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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: reshmanair356



Lol. ..it's weekend here...and had an official party to attend.😉 ..can't survive in corporate banking if you don't socialise enough. .actually I was always very fond of Shravan the character ya. ..Namik Paul grew on me much later. ..courtesy a periscope chat of his where quite liked the way he thought about certain things.


Agreed Namik outside of Shravan is much smarter looking and talking too.. CVs ki koi kitni bhi side le le they forgot they had to create a DPhil from Oxford.. Oxford ki izzat ka bhajipala kar diya... like I might be doing as well.. less research!! but then they were getting paid for it.🤣




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Posted: 8 years ago
OMG Dips...what a update...i am on shravans side really all abt suman where is he in this...he have already carved for his love for ages now madam choose her family and not to him really man kon samzaye use...
really loved cafe wala scene and "'Don't create a scene. ..either explain without tears or I can live with my assumptions" dialogue was like cherry on cake 👏. I really liked this story soo much
Thanks for the pm...really thankful of that you clear out thought of ending this lovely ff from your mind 🤗

Luv
Priti
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Posted: 8 years ago
Ohhh what an update yaar
Angry man
Suoerb
Sumo is a gadhi .. She is hurting shravans emotions
Ausa kuchh nahi hota ke shaadi ke baad oadhai nahi hota... Maine khud ki hai..
They could have easily get married n she can continue her study in abroad...
Ushe sasural yhidi samhal na hai???
Pagal ladki.. Kar diya na humare ahravan ko gussa
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi Dear! I love your FF, all the twists and turns are so perfect!
I like your latest twist. I can relate to both as well. I know mostly everyone is on shravans side, but I can fully understand what Suman is thinking. I know Im going to be in her position one day and high chance ill act the same. We all know shravan will not let her dreams falter, but I can understand her apprehension.
Edited by -LiveLaughLove- - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Your dialogues are bang on .. loved their reunion and then how shravan became the much needed best friend as he had promised .. The cafe scene and dialogues were 👏 .. But the fact is whenever we read shravan we assume namik playing it and all our heart becomes partial .. 😉 but deep down shravan has never been in sumo's shoes though he is her biggest support system and esp in this story , he has been her guiding angel but since its sumo who has been living in that house and has no one except nanu , after getting so much love from ram and nirmala ,like her own parents,she has a fear of losing them by offending them by her mistakes.Due to her mami's taunts and living like an outsider in a house full of ppl,she's more vulnerable,low confident,over thinking and always puts her family before her own happiness,that may be one reason she wants to repay the debt asap so that she can live happily her married life and think just about her relationship and happiness.. Being a girl most of us will agree that life after marriage does change for a girl and one is bound to get distracted .. So she's not completely wrong over here ..
Being shravan , who's been in love with the girl for so many years and still afar,he wants to makeup for most of the moments lost,and wants to give all the happiness to his girl,and he is right over there.. but he's always had freedom,love,care and confidence to take his decisions ,and he had a loving family,one thing suman craved for and lacked,this is the reason he's lacking to understand sumo's fear of marriage .. I think he needs to show her that she can confide in him and create that confidence in her that she lacks ,to teach her to think about her happiness,and he'll be there to tc if smtg goes wrong ..he needs to fight her mental demons b4 she can become her own self ..
This makes it all the more interesting to see how these two cutiepies tackle each other .. and make peace ..😊❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
Res 😊
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Wonderful update dear...!!
Shravan and Sumo both have their own insecurities and both are hurt..!!
Everything is beautifully penned down dear...!!
Exited for the next part!!
Thanks for the pm 😊
Love
Nik
Edited by Nik03 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Kya lotcha hai yeh... 😡

Misunderstanding never clears between these two... She wanted some space so he stopped all the contacts, now she doesn't want to get married now atleast for 2 yrs, he is not happy with this dicision still agreed... 😕

When ever coffee shop scenes comes I remembered Shravan was waiting there for Sumo till the shop closed... In front of me Namik's face comes he was smiling, looking @ the watch all the time & all... 😭

Ab kya aage hone wala hai yeh dono like this there is no understanding between these two, 😲 like Children fighting, arguing, kuch na huwa toh Sumo will start crying, I m helpless try an understand, I need to give their debt which has been taken by her parents... & all... Shravan is too naughy that's why she scared, she won't be concentrate on her studies... 🤣

In dono ka Tom & Jerry wala fight kab khatam hoga...
Thanx for the PM

Vinu
Edited by vimikrao - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
You know, somehow I can relate to Suman. She, brought up by her nanu, mama and mami. And of course we know how her mami is. If she wants to repay them (not talking about nanu) it's not wrong actually! I don't know, why Shravan is reacting like this. She just wants some time. But it's good right! They can have a long courtship, they can make up those moments, which they had longed for 12 years. Aur agar aisi koi majburi na bhi hoti, then also, I think Sumo is right. At least, every girl should have their own career before they step into matrimony. I don't know deepti, whether you feel like that, or trying to show, Sumo as a selfish girl, who only think about her own priorities! And not to forget, show mein, Suman deliberately avoided Shravan, for whatever the reason is, but here she is not avoiding him, she just wants some time. Love is important for life, but it can't be a whole life.
And next, about your writing, so my Dipu darling, it was amazing, you know why? Because you made your readers think, whether the characters are worthy to support or not. Way to go girl, love you a lot for writing this. Will be waiting for the next part eagerly.

P. S this is my longest comment on any post on IF. So you can understand, how much I liked it! 😉
Edited by Itssanjh - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Loved it... 😊
Ye MUs kab khatam hongi yaar...
Sumo has to think abt her family... Especially abt mami and mama... Shravan should understand...
And Sumo is true... Aagar shaadi Aur MBA ek Saath karegi Toh na shaadi par concentrate kar paayegi na phadaye pe...
Hope Shravu understands...
All in all M juz loving this track... Dono ek dusre ko aache se samaj bhi paayenge...
Update soon...
Aur ek baal I also loved all the before parts... Especially that drunken sumo vala...
Thanks for all the pms..
Update soonish...
Love,
ANU 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awww u always leave me speechless yaar..I mean u have such a beautiful way with words u portray indepth matters with sheer simplicity..wonderful amazing so love it..I re-read this story so many times & it always brings a smile smile through tears...your daily updates are like cherry on the cake..Thank you so much dear!

Lots of love hugs,
Spandana
Edited by sptrno - 8 years ago

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