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Posted: 8 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: anonymousanju

so cute it was dollu ...extra romantic hubby...lol...he was teaching her to control her hormones n now he's become a five yr old kid ..n pushkie...he's such a tease...how shraman said in unison to tujhe kya .. lol...n how sumo replied that you're making us bade papa n maa in a month lol...n ha yar sumo is to too much caring ...wakai me hmare Mr malhotra is very lucky :-p n finally he discharged...yay... n adi arrgghh...tigress sumo she's cute... n in room shravu is being extra romantic ;) their passionate kiss n bath lol...amazing n who the hell was behind all these?? dollu suspense create kr dia :( pls update next part soon dear :) thanks for pm :)


Awieee anju tere comment ka hi wait kar rhi thi.. .thanku soo much...will try to update soon...and pm was a must
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Posted: 8 years ago
#82

😉😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
#83
Amazing chappy dea...Luv u..❤️Ye jarror aditya ka kaam hoga...ya verma ka ya phir kosla...maine toh CID me hona chahiye...😆naughty shravu was cute😃nahadhokar rea\dy...mauke par chauka nahi chakka...luved the chappy...updatew soonish..😊
Luv,
ANU😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#84
Superb update dear..
Doubt on adi..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: anukulgr8

Amazing chappy dea...Luv u..❤️Ye jarror aditya ka kaam hoga...ya verma ka ya phir kosla...maine toh CID me hona chahiye...😆naughty shravu was cute😃nahadhokar rea\dy...mauke par chauka nahi chakka...luved the chappy...updatew soonish..😊
Luv,
ANU😳


Hey ...u're quite a guesser😉 srsly u should be in CID and thanks a lot...will try to update tmrw😛😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: _Eternity_

Superb update dear..
Doubt on adi..


Thanks and keep doubting😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
#87
Excellent update dolly
curious to know who is behind accident
Update soon
Thanks for PM
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Posted: 8 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: krutish22

Excellent update dolly
curious to know who is behind accident
Update soon
Thanks for PM


Thanks 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
#89
A big the nd to all of you who appreciated my story and supported me...i relived all my edkv days...sorry to keep you waiting. ..so here is the last chapter

Chapter-5

Ram: jaldi btao kiske kehne pe kiya ye sab?

Rakesh: mujhe uska nam nhi pata

*suddenly aditya enters*

Adi: sahi sahi bta de varnadekh lena Teri biwi or 5 sal ki beti mere pas h

Rakesh: unhe kuch mat karna pls..mujhe sach me unka nam nhi janta

Commissioner: uska huliya bata

Rakesh: ek choti height ka admi tha paan kha rha tha or yellow colour k scooter pe aya tha

Sumo: i am sure ye gogol tha khosla ka assistance

Commissioner: khosla kon h?

Sumo: sir, shravan ne khosla ke opposite case jeeta tha or jail jane k pehle vo shravan ko dhamki de k gaya tha vo ek builder h

Commissioner calls someone and says him to take out khosla's record

Comm: Mr. Malhotra rajendar khosla 5 din pehle jail se chuta h

Sumo: i am sure ye sab usi ne kiya h


Commissioner calls his assistant and tells him to find the location of khosla and tells him to search for him and leaves with Rakesh and his team

Aditya was also leaving when suddenly sumo stops him

Sumo: thanks tumne hamare liye jo kuch bhikiya h uske liye

Adi: thanks ki koi zaroorat nhi h...ye sab me out of guilt kar rha hu

Adi leaves and everyone go to their rooms

Shravan is lying on the bed and is thinking something and sumo comes with food

Sumo: chalo khana kha lo

Shr: tum khila do

Sumo: ao chote bache betho khilati hu

Shravan sits up and sumo is feeding him and suddenly he starts taking a bite

Sumo: kya kar rhe ho me khila rhi hu naa?

Shr: mujhe khila rhi ho par khud nhi kha rhi na...lo ye khao

Sumo eats the bite and is seeing him lovingly

Shr: ese mat dekho mujhe bohot bhukh lagi h

Sumo: mere tumhe pyaar se dekhne me or tumhare bhook lagne me kya relation h??

Shr: acha madam? Yaad h naa uss din kya hua tha

*flashback*

Shravan is sitting on his table and studying a case suddenly comes there and sits on the chair near and is seeing him lovingly

Shr: kya hua?

Sumo: kuch nhi bas dekh rhi hu ki mera chashmish aj bhi kitna padhaku h

Shr: acha ji?

Sumo: haan ji

Shr continues his work

After some time sumo shifts her chair near him and starts playing with his prickly beard by tracing his jawline

Shr: kya kar rhi ho sumo?

Sumo: ab tumhare pas to mere liye time h nhi

Shr: acha beta abhi dikhata hu

Shravan gets up from his chair and moves toward sumo she starts moving back towards the closet he gets near her that their chests touch and she starts breathing heavily he traced her lower lip with his thumb and fuse their lips together they kiss for a long time before shravan's hand reach at the back of her kurta and his looks into her eyes looking for permission and she smiles as if giving him all the permissions he wanted

They consummate their marriage

*flashback ends*

Sumo blushes

Shr: aj dekho kitna blush kar rhi ho us din mujhpe kesa attack kiya tha

Sumo: ab tum to ho hi fattu...kisi ko to first move lena padta naa

They both laugh

Ramnath calls for shravan and sumo

Ram: commissioner khosla ko le a rha h

Sumo makes and angry face and shravan holds her hand reassuringly

Commissioner enters with khosla

Commissioner: ye vese to apna jurm kabool nhi kar rha tha par 5-6 dande khane ke baad sab ugal diya isne. ...to Mr. Malhotra apke accident k piche is he ka haath h

Nirmala: commissioner sahab ise jail me daliye or jitne charges laga sakteh lagaiye

Ram: ha or iske khilaf case me ladunga

Shr: ab to gaya beta tu khosla

Everyone laughs

Sumo gets up and slaps khosla

Sumo: pichli baar izzat se samjhaya tha samajh nhi aya naa?... ek baat kaan khol k sum le khosla mere shravan ko jo nuksan phochaega uski me esi 12 bajaungi ki zindagi bhar yaad rakhega

Shravan sees her proudly

Pushkar: bhaiya chaliye hospital aj apka plaster utarne vala h naa

Suddenly sumo gets up and rushes towards their room...Everyone is confused...shravan starts following her.

Pushkar: wah yar bhaiya ap to bina support k chal pa rhe h

Shr: yes chote i am perfectly fine

Shravan enters room and sumo comes out of the washroom

Shr: tum thik ho na? Kya hua tumhe? Yu achanak kyu uth k a gyi? Kuch to bolo sumo

Sumo: tum kuch bolne doge to bolungi naa

She comes and hugs shravan and kisses him on his chest just above his heart

Shr: kuch bolo pls tum mujhe confuse kar rhi ho

Sumo: Mr. Shravan malhotra ab tumhare saath saath mujhe ek or bache ko sambhalna padega...meri problem badh gyi

Shr excitedly: matlab tum...

Sumo: ha budhu tum baap banne vale ho i am pregnant. ...

Shravan hugs her tightly

Shr: thanku sumo mujhe meri zindagi ka best gift dene k liye

Sumo: chalo is plaster se chutkara nhi pana h?

They go to hospital and shravan's plaster gets removed and sumo's checkups are done and doctor prescribed her medicines

They come home and shravan gathers everyone in the drawing room

Lalaji: shravan yha ese kyu bulaya h?

Khush khabri dene ke liye

Everyone : kya

Shr:preeti or pushkar k bache ko apne saath khelna vala ghar me koi milne vala h

Pushkar: matlab bhaiya sumo...

Shr: ha chote

Everyone congratulates them

Nirmala: finally tune meri icha puri kar di thanku beta...and hugs sumo

Shr: dekho maa to abhi se meko bhul gyi (makes a sad face)

Everyone laughs and sumo, shravan, nirmala and ramnath have a happy family hug...

Vandy makes everyone eats sweets

Lalaji: jao ab tum Dono rest karo

Shravan picks sumo up while climbing up stairs

Sumo: kya kar rhe ho?

Shr: pehle tumne mera bojh uthaya. ..mujhe sambhal...ab meri baari h...i will be always right by your side..

Sumo hugs him lovingly and says ...i will also be always right by your side whatever happens

Zindagi asan ho jaati h agar dukh me..khushiyo me saath dene vala koi ho. ..agar koi hamesha ho right by your side...

THE END
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Posted: 8 years ago
#90
Awesome end👏 and this line "Zindagi asan ho jaati h agar dukh me..khushiyo me saath dene vala koi ho. ..agar koi hamesha ho right by your side..." was amazing!

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