could not understand her fear and could not take her rejection. Sumo is pursuing her dreams and she is ambitious as always.

As grown up's sumo fears to express her love because she needs to safeguard her friendship first is valid. But shravan is not ready to take friendzoning again. This plot is really interesting. Now that the parents wanted their marriage, I can't wait to see what happens next.

Hats off for a beautiful SS. 👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
#52
so beautifully penned...
read all parts in one go...
egarly waiting...
loved it...

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Aww poor Suman had never expected this from Shravan. As usual lovely update.thanks for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: ArpitaSingh1806

Vinu that's exactly what I am confused about


Hmm..

Ok... i messed up on a fundamental fact!!!. Ab kya kare..oopsie.. i ll have to go back and change the party plot now!!

All shravan got out of the limited convo with his dad is tht she did not say No... But then she came up and friendzoned him. To shaadi ke baare me she said nothing. He has been waiting for this apology for 10 yrs and also a reply for the same amount of yrs... So imagine yourself in his place.. sorry bola aur fir jaise usne socha ki jo ladki shaadi ke baare me soch rahi hai... Wo kehti hai ki sirf dost hain. He felt like she was lying or rather playing with him and lost temper. Wait for the next part..😆
Edited by deltadawn - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: ArpitaSingh1806

Vinu that's exactly what I am confused about

Hi Arpi...

U found it right... There is some confusion... Let's see will she answer for this or not...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: deltadawn


Hmm..

Ok... i messed up on a fundamental fact!!!. Ab kya kare..oopsie.. i ll have to go back and change the party plot now!!

All shravan got out of the limited convo with his dad is tht she did not say No... But then she came up and friendzoned him. To shaadi ke baare me she said nothing. He has been waiting for this apology for 10 yrs and also a reply for the same amount of yrs... So imagine yourself in his place.. sorry bola aur fir jaise usne socha ki jo ladki shaadi ke baare me soch rahi hai... Wo kehti hai ki sirf dost hain. He felt like she was lying or rather playing with him and lost temper. Wait for the next part..😆

When we can get next part. Waiting? Are there some romance in next part??
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: deltadawn


Hmm..

Ok... i messed up on a fundamental fact!!!. Ab kya kare..oopsie.. i ll have to go back and change the party plot now!!

All shravan got out of the limited convo with his dad is tht she did not say No... But then she came up and friendzoned him. To shaadi ke baare me she said nothing. He has been waiting for this apology for 10 yrs and also a reply for the same amount of yrs... So imagine yourself in his place.. sorry bola aur fir jaise usne socha ki jo ladki shaadi ke baare me soch rahi hai... Wo kehti hai ki sirf dost hain. He felt like she was lying or rather playing with him and lost temper. Wait for the next part..😆


Sorry dear if u felt bad for pointing out of u storyline... But it was creating confusion... That's it...

I know Sumo didn't say no for marriage .. She asked time... May be she thought she will clear all the misunderstanding between Shravan when he accept her apology then she will agree for marriage... This is what I was thinking... she might thought if misunderstanding won't clear... Shravan won't agree for marriage...


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: vimikrao


Sorry dear if u felt bad for pointing out of u storyline... But it was creating confusion... That's it...

I know Sumo didn't say no for marriage .. She asked time... May be she thought she will clear all the misunderstanding between Shravan when he accept her apology then she will agree for marriage... This is what I was thinking... she might thought if misunderstanding won't clear... Shravan won't agree for marriage...



No dear thanks to you and arpita for pointing it out. It looks silly now.. he he let me start my day and I ll put an update on chp 2 with a note. Also next part coming up soon.

Someone asked for romance... Pehle dosti to hone do bachcho. I am old world... Namiks age 😉 we believe in taking it slow ams sensuous...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: deltadawn


No dear thanks to you and arpita for pointing it out. It looks silly now.. he he let me start my day and I ll put an update on chp 2 with a note. Also next part coming up soon.

Someone asked for romance... Pehle dosti to hone do bachcho. I am old world... Namiks age 😉 we believe in taking it slow ams sensuous...


Hey !!

So we can assume the age difference between shravan and sumo, by 5 years. Sumo would be 13, shravan would be 18. Its normal to start college around this age.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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AUTHORS NOTE - correction
Hi all,

So I have updated chp 2 which was the only one as I found to mention the 25th anniversary.

So we are now celebrating the 30th anniversary and 25 yrs of Malhotra associates.

Thank you to my two little angels Vin and Arpita for finding the folly which would have brought laanchan on nimmo aunty again.😆

Thanks everyone for appreciating and giving your inputs and for reading the story logically as well 😊

For changing the age diff - I want to keep the age difference but also keep it to a minimum because a greater age difference would lead me to question the volatile character of Shravan in my head. sumo is allowed to do it coz she is 23!

Next part coming up in a few hours.

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