Once Again[AU]~A ShraMan FF(PART 10_PG 24)15.02.17

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Dolly Chouhan

@Namiksfan

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#161

That was awesome 👏👏

Bichari urvashi🤣

I loved her sumo mode😎

And their convo...u killed it baby...too good👏👏👏

And the way shravan was flustered omg!!

Update soonish😃

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adityasingh.246

@adityasingh.246

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#162

it was awesome .. sumo - urvashi confrontation was best .. 👏

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Safire

@Safire

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#163

No need to be nervous!!

The entire write-up including Sumo~Urvashi conversation was so nice!!

Loved your writing!!!

👏👏👏

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CarpeDiem_365

@CarpeDiem_365

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#164

The face off..!!😆

Urvashi Malhotra! !...Kya..!! Got me rolling! 🤣

Khushfahmiya!

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priety.priti

@priety.priti

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#165

nice update anu...ahh sumo mode on 👏

urvashi getting into my nerves too 😡

shravan gadha sidhe sidhe nahi bol sakata tha bachha thodi na hai😲 jo kisine bola wo man liya

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Tinna28

@Tinna28

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#166

Nice update anu
Sumo and her tashan
Bechari uarvashi
Pushar and shravan are mindblowing
Plz update soon
Waiting for next 😊

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_anukulgr8

@_anukulgr8

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#167

Originally posted by: Nik03
Res 😳
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Unres
Hey Anu...!!
First of all so sorry for not replying earlier... 😕
Really loved this story...❤️
Shravan hurted Sumo twice in the past that too deeply without her mistake...but Apologised n Suno accepted his friendship...Lovely 😳
Kamini fixed Shravan's angagement with Urvashi without asking his consent...!!
N that Uvashi insulted Sumo...😡
But Sumo ne kya sunaai Urvashi madam ko 😆

Superb writeup bud... 👏
Loved it!!
Thanks for the pm n cont soon
Loads of Love n 🤗
Nik

M so glad that u loved my story Dikshu...!!!
Thank u so much for reading and commenting...!!!
Will continue sooon...
Lods of love to you to sweetie... 🤗
ANU😳

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_anukulgr8

@_anukulgr8

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#168

Originally posted by: vimikrao
Urvashi ki toh band baja di Sumo ne bechari kahan mudhu makkhi ki chat par haat dal di...Apne aap ko katwaneka bahut shauk tha usse...Sumo's Sumoness was love to watch... Shravan & Pushkar were trying hard to control their laugh... Shravan won't deny for this alliance...

Nice update Anu

Thanks for PM

Vinu

glad u liked Sumo ki Sumoness...😳

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Sunain

@Sunain

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#169

Shoonaaa!!!!🤗🤗

arey baba plz jotay mat marna...gussa bhi mat hon...Sorry yar for being this late...mein bhi kya karon jab teri update parnay lagti ya tu phone dead ho jata ya wifi dhoka dy deta aur yeh nhi tu koi kaam ajata😕

Sorry Shona...maffi day do..kan pakar leay mein nay...Shhoorryy...*puppy eyes*

So i have read both last parts in one go...with out any further ado coming to the chaps..

CHAPTER 9:

Shona yakeen mano meray moh mein makhi chali jati agar mein band na karti🤪😆...i had my mouth wide open by the end of this chap...hell shocked...zor ka jhataka wakai zoron say laga😛😆😆

Shravan aur Urvashi ki Shaadi😲😲😲...Suman and Pushkar ki tu smjh aai par Ramnath kay kyun Totaf ur gaaay😃...lagta hai hez with Shraman😳

Becharay Shravan kay surprise ki tu band baj gae...i hope Suman doznt misunderstand it😕

was an amazing Upii⭐️...no dout the twist is a Mindblowing one😆😆

Thank God i still have to read one more chap warna..curiosity wud have had killed me by now😆😆

CHAPER 10:

Shona...u shook me to core...😆😆

Starting from the begining...

I also felt really bad for Sumo...the man she loved to core was having his allianced fixed rite infront of her eyes...must be really hard for her to stay clam.

Plus she was expecting a surprise from him and this faisco has hurt her alot n i guess she wont be leaving Shravan so easily😕

Shravan aur Urvashi ka Joda😲...sonna😲😲...impossible...Shraman are meant to be tu woh ek dosaray k baghair kaisay achay lag saktay hain😈😉

OMG!!...Urvashi is insane...she called him Shravu😲...insulted Sumo a thousand times😲😡...called herself a Malhotra😲😲😲

Paka pitay gi next tine she faces Sumo😆😆

I was so waiting for Suman to turn on her Sumo mode😈😆

And the way Sumo insulted Urvashi was👏👏...bolti band kar di so calledMiss Dehli ki😆😆

Was hell briliantly penned!⭐️

N their Pov's...amazing😳

I so loved and so so enjoyed it⭐️

Full on dhaamaka Pack Update thi ⭐️

Plz plz plz so update soon ant wait to knw how Shravan is going to tackle this prob..so much fun ahead😃

Super duper excited😉