Once Again[AU]~A ShraMan FF(PART 10_PG 24)15.02.17 - Page 14

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Sunain

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Shona!!!🤗
Jaanu..!!!!!🤗

Inna chotu sa update...😔...koi nhi...nxt one long hoga...compensation haina😉😆
Haay..Imagining Shravan digging into a bowl full of Halwa and devoring it...so lovely
Ya na...I too loved penning that...
Pushkar is so rite...Bhai ki train abhi bhi track par nhi ae sahi say..thoray dhakay ki zarorat hai...but seems like Shravan is planning a surprise for Suman...intresting😃
Damn interesting..!!!!😉
...agar Propose karnay ka plan hai tu Train smjho track par hi hai...bas ek yes aur station par😉😆.
Gaddi na bhaga soniyo...😆
..to start a new lovely journey😳
Ab party mein kya honay wala hai...cant wait to knw tht...eagerly waiting for you to blast the bomb😆...plant tu kar hi dea hai😛😉
Yup..!!!😃
Loved it Shona!
Thank u sho much bae...⭐️
Shravan's childish act was Brilliantly penned!⭐️
N the way Suman was adoring him was❤️
Gald u liked it jaanu..!!1
will be waiting
Till thn...best of luck for ur studies👍🏼..n..
Thanks darlo..
❤️



Take Care!
Naina❤️


@red Thank u for ur lovely comment baby...
LUV YA...
Shona😳😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: LubSha

Hey Anu,
So glad you're back and back with a bang. Short but very sweet update. Good that everything's going great but Shravan's mom has something else in mind. I hope there is no heart break for Sumo. 😊

Lubna.


Thank u sho much Lub..!!!!
Shravan ke mom...Hmm..😆
Heart break ke baare me kuch keh nahio sakti par haasi ke maare aapka sofa zaroor break hoga..😆
Sorry for the short update..
Glad u liked it..!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Edkvforever

Nice update
Loved Bhukkad Shravan...shraman spend all week...waiting for what special in party?
Update soon dear


Glad u liked it dea..!!
Will update soonish...
ANU😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: vimikrao

Everything sorted between Shraman... 😛Sumo completed her portrait... Bhukkad hogging over Sev ki Sabzi & Moong Dal Ka Halwa... 😉 Waiting for party... Is he gonna propose her.!..!!!


Thank you for update 👏

Tu bi na Anu story padhne ke baad PM bejthi hai... 😆Any ways thanx for PM 👏


Vinu


U r welcum bae...and m glad u liked it...
Was waiting for ur comment...!!!
Sorry for that PM fiasco...maine raat ko he bheja tha but I clicked send and electricity went off..Aur phir shaam ko dekha toh aaplogo mila he nahi tha..😕😕
Will update soonish...
ANU😃
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: arshuaar

beautifully penned...
loved it...


Thank u sho much...😃
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: deltadawn

Ha ha bhukkad is back!!

Yaar super cute update but made we wish for more... Portrait banate time keshraman moments...

Pori story se expectations badh rahe hain hamare aur updates mini skirt ki size ke hote ja rahe hain tumhare...😆

Please write more shraman shramanness...


Glad u liked it...Meko laga tha ke chotu sa hai toh sab mujhpe sadenge par this was totally opposite...😆.
@bold🤣🤣🤣Kahihi ha deepti..!!!
Will get Shramanness...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Namiksfan

Anuuu...so sorry to bhi this late baby...so so sorry

Coming to the chappy...this a amazing...these two are such sweethearts

This was beautifully penned 👏👏👏

Try to update soon😊



Its ok baby..!!!😊
Glad u liked it...Thank u sho much bae...
Will try my best to update soon..!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: pinky.padda

superb update
absolutely loved it
continue soon


TYSM pinky..!!
Will update asap
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: girlgunjan

How could I miss reading this FF ???

This was really really good!!
Read all parts in one go...
firstly, I was like, why suman is so rude? Then I was like, no, she's right!! Shravan is at fault here. I loved that he was guilty about what he did to her. His constant apologies & then finally sumo forgave him. That was cute 😳
Their night-out together...bhukkad shravan & bhukkadi suman 😆
But, hopefully, this Urvashi will not be a villian in ShraMans love story!!
Ready for the twists & turns ahead...update sooner dear 🤗


Its ok g gunjan...Atleast padha toh sahi..!!!
M sooo glad that u liked it...Khup anand zala g...
Will try to update asap..!!!
Till then..,
ANU 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hola people..!!!M back..back with a dhamaka...SO won't talk much and head towards the update...ENJOY😃

PART 9

The next day Shravan Pushkar and Nirmala left for Mumbai...Sumo was feeling nervous but shrugged that feeling off and started working with her daily chores..her daily routine...Shravan s halat was the same..He used to check Sumo's FB 100 times a day juz to see whether she online...same was for whatsapp...

That did not go unnoticed from Pushkar...he just waited for a perfect time to bring Sumo's topic up...

Morning after 7 days since they came back from TK...

MM Breakfast table

"Toh papa all set for parso ke party??"

"Ha beta...all set...Tumne apni invities bhej di na??"

"Nahi papa...mere koi dost yaha thodui na hai...Sirf Sumo.."

"Haa beta...maine Priya ko subah he call karke bata diya hai..."Nirmala said emerging from the kitchen

"Thik hai maa"Shravan said reluctantly...

He had a plan to call her personally ...He calls her..

"Hello..??"

"Hmm..Bolo.."Sumo set on her bed with a pillow on her folded legs..

"Busy ho??"

"Nahi...bolo na..."

"Tumhe party ka invitation aaya na..??"

"Ha..Maa ne bataya Aunty ka phone aaya tha subah..."

"Hmm..Toh gift ready hai na...?"

"Kakba..Tumhe toh dikhaya than a..."

"Ha...Suno..aache se ready hoke aana..."Shravan said blushing slightly...

Sumo was not used of this...She blushed unknowingly...

"Kyu??"

"Tumhare liye ek surprise hai..."

"Kya??"

"Sumoo...SURPRISE hai...abhi tohdi na bata sakta hu..."

"Ha...ok.."

"Aaogi na.."

"ha aaungi..."

"Pakka?"

"Ha baba pakka...!!"

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The anniversary day dawned..Pushkar was given the task to bring Sumo and priya to MM ..Pushkar reached TK to find Priya sitting on the couch and reading a newspaper..

"Aunty..??Aap ready nahi huye??"

"Who beta...Mai actually nahi aa rahi.."

"Kya??Kyun??"

"Who beta PCT ka thoda kaam hai..accounts check karne hai...aur pairo mey thoda sa dard bhi hai..."

"Aur Sumo??"

"Woh...Dekho...aa gayi..."

Sumo stepped out of the room as both of them watched her as a dream...

"Kya hua??Aise kyu dekh rahe ho..??"

"Kuch nahi...Beta tut oh aaj badi khoobsurat lag rahi ahi...Bhagwan akre tu hamesha aise he khush rahe..."Priya kissed her forehead..Sumo smiled

"Gift le liya na??"

"Haa maa..."

"Chale??Bye aunty..."

"Bye maa..."

In car..

"Vakai Sumo..tu aaj jhaali se khoobsurat kag rahi ahi..."

Sumo whacked him...

"Aare...Kyat u...taarif karu toh maarti hai..na karu toh maarti hai..."Pushkar pouted..

"Chod wo sab...ye bata tu kyu aaya...Shravan aane vala tha na??"

"Woh actually bahiya ko kuch zaarori kaam aa gaya tha...issiliye mujhe bheja..."

"Ooh..."

"Toh..ready for surprise??"

"Tumhe surprise kya hai ye pata hai?"Sumo asked curiously...

"Nahi...bhai ne nahi bataya...bas kaha ke surprise hai..."

"Pata nahi kya hoga..."

"Don't worry sumo...mera bhai hai woh...kuch aach he hoga..."Pushkar praised himself...

Sumo just giggled and stared out of the window...

MM

"So my dear friends and collagues.."Ramnath started "Thank u so much for being here and humare khushi me shamil hone ke liye...aur iss sham ko chaar chand lagan eke liye..."

Nirmala ascended the stage

"Aur iss sahm ko aur khaas banana ke liye mai ek announcement karna chahti hu..."

"Jiji aagar aap bura na maano toh mai ke khush khabar sabko batau??"

"Zaroor kamini.."Kamini came on the stageas Nirmala and ramnar=th steeped down...

"Aaj ke sham bohot khaas hai aur jaisa ke jiji ne kaha iss sham ko aur khaas banana ke liye mai ek announcement karna chahti hu..Shravan puttar..zara itthe aayiyo.."Shravan came up on the dias with a completely amused face..."Urvashi beta..."Kamini said and she came up...

"Aaplog toh Shravan ko jaante he hai...Raamnath bhaisab ka eklauta beta aur humare MM ke shaan...Aur ye hai Urvashi...Manhotras ke hone vaali bahu..Shravan ke hone vaali biwi..."Everyone clapped and hooted...Shravan watched kamini as if looking at a dianosour ...his world stoped and then he saw three faces which were totally white...Raamnath, Pushkar and ...SUMO..

So guys...HOW WAS IT..???? Hope u'all liked it...Ignore the typos plz
Do let me know through the comments and likes...
Even do tell if u'all are disappointed...AND...ABHI TOH PARTY SHURU HUI HAI..!!!!

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