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Hi Sanjh, very well written. Loved it. You are an amazing writer. Very beautifully you covered their lifetime with blissful love. Even Great Grand Dad Shravan was romantic. Loved even him. The story had a dark element but brightness of love over took it. Waiting for much more of your beautiful stories. Good luck. 👍🏼

Originally posted by: anukulgr8

Ressi res... Me first 😆

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UNRESS... Control hi nahi hua.. 😃

Juju... Mah Cutie pie... Mah sweeto... Mah sugary fluff... Luv U sho sho much bae... ❤️

Kya epilogue diya... Mind blowing super se bohot bohot zyada uppar vala... Outstanding..👏 Ravishing... No words more than this yaar... Luv u... 🤗

This was really sweet... Maine pehle Baar shravan ko life ke share shades me padha... Ur writing style is sho best juju... 👏

Finally Sumo confessed... Shayari was soo good... 😊

ShraMan ke bacche... Unke baccho ke bacche... Loved it... Last balcony wala scene was too good... Uss Part ne update ko chaar chand laga Diye... Loved it... ❤️

I love u so much... Do write more... Plz Aur ke TS likhde mere khatir...

Love,

Shona 😳

hey dear...A big round of applause for you..👏

Sanjh...a big hug to u for giving this epilogue 🤗

Originally posted by: reshmanair356

Ohh Saanjh . ...that was so beautiful man . ..Shravan was such a caring husband and I am so glad that Suman melted with time...Reading this story has been such a touching experience . ..but the epilogue has been the icing on the cake..50 blissful years of togetherness . ..what more can we ask for Shraman!!

Originally posted by: dhanyata

beautifully penned, I believe this is the first write up on shraman till they becoming dadu dadi 😃😆

I am really glad that you liked it...

Even when it started with their princess's shaadi, I was shocked Oh My God, shraman growing old. But I was struggling to imagine our Namik and Nikita in that age 😳😛

Even I had hard time to imagine... 😆

It was awesome. Great work !! Pure bliss, the last part where shravan in his 80 age sitting at the balcony thinking about its importance in his life was so touching. I felt like crying at its feels. Khudos !👏

Originally posted by: Namiksfan

Sanjh!❤️ babe thanks a lot for this...i was the one who wanted the epilogue most and i loved it...the day he waited for her ...the way she confessed and how they loved happily ever after again a big thanks...keep writing and come up with something new real soon...something as beautiful as this...

Love,

Dolly

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_

Absolute bliss!

Now we have a description of happily ever after!!

Confession was beauty ! !

Super see upar!

Originally posted by: Vyshnav

So beautifully penned, loved it👏

Originally posted by: amlavs

Omg...

Wow...

It was amazing...

Loved it very much...

Aft reading this I felt like I saw a movie...

Hatts of...

Plz do write more..

Luv.,.,.

LavSriya