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priety.priti

@priety.priti

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1061

Res😊

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okay so coming to part 2

this is new twist i mean i can understand what malhotras done is wrong shravan should have told her 😕, i mean when all this happened they dont know sumo so they have whats best for their company

but sumo is also true i mean her pov is also correct whenever she wanted to make everything correct he pushed him , but sumo thoda jyada bol gayi what i feel 😳

poor shravan how happy he was k sumo have forgive him but you made a sharp U turn baby again all happiness snatched from him in a sec he lost it😭

aditya ki to ab khair nahi hai 😲 that bast**d need pay for what mess he have created 😡 and sharavan will make sure on that i guess

shravan need to imprison in room his love to save her so bad 😭

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lavanya

@amlavs

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1062

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Wat an intense update...

Poor ShraMan...

Girl.,. I feel shravan kinda deserve this for playing with her emotins before...as she said he always took her for granted..

But another fact is tat poor shravan his happiness is vanishing soon...

Adi...cheapo...hope shravan teaches him a good lesson...

Hope all MU ll clear soon...

Lots of love.,.

LavSriya

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sweksha

@sweksha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1063

wow Yrr amazing now shravan in his real form...I love this angry shravan...thanks for pm next part update soon please

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Lubna

@LubnaK786

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#1064

Hey Sanjh,

Boring??? Are you kidding me?? Loved it. So intensely emotional. Every scene and dialogue was just fabulous. So Shravan knew. Your Sumo sure gives Takkar to Shravan. Made for each other but played by destiny. She has a good reason to be upset and Aditya is gonna take advantage of this situation. I really hope Shravan teaches him good lesson. Few punches from my side too.😡

Loved that moment they were together. ❤️ So really hope their differences are cleared up and love wins soon. Now that your exams are over, we can demand another chapter. So Miss Bunny Please update soon...

Lots of Love:

Lubna.

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minho

@minho

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1065

Nice update dear 👏 waiting for next chapter 😊

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vimikrao

@vimikrao

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1066

Kya ho raha hai samaj mein nehin a raha, Shravan's companies driver hit the car on which Sumo's parents were there & Shravan came to know on the day of when he took her to disc. Same time Aditya kidnapped her & he said every thing to her. How will he miss this golden chance to separate them. Shravan ko pehle Aditya ki khabar leni padegi may be after that he may Sumo let go. But after that how he will live without her, poor guy khushi uski zindagi bus todi der ke liye ati hai & again vanish in thin air like it didn't exist.

Beautiful & emotional chap

Vinu

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crazyparrot

@crazyparrot

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1067

Its not at all boring!

Aditya got good chance of seperating Shravan and sumo, but aditya was a nice guy at starting but he eventually became evil!

Shravan now has to deal with ziddi sumo, Shravan life is always like this, happiness will not stay longer!

Hope they will sort out everything soon!

Update soon!

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Spandana

@sptrno

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1068

Awww too painful but intense & beautiful as always dear...Great to have you back hun!

All the best take care

Love,

Spandana

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Tinna28

@Tinna28

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#1069

Hi di !!!
Thanku di for dedicating a chapter to me

Now coming to update
Its too good di 👏
Mixed feeling for shravan
I am angry because he cares abt the insurance and all
But also feeling sad ...sumo fir naraz hoh gayi
😭
But i am angry at ramanath 😡
Har bar kisi na kisi tareeke se villan ban jata hai

But bechari sumo ...firstly she lost her parents and
Also lost her trust on shravan
Loved the dialogue when sumo said
" tab tum mujshe shadi nahi karna chahte
Par rehna chahte hoh "
And shravan action on this giving me goosebumps
And how he calm down her ...mindblowing
And my reaction on shravan action is

Shravan ne sumo ko band kar diya
Feeling bad for sumo
But shravan is also correct
Aditiya will take advantage
Mar sumo shravan sath mein rahenge
That's why iam happy 😛