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Posted: 8 years ago
#61
amazing...
beutifully written...
Shraman...

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Posted: 8 years ago
#62
Arghh is Aditya ko aur koi kaam danda nehin hai kyaa... Kyoun peeche pada hai in dono ki... Uski to band bajani padegi... Sumo was right he has be punched on his face... 😡

Shravan was too naughty he can't control his harmones hospital bed pe bhi usse romance karni hai... Mauke pe chauka mara... Emotional blackmail kar ke ... Lambu ne... 😉

Update soon
Edited by vimikrao - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hello guys i am really not happy with this because i wrote 2 times in 2 hours bcoz first time it got deleted so tell me if you like itchapter-4
morning time suman is feeding shravan breakfast and pushkar is sitting on hospital chair..

p:sumo bhaiya ka per fracture hua h haath nhi

both together:tujhe kya problem h?

they see towards each other and they 3 laugh

p:wah! bhaiya kya kismat h apki!

shr: vo to h

sumo:tu itna kyu jal rha h tere paas bhi to preeti h..

p:vo bilkul bhi romantic nhi h tune kuch nhi sikhaya use

shr: acha beta vo to dikhta h shaadi k 1 mahine baad tu hume badi mummy or bade papa bana rha h

they both laugh and pushkar blushes

suddenly doctor enters

doc:mr. malhotra how are you?

shr: i am fine doctor

doc: sari dawaiya khai apne?

shravan looks towards suman and smiles and says yes doctor

nurse:vese mr.malhotra ap bohot lucky h apko itni caring wife mili h itna khayal rakhti h apka

shr:vo to me hu thnku mam

sumo blushes

doctor does some checkups and says ab ap bilkul thik h u can be discharged pushkar leaves with the doctor for the paperwork

shr: happy wifey? me finally ghar a ha hu?

sumo: very happy hubby

theybtake shravan home and nirmala does the arti

p:dekho dekho maa ka pyaar

all laugh ...they are sitting in the drawing room and chatting

suddenly aditya enters

sumo:tu yaha kya kar rha h?

adi:meri baat to sunlo

sumo:ek baat kan khol k sun le adi agar ye ye sab tune kiya h na to aditya ahuja chodungi nhi me tujhe

adi: jab shravan ka accident hua tab me vhi tha ma se baat kar rha tha mene truck ka number note kar liya h...this may help you

all are shocked

ramnath calls the commisioner and gives him the details..

nirmala: you guys go to your room and rest

sumo carries shravan alone towards their room

pushkar: dekho dekho hamari sumo wrestler ko

shr:chup kar pushkar

she lys shravan on the bed and says

sumo:me abhi ati hu

shr: kaha ja rhi ho?

sumo:tumhare liye kuch khane ko lane

shr:par mujhe to kuch or chahiye

sumo: kya?

shr: tum and pulls him towards him and she fals on his chest

sumo: kya kar rhe ho? lagi h na..dard hoga

shr: jab tum paas hoti ho to oi dard nhi hota...i love you sumo

sumo: i love you too

they kiss passionately

sumo:aj ka quota pura ho gya h ab dawai chup chap kha lena

shr:ye us deal me involved nhi h

sumo:shravan ab chodo mujhe... me tumhare chakkar me 3 din se nahayi nahi hu

shr: itna drama kyu kar rhi ho...me bhi to nhi nahaya

sumo: for your kind information mr.malhotra fracture apko hua h mujhe nhi... me to isliye nhi naha
payi kyuki mera extra romantic pati jo chot lagne par 4 saal ke bachche se bhi zyada chota ho jata h
mujhe apne se ek minute k liye bhi door nhi jane de rha tha

sr: yha mujhe lagi h or tumhe nahane ki padi h

sumo: shravan jane do naa

shr: jao nhi chalo bolo janeman me bhi nhi nahaya hu

sumo: (blushing) to me kya karu?

shr: me kya karu matlab mujhe nehlao or ready karo...bimar pati ki itni seva to banti h

sumo: bimar se zyada tum chalu ho...bas mauke ka fayda uthane keh do

sumo bathes him and gets him ready

shravan is sitting in front of mirror and sumo is combing his hair

shr: vese to me hu hi handsome par aj kuch zyada hi handsome lag rha hu

sumo: or vo kyu?

shr: aj meri bautiful wifey ne jo ready kiya h mujhe

and pulls sumo closer...suddenly they hear sound coming from downstairs

they both go downstairs...

shr: ye sab kya ho rha h or ye kon h? he points towards a man who is standing and 2 police men are holding him)

commisioner: mr. malhotra ye us truck ka driver h jisse apka accident hua tha or ye qubool karta h ki ye sab isne jaan bujh kar kiya

that man: mera naam rakesh h or ye sab mene khud se nhi.. kisi ke kehne par kiya

everyone: kiske?

TO BE CONTINUED...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#64
This has to be the motormouth! Nahin sudhrega yeh! But I liked chalu shravan! show me to kuch nahin mila dekhne ko... 😡 I am the first one to comment! 🥳
Edited by Sb1185 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#65
Haha...Adi babu...planning...😲
I know it's u...😆
Sharavu ka to fayeda hi how gaya . ..blessing in accident 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
#66
Read 3 and 4 parts together. Awesome and romantic too.hmm hospital romance...Pushkar is cute. Adi devil is back.i feel its his plan. Update soon.
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
#67
must b ramnath or kamini chachi
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Posted: 8 years ago
#68
Wow...it's nice...
Shravan tho bahut romantic hubby yar..poor sumo...
Loved the scene..
And who did the accident ??
Plz pm me...
LavSriya..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#69
shravan is sooo cute, adorable...their convo so good.
Don't tell us , truck driver is going to point sumo😲 may be aditya's chaal...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#70
I think Aditya is a real culprit but blame may be Sumo pe aaye

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