shackles -two shots (epilogue updated page 15)

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CarpeDiem_365

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Posted: 8 years ago

#111

Absolute bliss!

Now we have a description of happily ever after!!

Confession was beauty ! !

Super see upar!

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crazyparrot

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Posted: 8 years ago

#112

So beautifully penned, loved it👏

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crazyparrot

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Posted: 8 years ago

#113

So beautifully penned, loved it👏

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lavanya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#114

Omg...

Wow...

It was amazing...

Loved it very much...

Aft reading this I felt like I saw a movie...

Hatts of...

Plz do write more..

Luv.,.,.

LavSriya

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Amisha.r

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Posted: 8 years ago

#115

suman's confession...their life's journey...at the end importance of balcony...every thing was just awesome
its great dear and thanks for pm

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vimikrao

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Posted: 8 years ago

#116

Wow Sanj.

Tumne toh young couple se old couple tak bana diya...

It was beautiful...

I just loved this Shreya & Samar ... Yeh dono shraman ke bache the kahi stories mein...

Keep writing dear...

Thanks for the PM

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Reeba shukla

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Posted: 8 years ago

#117

Its lovely yaar looks like a beautiful dream.. Shraman's whole life in form of a beautiful epilogue... I just love this..

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pinky.padda

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Posted: 8 years ago

#118

awesome epilogue

absolutely loved it

superb

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shaggy8

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Posted: 8 years ago

#119

Hey saanj... it was amazing, beautifully penned...
U narrated their whole life so beautifully.
That balcony part was like cherry on the cake...
U r such an amazing writer yaar...
Either it is shackles or destined I enjoyed each and every update...
Hope u write many more stories like this ❤️ 👏