Aj Jaane Ki Zidd Na Karo - A ShraMan OS - Page 11

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

well written..👏

Originally posted by: vimikrao

Zoya... What an emotional part...

But Shravan died that part I didn't like... Because I can't see him dying...

No issues... No one wants the main lead dead.. It's just a story...

Aman, Ammar, Ammara cute they are

Agreed!

Keep writing...

Sure...

But happy endwala

Can't promise that.. Depends on the story😛

Thank you

NO thank you!

Originally posted by: Safire

Undoubtedly. It was a pat on your back👏

Originally posted by: Perpetuity

This is always on the first page. It's so tempting yaar 😭

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_

@blue...you have given words to my thoughts/feelings ...🤗

@Pink...you deserve every bit of it...👏

Originally posted by: devilaonmoon

Hey!

How blind of me to not see that the ending has been already posted.

🤓

Hahaha.. Galti sab se ho jaati hai😆

Forgive me for only reading the happy ending, because I don't have the heart to read a sad ending for Shraman. 😭

Oh Lara! Forgiven... Hence the choice.. I knew not many would like to see a not so happy ending for our lovelies... 😳

And I absolutely liked the happy ending sooo much.

Yey

It was a "aww" moment when Suman went back and heard Shravan wailing. Also, how she took matters to her own hands not caring about Ramnath Rakshas and other things... 👏 claps for that.

Shukriya!!

Will be waiting to read more. You justify both Shravan and Suman so well, that's the fact I love the most from your stories.

Oh man! Now that's what I call a compliment... Coming from you this means a lot to me🤗

Love,🤗

Lara.

Love back❤️

Originally posted by: Pravas007

Can you continue the happy ending part so that we will know how they convince everyone for their marriage

Originally posted by: orion23

<font color="#cc3300">Aye!</font>

<font color="#cc3300">Go study!</font>

<font color="#cc3300">Bring it back to the first page once exams are done!</font>

Originally posted by: Perpetuity

Exam ki preparation ke toh kya kehne hai. Parso practical exam hai and I got a deep cut on my thumb