Hide n Seek.. Shraman FF - Epilogue 2 page 101 - Page 67

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Posted: 8 years ago
Very beautiful update. Thanks for pm.please don't end this story.i want you continue this story please.edkv ki target end mat karo please.
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Posted: 8 years ago
what dips its a last part 😲 how you can end this lovely FF so soon 😭 yaar plz end mat kar
Waise update was amazing finally they cleared their misunderstanding, i am very happy for them


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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi Dips,
Good update but cut short hogaya...It felt like last episode of EDKV ...Thoda romance banta tha..actually we were waiting for there big night Eagerly .. yeah surf trailer baghayla..
Jaise EDKV ka abrupt end hua waise apna hide & seek ka abrupt end kardiya.. not happy with such abrupt ending dear.. think over it again..
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Posted: 8 years ago
Finally...The problem solved...superb update dr...plzzz don't end hide and seek...it's really close to my heart...lived each and every chapter to the core...plz pretty plz don't end it.
Edited by shirlys - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awww dear Hide n Seek is such a beautiful story..made us all speechless & spellbound with such wonderful amazing realistic simple yet in depth writing...would love to read many more parts yaar...please don't end it so soon...Finally it is your story hun but please do not give abrupt ending bcuz abrupt endings hurt like hell & who would know better than Our EDKV Family...please pleaseee pleaseee continue dear if possible...thank you so much!



Lots of love hugs,
Spandana
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi Priti...

Yeh kya why suddenly u have decided end the story because of last chap everybody not happy with lead characters even me sub badaas nikal di jiske wajah se u decided to end because it looks incomplete plz think na at lest u can drag 5 -6 chap I think... 😭 Till Sumo education finish & go back to India again... And Sumo is going to Paris in logonka honey moon bhi ho jati... Plz think na girl... 😉

Now coming to the story poor Shravan as soon as he came to know Sumo met with an accident uski poori duniya hi ulti pulti ho gayi... Kaise bbag ke gaya itna pyaar hai why u r hiding behind u r ego hurting your self & Sumo... So Shraman started their married life on the day of Valentines day & on the day of Sumo's birthday.!... Isse acha din kya ho sakta hai nayi life shuru karne ke liye... Happy Married Life Shraman... Jagde toh hote hai husband wife ke beech mein but baat karke usse jitni jaldi ho sake usse clear karenge toh life kitni acchi hogi...

Thank you for nice update & Thanx for PM.. 👏

Vinu
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Posted: 8 years ago
Res 😳
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Unres
Mind blowing update dear... 👏
Simply amazing...!!

Shravan felt bad after she left...good for you 😛
I just loved your Diya buddy...❤️
you decided to give her a cold shoulder in the name of "space".
because you think you love her more than she loves you.. hai na?...Sooo true Diya...❤️

Apne beech ke physical distance ko emotional distance me mat badlo... please.
Don't spoil what is to stay for a lifetime for something so trivial....Spellbounded buddy..

Missing Sumo n Worried sick Shravan... 😳
Ah Ved is really a decent guy.. 😛

Accident... 😲 !!!
Shravan's emotions n state are soo beautifully written buddy... 👏
"Tumne meri jaan nikaal ke hi rehnihai ek din......Loved it ❤️

Sumo n her fear of injections... 😆 ..That epic episode ki yaad dila di yaar!! 😭
Shravan n his way of distracting Sumo... 😳

What a prank Adi... 😛 ...Jaan hi nikaal di Shravan ki 😳

Their sorry...❤️
Shravan slept on Sumo's bed coz he couldnt sleep without her...Aww❤️

Finally ShraMan sorted their issues...in such a real ShraMan style...❤️

"Bhagodaness.?.. jab tumhara bachpana jayega"...Ye hona mushkil hai.. 😆
So gift bhi de diya... 😳
And what a proof Sumo... 😳
Ah...They finally took the final step in their relationship...beautiful!!❤️

6 feet 4 inch ki blanket... 😆 😳
Best Friends when turned to spouses sometimes forget that they can still have a conversation......❤️

"I have to kiss you in a way that the FRENCH are embarrassed?"... 😆 😳

Sooo beautifully penned down dear... ❤️
Loved it to the core... 👏

But...But..But!!!!
Last chappii... 😭
No No No no no no...plz plz plz plz!!!
Dont do this buddy ...pretty plz!!

Loads of Love
Nik
😭 😭
Edited by Nik03 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
First of all I am sorry Delta I behave stupid on last part. But after reading your reply I realize sumo was not at all in fault... Now come to this part After reading this all I want to say" I love you yaar seriously" Diya ne mere Mann Ki bat bol di each and every word from Diya was exactly what I feel about their issues. you can call me a hypocrite but seriously my last comment was in anger and this time I am. Seriously serious hats off to you Delta.. You such an amazing writer.keep it up. A big tight hug and a kissi too Ummmaaahhh
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice...emotional..romantic cute update
But why r I ending in hurriedly? We want more...yaar...just understand us.
Thanks for lovely story
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Posted: 8 years ago
What happened dipti??..meri khushi bardaash nahi hui kya jo ab seedhe epilogue par aa gyi😡..some days before only i told you that i was so happy because now there will be 2 stories from your side to roz kisi na kisi ka update to milega..but you took it away from me..bad dipti..
I always write in my comments that i love you for this update..but this time😭😭 .
Edited by Maggot16 - 8 years ago

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