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deltadawn

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Posted: 8 years ago

#641

Originally posted by: shirlys
Omg they r still fighting...y Shravan lied to Suman that he forgot her bday...feeling sad...miss their love..nic update dr...can't wait for the next one...hope they'll patch up soon.

thanks dear. yes they will soon enough

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deltadawn

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Posted: 8 years ago

#642

Originally posted by: AnuradhaMG
Dear,
I hv been reading ur story n let me tell u its simply amazing...so beautiful...so loving..OMG...I literally feel like laughing n crying with sumo n shravan...u depict their love, their longing for each other so well...I just love to read ur story n I wait eagerly for ur updates.. 👏 ...u r too good at ur work...continue ur fantastic work...n one request...plz don't make our shraman fight for too long... 😊

Regards
Anuradha

thank you so much anuradha. adding you to PM list.. 😊

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deltadawn

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Posted: 8 years ago

#643

Originally posted by: dhanyata
Amazing update. this track is awesome. shravan's anger, hurt and both their disappointments are portrayed beautifully. thank God, Ved seems good guy. otherwise he would create more problems. Sumo has come a long way, I mean she understood she has duties as wife as well and trying to be comfortable around shravan. I think, now shravan should reciprocate. Always angry young man means sumo will be suffering a lot. adi diya are cute. when they were fighting shraman were helping and now they became one to help shraman. I like the way, how you keep the couples balanced to support each other. good work👏

thanks dhanyata😊 you are on point !!

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deltadawn

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Posted: 8 years ago

#644

Originally posted by: Namiksfan
Omg!! This was a real emotional rollercoaster. ..and was amazing too...seriously amazing and made me cry like anything seriously i cried soo bad in ages coz i am not much an emotional person 😭😭😭 please shraman ko sath le ao but i love this track too...these two idiots God! But amazing ...please please update soon ...waiting becomes impossible after such awesome chapters😊
Dolly

oww.. sorry Dolly... but dont be so upset... dukh bhare din bitenge jaldi hi.

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deltadawn

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Posted: 8 years ago

#645

Originally posted by: arshuaar
amazing...
beautiful... loving..
their love, their longing for each other
beautifully penned...
...emotional one...
why can't they always fighting...
thanx for PM...😊
loved it...

thanks dear 😊 what does everyone on the forum call you?

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deltadawn

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Posted: 8 years ago

#646

Originally posted by: Rubyag23
This was such an amazing update...🤗. This ved himmat kaise hui uski sumo ko proppse karne ki... Accha😈 hua puch pada usse...👍🏼. Update was Full of emotions yaar... Well shraman ka patch up karado can't wait... 😭I guess now shravan will go to paris with sumo... Pls update soon... 😛

Paris... lets see if he gets tickets 😆

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deltadawn

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Posted: 8 years ago

#647

Originally posted by: ReebaS
Sorry dear but I wanted to say something... You are making it a typical tv serial where they have thousands of problems loads of misunderstanding but they never speak even they never try make things normal... Sumo typical heroine bn gyi hai sorry heroine nhi vamp.. And shrawan cheeje buri lgti hai toh baat karo na baby bas Robot Ki trh command accepted kerna hai... Be a man bro fight for you... BAs tolerance se kaam nhi chalega I want a typical confrontation not silly fight... Adhi baatein karo gussa Ho k chale jao W*F man... Think about it Delta and sorry if my words hurt you.

😆 sorry dear that I have pushed you over the edge with frustration ...

Baat to sulajhni hi hai..but thik se uljhe to pehle... 😉

Sumo is not a vamp in anyway..she a walking talking girl - reminder - orphaned girl. who has only ever thought the only person she can show some control on as her own is Shravan !!

Shravan is a guy and when they are upset they usually clam up rather than talk about it unless prodded. she tried but was not successful.

big showdown type fight? these two arent the type... an then it would be more like a movie than a story wht say 😉

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deltadawn

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Posted: 8 years ago

#648

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_
They need to talk..!
Nothing but lack of communication. .!
Bol ke lab aazaad hai terey..! #ShraMan! 😳

hayyeee... sach me...

labz azaad hon agar dil se ye jhijhak nikal jaaye

ki kahin iss ki baate sun kar tu ansuni na kar de...

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adityasingh.246

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Posted: 8 years ago

#649

Originally posted by: deltadawn

Nothing like planning,okay .. Exam thodi hai , I read and then comment my POV jo man me aye,without any 2nd thoughts .. 😊 This man really need to work hard,he ruined her happiness and make up before she leaves for Paris otherwise there will be a blast between 2 .. Where is today's update ?😭

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adityasingh.246

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Posted: 8 years ago

#650

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Unres

what is this ? A bouncer ? Why ending it suddenly ? coz u started a new SS ? I mean kal tak toh normal update aara tha aur aaj bomb ku gira diya ... 😭 I have this song in my mind now - "Abhi na jao chodkar ki dil abhi bhara nahi"

But its ur story u gotta decide .. But thanku for giving such a beautiful story for cherishing forever .. 👏

As for today's update .. It was grand .. See as soon she left,again he realised that he shouldn't have hurt her by telling truth on her b'day atleast .. Tubelight .. And these 2 have a telepathic connection, he had that feeling already if smtg was wrong with her ..

I loved how Adi said "tu lad kaise leta hai" and his genuine reasons ..

And Diya stole the light today , finally she gave him much needed piece of mind - Bang on ! all her points were damn right .. And the dialogues were⭐️ Shravan ko batti dene ki zarurat thi bot din se ..

And suspense buildup .. what happened to Sumo .. I got scared too .. And finally Ved-Shravan convo happened , he made him understand that he's a decent guy ..

and bingo ! Adi again played his card well to push ShraMan together .. Waise bhi jab tak koi chod ke chle jae aise dar na ho,tab tak uski kimat samaj ni aati .. Those few minutes were good for them to realise each other's worth .. And the hospital scene was cute , she giving nurses a tough time .. And he made her sit on lap and let nurse give her shot ..

He had not made her bed since 6 weeks .. that much he missed her but won't talk .. dumbo .. Finally they realised that they fought ridiculously .. And they had the much needed convo finally .. And that card was enough to bring the 1000 watt smile back on her face ...

And they did celebrate the V day and her b'day uniquely 😉 Romantic .. Better late than never.

"I have to kiss you in a way that the FRENCH are embarrassed?" this got me🤣

Awesome update it was all in all .. but ending ..

Edited by adityasingh.246 - 8 years ago