Right by your side-shraman SS (ch5 updated P13 )

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hello guys i am a silent reader in this forum and first time tried writing a TS.. (actually this was sypposed to be os bit i decided to tirn it into a TS) i have written an os THE NIGHT FIGHT give it read if you have'nt so coming to the story..

Intro of the story...The story starts from shraman are leading a happy life together but they haven't still sorted up with aditya..

Shravan was walking on a road talking with sumo in on phone

Shr: hy baby kya kar rhi ho?
Sumo: kuch nhi yar ye preeta ko kuch nhi ata sare clients mujhe personally handle karne padte i am soo tired.
Shr:ghar ajao we'll relax together *smirks*
Sumo: tumhe romance ke alava kuch nhi sujhta naa?
Shr: ab jis insaan ki biw iitniii khubsoorat ho or use itne papad belne ke baad or 12 saal mehnat karne ke baad mili ho uska kuch or sochne ka chance banta h kya?
Sumo: jab dekho tab flirting or koi kam nhi h Mr. Malhotra?
Shr: he par apse important nhi Mrs. Malhotra
Sumo: shravan abhi jao and do some work
Shr: u want me to go (he makes a sad face)
Sumo: yes buddhu i want u to go and do some work

*suddenly a crash sound is heard and shravan says sumo..sumo..*

Sumo: shravan kya hua tumhe?
*no reply*
Sumo runs to her car and starts searching shravan and finds him lying on the road and is hurt badly..blood is flowing all over his body..

Sumo calls ambulance and rushes him to hospital...

Thanks for bearing me guys a i know i am really bad at writing and worst at updates but I'll try to update soon

Pls don't throw tomatoes,eggs and chappals (are bhai iam a new member ese swagat karoge?)😉😆

Pm me if you want a pm next time

~Dolly chouhan (you can call me doll,dolly, dollu anything)😉

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Buddy my account for a pm next time😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Interesting.,.. flirting shravan is really cute... hope u'll continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hmm.. Sharvan ka accident 😭, I bet sumo ne jo last main kaha use Zarur regret karegi, yaar starting main hi hint De diya adi ne karaya na, yeah Sab?
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jerry2308

Interesting.,.. flirting shravan is really cute... hope u'll continue soon


He definitely is very cute! I'll try me best to update by tommorow
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: jesi15

Awesome story

Update soon


Thanku I'll update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_

Nice...

Update soonish...


Thanks and i will
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: ArpitaSingh1806

Hmm.. Sharvan ka accident 😭, I bet sumo ne jo last main kaha use Zarur regret karegi, yaar starting main hi hint De diya adi ne karaya na, yeah Sab?


Sorry yar i really didn't wanted to but it came that way..but more mystries involved..wait and watch😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey dolly...nice plot.awesum story.👏..do update soon..n shravan was really cute...
Anu😊..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Dollu dear, nice start!!! I want to see how the story unfolds!!!! Please update soon!!!

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