Right by your side-shraman SS (ch5 updated P13 ) - Page 10

Originally posted by: Vyshnav

Awesome end👏 and this line "Zindagi asan ho jaati h agar dukh me..khushiyo me saath dene vala koi ho. ..agar koi hamesha ho right by your side..." was amazing!

Originally posted by: anukulgr8

Bhai waah... Kya Update hai... Best chappy dea.. 👏

Meko Toh pehle se hi lag raha tha ke khosla he hoga... Yaay.. I was right... Aaj Toh mere saare predictions saach ho rahe hai...

Sumo ne thappad mara.. Yes Aab jagi hamari sherni... 😆

Last line was really awsum n so so true👏

Aur good news bhi diya sumo ne... Bhai waah.. Is vajah se Toh chappy Mey chaar chand lag gaye... The Perfect Ending 👏

To summarise, it it was a fantabolous update n I would really love to read more from u...

All the best dea... For agla SS 😉

Love,

ANU😳

Originally posted by: anonymousanju

dollu ...it was amazing...when I read guglo's name I started rolling on my bed ...I was laughing like a maniac n my di was looking at me like are you okay or have gone mad?? hilarious it was dollu ...I was doubting adi n yha to chota sa yellow vespa p ghumta guglu nikla. ...funniest it was... n then khosla ni sudhrega...kutte ki doom, tedhi ki tedhi ... n adi ko to u made hero ;) but for me it always will be shravu :-p n then sumo slapping khosla...lol...n how shravu held sumo's wrist when sumo heard its khosla behind all this...hehe... n then when sumo ran out suddenly I felt like kahin she's pregnent to ni n I was right...finally shravu ka plaster cut...sumo is pregnent news announced...everyone too happy... n the shraman feeding each other part was so so adorable...n the flashback ...omg I'm blushing ...how sumo said you don't have time for me n how shravu said really n pinned her to closet ...kissed her n they made love...how he said you attacked me that night n ur blushing now...lol n sumo ka reply anyone had to take charge so I did...rofl...she's tigress really...it ended :( I thought there will be few more parts...but loved the way you ended it...will wait for ur pm...please write soon on shraman :) love u my dear...n last me right by your side dialog aww it was ..so lovely n beautiful...loved that especially...:*

Originally posted by: Sb1185

Goglu!!! Kya update hai!👏 we all thought it was Aditya! Natak Kar raha tha! Excellent work! Try to write more. Unexpected endings Dena sabki bass ki baat nahin! U did that so beautifully! 👏 thank for the pm. Much love. 🤗

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_

Amazing story...👍🏼